Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and structured. Try to start with a direct answer, then add a specific example using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy and keep within 5 sentences.

예시: There are few strict rules at my university because we are all adults. However, one rule I remember is that male students are not allowed to wear shorts on campus.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a clearer opinion. Also, correct grammar mistakes and be more specific in your explanation.

예시: I believe it depends on the type of school. For instance, in my hometown, a school for children who had been in prison had many strict rules, which were necessary to help them improve their behaviour.

제안: Your answer is somewhat off-topic and negative, which affects the effectiveness. Try to focus on positive aspects of dedication and avoid unnecessary hesitation. Use linking words to organise your answer and provide specific examples.

예시: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher when I was 11. She was strict about rules like hairstyles and dress code because she wanted us to maintain a professional appearance at school.

제안: Your answer is clear and personal, which is good. To improve, avoid filler words like 'OK' and 'so yeah', and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, try to be more concise.

예시: I prefer fewer rules at school because self-expression was very important to me as a child. For example, I liked wearing black clothes and having long nails, which I could do more freely with fewer restrictions.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more structured and detailed. Avoid repetition and use linking words to explain the teacher's strictness and motivation clearly.

예시: Yes, I had a strict teacher who was very passionate about her job. She set many rules because she wanted all her students to meet high standards.

제안: Your answer is honest but could be improved by correcting grammar and providing clearer reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid contradictions.

예시: I wouldn't like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because managing many children without rules would be difficult. If I were a teacher, I think I would have to be quite strict to maintain order.

× I think it's depends on the concrete school or university because for example, in my hometown we had a school focused on children who have been in prison and I know that this school had lots of regulations and strict rules for those children.

✓ I think it depends on the concrete school or university because for example, in my hometown we had a school focused on children who have been in prison and I know that this school had lots of regulations and strict rules for those children.

The modal verb 'it's' (it is) is incorrectly used before 'depends'. The correct form is 'it depends' without 'is' because 'depends' is the main verb here. Using 'it's depends' is grammatically incorrect. The suggestion is to remove 'is' and say 'it depends'. This is a modal verb usage error (ID 4).

× And umm, on her opinion, my look was not appropriate for school.

✓ And umm, in her opinion, my look was not appropriate for school.

The phrase 'on her opinion' is incorrect. The correct preposition to use with 'opinion' is 'in', so it should be 'in her opinion'. This is a common prepositional error where 'on' is mistakenly used instead of 'in'.

× especially in a rural free school because I wouldn't know how to cope with all the children around me and I think if I were a teacher I were a really strict teacher.

✓ especially in a rule-free school because I wouldn't know how to cope with all the children around me and I think if I were a teacher I would be a really strict teacher.

The phrase 'rural free school' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'rule-free school' (a school without rules). Also, the conditional sentence 'if I were a teacher I were a really strict teacher' is incorrect; it should be 'I would be' to express hypothetical condition. The errors involve incorrect article usage and incorrect verb form in conditional sentences.