Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear and grammatically correct. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail. Correct plural/singular errors and use natural phrasing (e.g., "rules" not "a rule"). Avoid redundant phrases like "absolutely" plus extra wording.

예시: Yes. My school has several rules, and the most important one is that students must arrive by 8:00 AM. This rule helps keep lessons on schedule and encourages punctual habits.

제안: Answer directly and give a clear reason with one or two supporting points. Use linking words (however, because) and correct grammar ("I don't think so"), and avoid vague phrases like "social rule" without explanation.

예시: I don't think more rules are always helpful. However, necessary rules such as punctuality and safety are beneficial because they create order and protect students.

제안: Provide a coherent topic sentence and specific details. Use correct vocabulary ("teacher" not "T-shirt") and explain why the teacher was dedicated with concrete examples (e.g., extra help, patience). Keep it concise and connected with linking words.

예시: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher when I was young. She stayed after class to help struggling students and always prepared interesting lessons, which showed how much she cared about our learning.

제안: State your preference clearly and give a specific reason or example. Use correct nouns and phrases ("fewer rules," "don't make sense"). Explain the example briefly and logically with linking words like "for example" or "because."

예시: I prefer fewer rules because some are unnecessary. For example, a rule that restricts certain activities until age 15 seems arbitrary and limits our independence without clear benefit.

제안: Make a clear, natural statement and explain your feelings with one reason. Use correct adjectives ("strict" not "strategic") and proper phrases ("I wasn't very happy" or "I felt scared"). Keep it simple and coherent.

예시: Yes, I had a strict teacher in middle school. I wasn't very happy because his high expectations and strict rules made me nervous in class.

제안: Answer directly and give a concise reason with an example. Use natural phrasing ("I wouldn't" or "I wouldn't want to") and avoid repeating "rule" too often. Clarify what kinds of rules you mean (safety, behavior).

예시: I wouldn't want to teach in a rule-free school because reasonable rules—like those ensuring student safety and respectful behaviour—help children learn how to behave in society.

× The school has a bunch of a rule, but the rule that I remember is you don't allow to come to school late after 8:00 AM.

✓ The school has a bunch of rules, but the rule I remember is that you are not allowed to come to school late after 8:00 AM.

Errors: incorrect article usage and noun number. 'a bunch of a rule' is wrong: 'bunch of' should be followed by a plural noun 'rules'. Also missing 'that' clause and passive construction 'you are not allowed' is needed. Suggestion: use plural nouns after quantity expressions and use correct passive for rules ('are not allowed').

× No, I don't if the rule is not necessary.

✓ No, I don't think so if the rule is not necessary.

Error: omitted verb after auxiliary 'do'. The student used 'do' without main verb. Suggestion: include main verb 'think so' after 'do' to express opinion. Keep present tense to match context.

× But anyway we have got the benefits from the social rule that everyone should follow.

✓ But anyway we have benefited from the social rules that everyone should follow.

Errors: awkward phrasing 'have got the benefits from' and singular 'rule' when referring generally. Use present perfect 'have benefited' and plural 'rules' for general norms. Suggestion: use natural collocation 'have benefited from' and pluralize general rules.

× This like a don't too late.

✓ This means not coming too late.

Errors: ungrammatical fragment. 'This like a don't too late' is unclear. Correction clarifies meaning: 'This means not coming too late.' Suggestion: express purpose or meaning using 'this means' and an appropriate verb phrase.

× My T-shirt is my role model.

✓ My teacher is my role model.

Error: wrong word 'T-shirt' used instead of 'teacher' (likely pronunciation/writing error). Suggestion: use correct noun 'teacher' as the person who can be a role model.

× I would admire them because they have to manage the children and you imagine this.

✓ I admired them because they had to manage the children, and you can imagine that.

Errors: tense inconsistency and wrong verb forms. Context refers to past ('when I was young'), so use past tense 'admired' and 'had to'. 'You imagine this' should be 'you can imagine that'. Suggestion: keep past tense for past events and use 'you can imagine' to indicate inference.

× I prefer to have fewer room at the school because some rule is not make sense like an in the school.

✓ I prefer to have fewer rules at school because some rules do not make sense, like some of the school rules.

Errors: 'fewer room' wrong quantifier and noun; 'some rule is not make sense' grammar and article errors. Use 'fewer' with countable noun 'rules', pluralize 'rules', and use 'do not make sense'. Suggestion: match quantifier to noun type and use correct verb forms.

× They don't allow us to get a wrong hand until we turn 15 or get to the high school.

✓ They don't allow us to have a part-time job until we turn 15 or start high school.

Errors: 'get a wrong hand' is unintelligible and uses wrong preposition. Likely meaning is 'have a part-time job' or 'work'. Also 'get to the high school' is awkward; use 'start high school'. Suggestion: express intended restriction clearly using 'allow' + infinitive and correct prepositions.

× Yes, I experienced the strategic and I'm not quite unhappy because I'm scared more than this big.

✓ Yes, I experienced strict teachers and I'm not too unhappy because I was more scared then.

Errors: 'strategic' used instead of 'strict'; adjective/adverb misuse and confusing comparative 'more than this big'. Use 'strict' for teachers, and express feelings in past: 'I was more scared then'. Suggestion: choose appropriate adjectives and use clear comparative structures.

× No, because I think the rule is still important if it's necessary, such as the social rule or norm that the student can learn from the school and then they can live in the social norm.

✓ No, because I think rules are still important if they are necessary, such as social rules or norms that students can learn at school so they can live within social norms.

Errors: singular/plural mismatch and awkward modal/relative clause use. Use plural 'rules' and plural pronouns 'they/students'. Replace 'can learn from the school' with 'learn at school' and 'live within social norms'. Suggestion: ensure noun-pronoun agreement and use natural prepositions ('learn at school', 'live within').