Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简洁明了地回答问题，并使用正确的语法结构。例如，直接说明学校有规则，并解释规则的目的。

예시: Yes, there are many rules at my school. They are designed to keep students safe and maintain order.

제안: 回答中表达不够流畅，且有重复和语法错误。建议用简洁的句子表达观点，并用连接词使回答更连贯。

예시: I don't think more rules are necessary because students should learn to discipline themselves. However, having some basic rules is important to maintain order.

제안: 回答内容不清晰，语法错误较多，且表达含糊。建议明确描述老师的敬业表现，并用具体例子支持观点。

예시: Yes, I had a very dedicated math teacher who always prepared extra assignments to help us improve and was patient in explaining difficult topics.

제안: 回答中语法混乱，表达不连贯。建议用简洁的句子表达观点，并说明原因，使用连接词使逻辑清晰。

예시: I prefer more rules at school because they help protect students and ensure safety for everyone involved.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，建议直接回答问题并用具体细节说明老师的严格之处。

예시: Yes, I had a strict teacher in primary school who always gave us challenging assignments and expected us to complete them on time.

제안: 回答含糊且未完成，建议明确表达观点，避免重复和犹豫，使用完整句子。

예시: I would prefer to work in a school with some rules because they help maintain discipline and protect both students and teachers.

× I my school also had so many lures in my views.

✓ My school also had so many rules in my view.

这里'lures'应为'rules'，且'views'应为'singular'形式'view'，因为表达的是个人观点。'rules'是复数形式，表示多条规则。

× I think the school want to control and protect our student which can which we can safety at school.

✓ I think the school wants to control and protect our students so that we can be safe at school.

主语'the school'是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加's'变为'wants'。'student'应为复数'students'，表示多个学生。'which can which we can safety'结构不正确，改为'so that we can be safe'更通顺。

× I think students should control themselves and they need to very high demanding to ask themselves, yes, umm, it's really crucial for them because, uh, very high discipline is really important.

✓ I think students should control themselves and they need to be very demanding of themselves. Yes, umm, it's really crucial for them because very high discipline is really important.

'need to very high demanding'结构错误，应为'need to be very demanding'，动词后需接不定式或形容词。'demanding'用作形容词，表示要求高。

× In my school my math Methodist teacher was very dedicated teacher.

✓ In my school, my math Methodist teacher was a very dedicated teacher.

缺少冠词'a'，表示单数可数名词前需加冠词。

× He will organize us some assignments and rules for them.

✓ He would organize some assignments and rules for us.

'organize us some assignments'表达不当，应为'organize some assignments for us'。'will'时态与上下文不符，改为'would'更合适。

× And these rules can protect and hide demand.

✓ And these rules can protect and set demands.

'hide demand'表达不清，可能想表达'提出要求'，应改为'set demands'。

× You know if school be because school have a responsibility to for schools, parents and teachers if they face risks, they can must be controlled.

✓ You know, if a school has a responsibility to schools, parents, and teachers, if they face risks, they must be controlled.

缺少冠词'a'，'school have'应为'school has'，主谓一致错误。'can must be controlled'语法错误，'must be controlled'即可。

× Yes, I have when I was a little.

✓ Yes, I did when I was little.

回答过去经历时，助动词应为'did'，'have'用法不当。'a little'应为'little'，表示小时候。

× I have a registered teacher in primary school and he always asked me to complete an order assignment and I think this assignment is really difficult for me.

✓ I had a strict teacher in primary school and he always asked me to complete an ordered assignment, and I thought this assignment was really difficult for me.

时态应统一为过去时，'have'改为'had'，'think'改为'thought'，'is'改为'was'。'registered teacher'应为'strict teacher'。

× But yes, finally I must be.

✓ But yes, finally I had to do it.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，'must be'用法错误，应表达'我必须完成它'。

× Yes, I would umm, you know, umm, if school have some rules to uh, control umm, the student and teacher, umm, uh, you, you, you can think about umm, this is uh, protective uh, because if umm, don't have these rules, umm, we.

✓ Yes, I would. Umm, you know, if a school has some rules to control the students and teachers, you can think about this as protective because if we don't have these rules, umm, we...

'if school have'应为'if a school has'，主谓一致和冠词错误。句子不完整，需补充完整表达。