Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer addresses the question but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and clearer sentence structure. Avoid redundancy such as "another one" and try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, correct grammar mistakes like "be quiet" should be "we must be quiet" or "students should be quiet."

예시: Yes, there are several rules for students at my school. Firstly, we must wear a uniform every day. Additionally, students are required to be quiet during lessons, and mobile phone use is prohibited in class to avoid distractions.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but the sentences are unclear and contain grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly with correct grammar and use linking words like "because" and "moreover" properly. Also, avoid vague phrases like "equal equality" and explain your points more specifically.

예시: Yes, I believe students benefit from having more rules because wearing the same uniform helps create a sense of equality among classmates. Moreover, rules teach discipline, which is essential for success in life.

제안: Your answer provides relevant information but lacks fluency and contains grammatical errors. Use clearer sentence structures and avoid filler words like "uh." Also, explain what you mean by "teach us new rules" and use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, when I was in 12th grade, I had a new science teacher who was very dedicated. She was strict about classroom discipline and would ask students to leave if they made noise. Her commitment helped us learn effectively.

제안: Your answer has good points but the grammar and sentence structure need improvement. Avoid repetition like "I think I think" and use linking words such as "because" and "so" correctly. Also, clarify your ideas with more precise vocabulary.

예시: I prefer having more rules at school because it helps students discover their talents and prepare for their careers. Furthermore, strict rules encourage discipline, which benefits students throughout their lives.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts and use correct verb forms. Also, avoid vague expressions like "I really felt very." Use linking words to organize your answer logically.

예시: Yes, I had a very strict physical education teacher who took attendance every morning. If a student was even five minutes late, he would give a punishment. His strictness helped maintain discipline in class.

제안: Your answer conveys your opinion but has repetition and unclear phrasing. Avoid repeating words like "no no" and "there there." Use clearer sentence structures and linking words to explain your reasons logically.

예시: No, I would not like to work in a school without rules because without rules, students might not respect teachers. Therefore, having rules creates a better environment for both teachers and students.

× Another one is be quiet in the classroom and there is also another rule that we don't use mobile phones while class.

✓ Another one is to be quiet in the classroom and there is also another rule that we don't use mobile phones during class.

The verb 'be' should be in the infinitive form 'to be' after 'is' to indicate the rule. Also, 'while class' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'during' to indicate the time when mobile phones should not be used.

× Yes, I think student get more benefit when there are more rules because there is also important if the people we are same uniform in the school, they feel equal equality in the class.

✓ Yes, I think students get more benefit when there are more rules because it is also important that when people wear the same uniform in the school, they feel equality in the class.

The noun 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the plural verb 'get'. The phrase 'there is also important' is incorrect; it should be 'it is also important'. The phrase 'if the people we are same uniform' is ungrammatical and corrected to 'when people wear the same uniform'. 'Equal equality' is redundant; 'equality' alone suffices.

× She was very dedicated and she also teach us new rules.

✓ She was very dedicated and she also taught us new rules.

The verb 'teach' should be in the past tense 'taught' to agree with the past tense context 'was' and the time frame indicated.

× whenever everybody wants to do noise in class, she just say out of my class.

✓ whenever everybody wants to make noise in class, she just says 'out of my class'.

The phrase 'do noise' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'make noise'. The verb 'say' should be in third person singular form 'says' to agree with the subject 'she'. Also, the phrase 'out of my class' should be in quotes as it is a direct speech.

× If the schools are have more rules, so the students will also be disciplined in the rest of the life.

✓ If the schools have more rules, the students will also be disciplined for the rest of their lives.

The phrase 'are have' is incorrect; it should be 'have'. The phrase 'in the rest of the life' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for' and 'life' should be plural 'lives' to match 'students'. The conjunction 'so' is unnecessary after 'if' clause.

× So I think I think more rules are more merit filled for students.

✓ So I think more rules are more beneficial for students.

The phrase 'merit filled' is incorrect and unidiomatic. The correct adjective to express advantage is 'beneficial'.

× He is a PT teacher, he plays games.

✓ He is a PT teacher; he plays games.

This is a punctuation issue rather than grammar, but to improve clarity, a semicolon or period should separate the two independent clauses instead of a comma.

× He also do attendance every morning.

✓ He also takes attendance every morning.

The verb 'do' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb collocation is 'take attendance'.

× If somebody is late for 5 minutes, he just give him punishment.

✓ If somebody is late by 5 minutes, he just gives him punishment.

The preposition 'for' should be 'by' to indicate the amount of time late. The verb 'give' should be in third person singular 'gives' to agree with 'he'.

× That time I really felt very.

✓ At that time, I really felt bad.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object or complement after 'felt'. Adding 'bad' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× No, I don't want to work as a teacher in a rule free school because if there is no rule in school there there will be no no teacher because if the students rule on the teacher so that's not a good place to work.

✓ No, I don't want to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because if there are no rules in school, there will be no teachers since the students would rule over the teachers, so that's not a good place to work.

The phrase 'rule free' should be hyphenated as 'rule-free'. 'Rule' should be plural 'rules' to match 'no'. The phrase 'there there will be no no teacher' has repetition and should be corrected to 'there will be no teachers'. The phrase 'students rule on the teacher' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'rule over'.

× So if there is a rule school so that will be good to work.

✓ So if there is a school with rules, that will be good to work at.

The phrase 'rule school' is incorrect; it should be 'school with rules'. The sentence also needs the preposition 'at' after 'work' to be grammatically correct.