Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise: start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with clear linking words. Avoid repeating the same idea and correct grammar (e.g., "ring a phone" → "call").

예시: I don't enjoy casual chatting with friends; I think it's often a waste of time. Instead, I prefer to call or meet them when I need help because phone calls are faster and more effective than long chats.

제안: Answer directly and add a specific example. Use linking words to clarify when and why you text, and use correct vocabulary (use "WhatsApp" or "inbox" not both awkwardly).

예시: I usually text friends on WhatsApp when I have something important to tell them. For example, I might message details about a meeting time or share an urgent update when they are busy.

제안: Structure your answer: state your preference, then give two clear reasons with linking words. Simplify phrases and correct grammar ("one-on-one" not "one of one").

예시: I prefer both, depending on the situation. For planning, I like group chats because everyone can share ideas quickly; however, for personal matters I prefer one-on-one conversations to keep things private.

제안: Give a clear direct answer and a brief reason with an example. Fix grammar and avoid filler words. Mention one advantage and one situation when face-to-face is better to show balance.

예시: I prefer communicating via social media because it is convenient and lets me video-call friends and family who live far away. However, I still choose face-to-face meetings for important or sensitive conversations because they feel more personal.

제안: Be clearer: start with a direct statement about whether you argue, then give a specific reason and an example. Correct grammar and avoid unclear phrases (e.g., "explore deadpan" is not meaningful).

예시: Yes, sometimes I argue with friends, usually when we disagree about plans. For instance, if I want to go to one place and a friend insists on another, we discuss our preferences until we reach a compromise.

× No, I do not like unnecessary chatting with friends.

✓ No, I do not like unnecessary chatting with friends.

Although the sentence is acceptable, 'unnecessary chatting' is natural; no article change is required. No correction necessary.

× Whenever I need any kind of help and I want to talk with friends, I go to them or I ring a phone to them and I talk.

✓ Whenever I need any kind of help and want to talk with friends, I go to them or ring them on the phone and talk.

Remove the unnecessary repeated subject and verb forms. Use 'want to' once and 'ring them on the phone' is the correct phrase. This corrects awkward verb phrase repetition and preposition use ('on the phone' instead of 'a phone to them').

× I never chat with them.

✓ I never chat with them.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change is necessary.

× Whenever they are busy or I want to send any kind of important message, I go to my WhatsApp or inbox box and I text them.

✓ Whenever they are busy or I want to send an important message, I go to WhatsApp or my inbox and text them.

Remove redundant words: 'any kind of' and duplicate 'box'. Use 'WhatsApp' without 'my' when referring to the app, or 'my inbox' for messages. Omit the repeated subject 'I' for conciseness.

× I like both, but I usually prefer chatting with a group when we need to make a plan or exchange ideas because it's excellent and everyone can contribute each and every their ideas.

✓ I like both, but I usually prefer chatting with a group when we need to make a plan or exchange ideas because it's great and everyone can contribute their ideas.

Replace 'excellent' with more natural 'great'. Remove 'each and every their' which is ungrammatical; use 'their ideas'. This corrects quantifier/redundancy and pronoun placement issues.

× But if there is any personal matter I go one of one friend and talk them because it could be a private.

✓ But if there is a personal matter I go to one friend and talk to them because it could be private.

Use 'a personal matter' (article), 'go to one friend' (add 'to'), and 'talk to them' (correct verb + object). 'It could be private' is fine but the sentence needs these prepositions and articles fixed.

× Social media has make our life very convenient.

✓ Social media has made our lives very convenient.

Use past participle 'made' after 'has' (present perfect). Use plural 'lives' because 'our' refers to multiple people.

× So I like to communicate via social media on like video calls as well as chatting with my friends as well as with my cousins.

✓ So I like to communicate via social media through video calls and by chatting with my friends and my cousins.

Use 'through video calls' and 'by chatting' for parallel structure. Remove filler 'on like' and duplicate 'as well as' to improve clarity and grammar.

× And uh, it's very close to me.

✓ And, uh, it feels very close to me.

'It's very close to me' is ambiguous for 'social media'; 'it feels very close to me' clarifies the meaning. Adding 'feels' improves naturalness.

× Whenever my friend not be agree on my plan like somewhere we are going or we have a plan and he uh explore deadpan.

✓ Whenever my friend does not agree with my plan, such as where we are going or what we plan to do, and he becomes distant,

Correct subject-verb agreement: 'does not agree'. Use 'agree with' not 'agree on' for a person opposing a plan. Replace unclear phrase 'he uh explore deadpan' with 'he becomes distant' to convey likely intended meaning.

× So at that time I argue with my friends.

✓ I argue with my friends at that time.

Reorder for more natural English: place time expression at end or start; original is understandable but moving 'at that time' improves flow.