Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn.

예시: Yes, there are rules at my school. For example, students must wear uniforms, and if they don't follow the rules, they may be punished.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp và cụ thể hơn để làm rõ ý.

예시: Of course, students can benefit from more rules because they help them become more disciplined and punctual. Moreover, they learn important skills like responsibility, which are useful for their future careers.

제안: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên chú ý chia động từ đúng và hoàn thành câu để ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn.

예시: Absolutely. I had a dedicated math teacher who was hardworking and kind. She always listened carefully to her students and gave us advice based on her own experiences.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng từ vựng chính xác và câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn.

예시: I prefer fewer rules at school because students don't need many strict regulations. Instead, schools should focus on teaching important skills like communication.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng, có lỗi ngữ pháp và không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên sắp xếp ý tưởng rõ ràng, dùng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

예시: Yes, I had a strict physical education teacher in middle school. She disapproved of students having relationships and gave them low scores even if they performed well.

제안: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên hoàn thành câu, sử dụng liên từ hợp lý và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn.

예시: Yes, I would like to work in a school without strict rules because students can feel free to share their experiences and ideas, which makes them more comfortable.

× Yes, they are grown at my school is that student need to wear uniform.

✓ Yes, the rule at my school is that students need to wear uniforms.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and subject-verb agreement. 'They are grown' is incorrect and unclear. The subject 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the verb 'need'. Also, 'uniform' should be plural 'uniforms' to indicate the general rule. The corrected sentence clearly states the rule with proper grammar.

× If any student don't follow the rules, they may be punished.

✓ If any student doesn't follow the rules, they may be punished.

The subject 'any student' is singular, so the verb should be 'doesn't' instead of 'don't' to agree in number.

× Of course, acting student can learn how to be more disciplined and punctual at school and they can have a chance to learn new skill like responsibilities and discipline which are very useful for their future career.

✓ Of course, students can learn how to be more disciplined and punctual at school, and they can have a chance to learn new skills like responsibility and discipline, which are very useful for their future careers.

'Acting student' is incorrect; it should be 'students'. 'Skill' should be plural 'skills' because it refers to multiple abilities. 'Responsibilities' should be 'responsibility' as an uncountable noun here. Also, 'career' should be plural 'careers' to match 'their'. Commas are added for clarity.

× She's always listen carefully to her students and give us a lot of advices based on her own experiences and.

✓ She always listens carefully to her students and gives us a lot of advice based on her own experiences.

The verbs 'listen' and 'give' need to be in third person singular present tense: 'listens' and 'gives'. 'Advices' is incorrect; 'advice' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. The sentence was incomplete and has been corrected accordingly.

× I prefer to have fewer rooms at school, attend school, don't need to give many strict rules for students at school.

✓ I prefer to have fewer rules at school; students don't need to follow many strict rules.

'Rooms' is incorrect; the intended word is 'rules'. The sentence structure is confusing and has been clarified. 'Many strict rules' is acceptable, but the sentence needed rephrasing for clarity.

× Instead of that school need to educate an English student to have high skill which are very important in their life like communication.

✓ Instead, the school needs to educate students in English to have high-level skills which are very important in their lives, like communication.

'An English student' is incorrect; it should be 'students in English' or 'English students'. 'Skill' should be plural 'skills'. 'Life' should be plural 'lives' to match 'their'. The sentence has been restructured for clarity and grammar.

× She saw my physical education teacher and she taught me in in the middle school.

✓ She was my physical education teacher, and she taught me in middle school.

'Saw' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'was'. The phrase 'in in the middle school' has a repeated preposition and 'the' is unnecessary before 'middle school'. The sentence has been corrected for tense and clarity.

× She's disapproved of student being in love with other student in my school.

✓ She disapproved of students being in love with other students in my school.

'She's disapproved' is incorrect; it should be 'She disapproved'. 'Student' should be plural 'students' in both cases to match the context.

× She gave them bad score even they did the same really good and she.

✓ She gave them bad scores even though they did really well.

'Bad score' should be plural 'bad scores' because it refers to multiple students. 'Did the same really good' is incorrect; it should be 'did really well'. The sentence was incomplete and has been corrected accordingly.

× Yes, I would like to work as a teacher in a room free school because I want our students can feel free to share their own experiences and share their own ideas and they can and also they can feel more comfortable too, because they.

✓ Yes, I would like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because I want our students to feel free to share their own experiences and ideas, and also to feel more comfortable.

'Room free school' is incorrect; it should be 'rule-free school'. The sentence structure is awkward and incomplete; it has been corrected for clarity and grammar. 'Want our students can feel' should be 'want our students to feel'.