Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incorrect word usage.

예시: No, there aren't many strict rules at my college because students are expected to be independent. For example, we have free time to manage our own studies, which helps me focus on improving my English skills.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains repetition and incorrect word choices. Provide a clear opinion with reasons and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: No, I don't think more rules would help. Instead, students need more free time to manage themselves, which allows them to improve their English and other skills effectively.

제안: Your answer is vague and contains repetition and unclear reasoning. Give a direct answer with specific examples or reasons, and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

예시: Yes, I have had dedicated teachers at my college. For instance, my English teacher always spends extra time helping students improve their skills despite her busy schedule.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical errors and repetition. Provide a clear preference with reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I prefer fewer rules at school because it gives us more freedom to focus on improving our skills, which is beneficial for our learning.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases and repetition. Answer directly with clear sentences and avoid irrelevant information.

예시: I have had some strict teachers in my previous school, but none in my college. Strict teachers can help students stay disciplined.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains unrelated words. Express your opinion clearly with reasons and avoid irrelevant or incorrect words.

예시: I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because I prefer a structured environment. Also, I have other plans for my life that I want to focus on.

× No, there aren't any stretch rulers at my school because it is a college and students are really are except to more in independent.

✓ No, there aren't any strict rules at my school because it is a college and students are really expected to be more independent.

The original sentence misused 'stretch rulers' instead of 'strict rules' and had pronoun errors like 'are except to more in independent' which should be 'expected to be more independent'. The pronouns and verbs need to agree and be used correctly to convey the intended meaning.

× In independent we usually have a lot of free time to manage our own studies and have a mainly focus on improve my English skills.

✓ As independent students, we usually have a lot of free time to manage our own studies and mainly focus on improving my English skills.

The phrase 'In independent' is incorrect; it should be 'As independent students'. Also, 'have a mainly focus' is incorrect; it should be 'mainly focus'. The verb 'improve' should be in gerund form 'improving' after 'focus on'.

× No, I don't think so. I think students should have more free free time to manage their own time so that they have a lot of time to import them themselves.

✓ No, I don't think so. I think students should have more free time to manage their own time so that they have a lot of time to improve themselves.

The phrase 'more free free time' has a repeated word 'free'. Also, 'import them themselves' is incorrect; it should be 'improve themselves'. The quantifier 'more' is correctly used but the repetition and wrong word choice cause confusion.

× It is a good idea to improve English to improve students.

✓ It is a good idea to improve English to help students improve.

The original sentence is unclear and misuses 'improve students'. The correction clarifies that improving English helps students improve, using correct pronouns and verb forms.

× Yes, I have. There are lots of dedicated teachers in Chinese college because because all Chinese have a lot of thing to do in their life.

✓ Yes, I have. There are lots of dedicated teachers in Chinese colleges because all Chinese people have a lot of things to do in their lives.

The phrase 'a lot of thing' should be 'a lot of things' to match plural form. Also, 'Chinese college' should be plural 'Chinese colleges' to generalize. 'Life' should be plural 'lives' when referring to multiple people.

× I prefer a few rules at school because and we we need to have it so we have more time to improve our skills.

✓ I prefer a few rules at school because we need to have them so we have more time to improve our skills.

The phrase 'because and we we need to have it' contains repeated words and incorrect pronoun 'it' which should be 'them' referring to 'rules'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× Maybe I have, but I have to get it. I I have lots of teachers in my February school factory school, but I don't have any strange teachers in my college.

✓ Maybe I have, but I don't remember clearly. I have lots of teachers in my previous school, but I don't have any strict teachers in my college.

The phrase 'I have to get it' is unclear and likely incorrect; replaced with 'I don't remember clearly'. 'February school factory school' is unclear and replaced with 'previous school'. 'Strange teachers' should be 'strict teachers' to match context.

× I don't want to watch advertise in a real field school. I just want to become a free people.

✓ I don't want to work as a teacher in a rule-free school. I just want to become a free person.

The phrase 'watch advertise in a real field school' is incorrect and replaced with 'work as a teacher in a rule-free school' to fit context. 'Free people' should be 'free person' to match singular subject.

× I have lots of things to do in my life so I don't want to get a work in my college.

✓ I have lots of things to do in my life so I don't want to work at my college.

The phrase 'get a work' is incorrect; 'work' is uncountable and does not need 'a'. The preposition 'in' is better replaced with 'at' when referring to working at a place.