Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and reduce fillers (uh, um). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Also correct small grammar issues (e.g., "a nice way" → "a nice way").

예시: Yes — I enjoy chatting with friends. I mainly use chats to get updates on their lives and to share funny memes or interesting news, so it’s a simple and casual way to keep in touch.

제안: Open with a direct topic sentence, avoid awkward phrasing ("talking about on a serious particular topic") and be more specific: give one or two clear examples and use linking words like "for example" or "especially".

예시: We usually discuss specific topics. For example, we talk about education and university plans, and we also update each other on mutual friends’ situations so everyone stays informed.

제안: State your preference clearly and avoid repetition. Use a reason with a linking word ("because", "because of") and give a concrete example of differing perspectives to strengthen the answer.

예시: I prefer chatting in larger groups because I enjoy hearing many different perspectives. For instance, when we plan events, group chats help me get ideas from several people at once.

제안: Good clear preference. Reduce hesitations and tighten sentences. Replace vague phrases like "the vibe they are radiating" with clearer language ("their tone and body language"). Add a brief example of when face-to-face matters.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read someone’s tone and body language more clearly. For example, when discussing a sensitive issue, meeting in person helps me understand how they really feel.

제안: Give a direct, concise answer first, then explain with a brief reason and an example. Remove fillers and replace vague terms like "broader minded" with "open-minded."

예시: I don’t usually argue; I prefer friendly debates. Because I respect others’ beliefs, I try to listen and discuss calmly — for example, when opinions differ, I ask questions instead of getting defensive.

× Yes, I do have my regular, uh, chatting person with my friends.

✓ Yes, I do have my regular chatting partner among my friends.

The phrase 'chatting person' is unnatural; 'chatting partner' is the correct noun phrase. Also use the preposition 'among' to indicate someone within a group. Replace the definite/awkward phrasing with a more natural article usage and noun choice.

× I do love to get updates on what the, what's going on in their life mainly and uh, maybe share a few, uh, memes, a few posts, few messages about what's happening in the current world.

✓ I do love to get updates on what's going on in their lives, mainly, and maybe share a few memes, some posts, or a few messages about what's happening in the world.

Use plural 'lives' for multiple people. Omit 'the' before 'current world' and use 'the world' or simply 'world'. Use quantifiers correctly: 'a few memes', 'some posts'. Also simplify redundant phrasing for clarity.

× So, uh, it's just nice way to catch up.

✓ So, uh, it's just a nice way to catch up.

Missing article 'a' before 'nice way' makes the noun phrase ungrammatical. Add 'a' to form a correct noun phrase.

× Most of the time we are talking about on a serious particular topic.

✓ Most of the time we are talking about a particular serious topic.

The preposition 'about' is followed by the object; 'on' is unnecessary here. Also adjective order should be 'particular serious' or better 'a particular serious topic' — reordering and adding the article fixes the structure.

× Maybe it might be regarding the education, or maybe it's regarding some other friends that we know something about.

✓ Maybe it might be regarding education, or maybe it's about other friends we know something about.

Do not use the definite article 'the' before the uncountable noun 'education' in this general sense. 'Regarding' can be simplified to 'about'. Remove redundancy for clarity.

× Sharing the information, keeping them updated on what the current scenario is going on between the whole group.

✓ We share information and keep them updated on the current situation within the whole group.

Original is a fragment and awkwardly phrased. Make it a complete sentence with subject and verbs ('We share' and 'keep') and use 'situation' and 'within' for natural collocation.

× Since I am an extrovert, I prefer chatting with a lot of people or maybe a lot big group of people.

✓ Since I am an extrovert, I prefer chatting with a lot of people or maybe a very large group of people.

Adjective order and choice: 'a lot big group' is ungrammatical. Use 'a very large group' or 'a large group'. 'A lot of people' is acceptable; keep 'chatting' as a gerund after 'prefer'.

× Uh, I'm not just limited to chatting with only one friend as it may limit my, uh, input of information.

✓ I'm not limited to chatting with only one friend, as that may limit the amount of information I receive.

'Input of information' is awkward; use 'the amount of information I receive'. Remove redundant 'just' and rephrase for clarity.

× Uh, so, uh, since many people, uh, most people bring different type of perspectives, so I like preferred that.

✓ So, since most people bring different types of perspectives, I prefer that.

'Different type of perspectives' should be 'different types of perspectives' (plural). 'I like preferred that' mixes tenses and words; use 'I prefer that'. Remove redundant fillers.

× I am more of a face to face type of person because uh, beyond just discussing and talking about the topics, I do uh, prefer umm, the vibe they are uh, radiating, the energy they have.

✓ I am more of a face-to-face person because, beyond just discussing topics, I prefer the vibe they are radiating and the energy they have.

Use hyphenated 'face-to-face' as a compound adjective; 'discussing and talking about the topics' is redundant — use 'discussing topics'. 'Prefer the vibe they are radiating' is acceptable after removing fillers.

× Uh, so I get a better and a more clearer idea of umm, what matters to them the most.

✓ So I get a better and clearer idea of what matters most to them.

'A more clearer' is incorrect because 'clearer' already conveys the comparative; drop 'more'. Also 'what matters most to them' is the natural order.

× Maybe see their body language.

✓ I can also see their body language.

Original is a sentence fragment. Add a subject and modal to make it a complete sentence that fits context.

× Umm, maybe a friendly debate would work, uh, as a form of an argument, but I usually do not fight with my friends over anything because I uh, respect everybody's original and personal beliefs and their way of uh, taking the information.

✓ Maybe a friendly debate can serve as a form of argument, but I usually do not fight with my friends over anything because I respect everyone's personal beliefs and their ways of receiving information.

Use 'can serve' or 'would work' consistently; 'everybody's original and personal beliefs' is redundant — 'everyone's personal beliefs' suffices. 'Their way of taking the information' is awkward; use 'ways of receiving information'.

× So I'm pretty much broader minded about it.

✓ So I'm quite broad-minded about it.

Use the compound adjective 'broad-minded' and an appropriate adverb such as 'quite' rather than 'pretty much' before adjectives. Hyphenate 'broad-minded' for correctness.