Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且内容完整，但可以避免使用“and so on”这种模糊表达，建议具体列举规则并用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must keep quiet in the classroom, are not allowed to use cell phones during lessons, and fighting is strictly prohibited. These rules help students focus better and maintain a positive learning environment.

제안: 回答观点明确，但表达略显简单，建议使用更多连接词和具体例子来丰富内容，使论述更有说服力。

예시: I don't think more rules would benefit students because excessive regulations might limit their creativity and freedom. For instance, strict time constraints can cause anxiety, which in turn reduces their motivation to study effectively.

제안: 回答内容丰富但句子结构有些重复，且存在语法错误（如“made me to study hard”），建议注意语法准确性并使用多样句型。

예시: Yes, I was lucky to have a dedicated English teacher during secondary school. Since my English was poor then, she provided extra help and tutoring. Moreover, she encouraged me to speak English more often and become the class representative, which motivated me to study harder and sparked my interest in the language.

제안: 回答观点清晰，但表达略显重复，建议使用连接词丰富句子结构，并避免不必要的词汇，如“to be”。

예시: I prefer fewer rules at school because they allow students more creativity and freedom. Since too many rules can be restrictive and stressful, having fewer rules makes school life more relaxed and enjoyable.

제안: 回答自然且内容完整，但可以通过使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时注意“experienced it”应为“experienced them”。

예시: No, I haven't. During my school years, most of my teachers were patient and tolerant, which made students feel comfortable and open to learning. Although I've heard about some strict teachers from my friends, I have never experienced having one myself.

제안: 回答观点明确，但最后一句语法不完整，建议注意句子结构完整性，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: No, I wouldn't because I believe some rules are necessary to maintain order and discipline. Without rules, students might become too noisy and hard to manage, which would make studying difficult. Therefore, rules help both teachers and students focus better on their work.

× The rules make students pay more attention to their study and keep a positive learning environment.

✓ The rules make students pay more attention to their studies and keep a positive learning environment.

这里“study”应使用复数形式“studies”，因为指的是学生的学习科目或学习活动的总称。

× She always encouraged me to speak more English and to be an English class representative, which made me to study hard, inspired my interest in English.

✓ She always encouraged me to speak more English and to be an English class representative, which made me study hard and inspired my interest in English.

“made me to study”中“to”是不必要的，正确用法是“made me study”。此外，两个并列动词“made me study”和“inspired my interest”之间应加连词“and”。

× Too many rules can be restrictive and stressful, so having fewer rules can make our school life to be more relaxed and enjoyable.

✓ Too many rules can be restrictive and stressful, so having fewer rules can make our school life more relaxed and enjoyable.

“make ... to be”结构中“to be”是不正确的，正确用法是“make ... + 形容词”，因此应去掉“to be”。

× Therefore, rules help both teachers and students can focus on their work.

✓ Therefore, rules help both teachers and students focus on their work.

“help”后面直接跟动词原形，不需要加“can”，因此应去掉“can”。