Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitations and irrelevant phrases, and give one or two specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' or 'also' correctly and keep sentences concise (max 3–4 short sentences).

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it is entertaining and helps me relax. For example, we often share funny stories or plan activities together, which makes me feel connected.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence naming specific subjects, then add one specific example using a linking phrase (e.g., 'for example', 'such as'). Reduce fillers and repetition. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

예시: We usually talk about a range of things, such as movies, recent events, and shared memories. For example, we often reminisce about school trips and recommend films to each other.

제안: Answer directly with a clear choice, then give a specific reason and a short example. Avoid unclear phrases and grammar errors; use linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer talking with one close friend because conversations feel deeper and more personal. For instance, with one person I can discuss feelings and solve problems without interruptions.

제안: State your preference clearly, then explain with a specific reason and an example. Reduce hesitations and correct sentence structure (e.g., 'face-to-face communication helps me understand friends' emotions'). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to read facial expressions and emotions. For example, when we meet in person I can tell if a friend is upset and offer support immediately.

제안: Be specific about reasons for arguments and how you handle them. Start with a clear statement, then give one example or consequence. Avoid vague claims and keep sentences concise and grammatical.

예시: Yes, my friends and I sometimes argue, usually about misunderstandings or plans. For example, we once disagreed about who should host an event, but we talked it through and resolved it calmly.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it's very, uh, entertaining place, uh, when I like to help you always.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it is very entertaining and I always like to help them.

Original sentence uses 'entertaining place' incorrectly (context refers to chatting, not a place) and has incorrect word order and pronoun ('you' instead of 'them'). This is an adjective/adverb and pronoun usage issue. Suggest replacing 'entertaining place' with 'entertaining' and change 'help you always' to 'always like to help them' for correct pronoun and adverb placement.

× I usually chat with my friends some many topics like umm, entertaining topics and uh umm uh, our memory types topics, umm, many types of topics.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about many topics, such as entertaining subjects and memories.

The phrase 'some many topics' is incorrect quantifier use; use 'many topics' or 'a lot of topics'. 'Our memory types topics' is unclear; 'memories' fits meaning. Simplify and reorder to 'chat about many topics, such as...' for natural English.

× I like to talk my friends.

✓ I like to talk with my friends.

Missing preposition 'with' makes the sentence ungrammatical. This is a sentence structure error. Use the verb 'talk' with the preposition 'with' when indicating conversation partners: 'talk with my friends'.

× I prefer to talk 1 friend who you loves to a lot because A1 friend is better than other friends.

✓ I prefer to talk to one friend whom I love a lot because one close friend is better than many others.

Several pronoun and article problems: use 'to' after 'talk' when specifying a person, write 'one' not '1', use 'whom I love' (object pronoun) rather than 'who you loves to', and 'one close friend' is clearer than 'A1 friend'. Also 'others' plural required. This corrects pronoun reference and article/number wording.

× That's why I think I prefer to always to talk 1 friend.

✓ That's why I think I prefer to always talk to one friend.

Redundant 'to' and incorrect word order ('prefer to always to talk') are verb usage and structure errors. Place adverb 'always' before the main verb or after 'prefer to' and include the preposition 'to' before the person: 'prefer to always talk to one friend' or 'prefer always to talk to one friend'.

× I think face to face connect, uh, communicate is very, uh, very best for, uh, my personal opinion because it is knowing of, uh, other friends feelings and umm, it's very important to face to face, uh, communicate.

✓ I think face-to-face communication is best, in my opinion, because it helps you understand your friends' feelings, so face-to-face communication is very important.

Original has noun/verb form errors: 'connect, communicate' should be the noun 'communication' and 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. 'It is knowing of other friends feelings' is ungrammatical; use 'helps you understand your friends' feelings'. This corrects verb/noun forms and preposition/possessive usage.

× Yes, I argue with my friends because friend is very important in your life and they knowing your feelings and it always like a entertaining moment when you spend with your friends that's why.

✓ Yes, I argue with my friends; friends are very important in your life, they understand your feelings, and spending time with them is always entertaining.

Multiple subject-verb agreement and sentence structure errors: 'friend is' should be 'friends are' to match plural; 'they knowing' should be 'they understand' (correct verb form); 'it always like a entertaining moment when you spend with your friends' is ungrammatical—restate as 'spending time with them is always entertaining'. This addresses agreement, verb forms, and article usage ('a entertaining' -> 'an entertaining' if used, but rephrased avoids it).