Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì và giới từ), tránh lặp từ và làm câu ngắn gọn hơn. Nên mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, theo sau là 1–2 câu hỗ trợ cụ thể. Sử dụng cấu trúc tự nhiên hơn như “I enjoy chatting with friends because…” và sửa lỗi như “assist” → “help”, “when we far away” → “when we are far apart”.

예시: I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay connected. For example, when we live far apart, we use messaging apps to share news and support each other.

제안: Sắp xếp câu rõ ràng, dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Tránh dùng cụm từ mơ hồ như “like that” hoặc sai trật tự từ. Bạn có thể nói rõ tần suất và đưa ví dụ cụ thể về chủ đề và lý do.

예시: It depends on the day, but we often talk about current news, fashion trends, or food. For instance, yesterday we discussed a new restaurant that opened nearby.

제안: Giảm lặp và sửa ngữ pháp, phát triển câu trả lời với lý do rõ ràng và từ nối. Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề (“I like both, but I prefer…”), sau đó giải thích lý do cụ thể cho từng lựa chọn.

예시: I like both, but I prefer chatting in a group because it's more fun and lively. However, I also enjoy one-on-one chats when I want a deeper conversation.

제안: Loại bỏ tiếng ngập ngừng và sửa cấu trúc câu. Dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng và giải thích cụ thể tại sao (ngôn ngữ cơ thể, biểu cảm). Thay “real stronger” bằng “more genuine” hoặc “stronger”.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because we can read body language and tone, which helps us understand each other better. In-person meetings feel more genuine and build stronger connections.

제안: Tránh lặp từ và sửa ngữ pháp, giải thích ngắn gọn lý do hoặc nêu ví dụ. Thay “stay out” bằng “avoid conflicts” hoặc “resolve issues calmly”.

예시: Not really. We usually avoid serious arguments because we understand each other and try to resolve disagreements calmly through honest conversation.

× Yes, of course I really enjoyed chatting with friends because it's assist me to connect with my friend better.

✓ Yes, of course I really enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me to connect with my friends better.

Original sentence mixes past tense 'enjoyed' with a general preference and uses incorrect verb form 'assist' and singular 'friend'. Use present simple 'enjoy' for habitual actions, 'helps' (third person singular) for present, and plural 'friends'. Suggestion: use present simple for habits and ensure subject-verb agreement (it helps), and pluralize 'friends'.

× We can keep in touch when we far away so I really enjoy it.

✓ We can keep in touch when we are far away so I really enjoy it.

Missing auxiliary verb 'are' for the adjective phrase 'far away'. Use present simple with 'are' to describe current or general state (we are far away). Suggestion: include appropriate form of 'be' with adjectives describing state.

× We sometime the it's depends on the story every day.

✓ Sometimes it depends on what happened that day.

Multiple errors: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb), unnecessary 'the', incorrect structure 'it's depends' — use 'it depends' (no contraction). Clarified 'the story every day' to 'what happened that day' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: use 'it depends' for conditional statements and correct adverb 'sometimes'.

× Maybe it's about fashion or news or sometimes is food like that.

✓ Maybe it's about fashion, news, or sometimes food.

Awkward word order 'sometimes is food' — subject 'it' already refers to the topic so keep parallel noun phrases: 'about fashion, news, or food.' Removed filler 'like that'. Suggestion: keep items in a list parallel and concise.

× To be honest I do both of them I I have the a group no I have been chat with a group of people and only friend bed.

✓ To be honest I do both. I have chatted with a group of people and with only one friend.

Fragmented and ungrammatical phrasing: 'do both of them' can be shortened to 'do both.' Remove repeated words and wrong articles ('the a'). Use present perfect 'have chatted' for experience and add 'one' before 'friend'. Suggestion: use clear sentences and correct article usage.

× I think with a group of people is more funny and more excited.

✓ I think being with a group of people is more fun and more exciting.

'Funny' describes something that causes laughter; 'fun' describes enjoyment. 'Excited' is an adjective describing people, while 'exciting' describes situations. Also add 'being' for clarity. Suggestion: choose correct adjective forms: 'fun' and 'exciting.'

× Umm, to be honest, I prefer communicate face to face because we can, umm, we can understand each other better.

✓ Umm, to be honest, I prefer to communicate face to face because we can understand each other better.

After 'prefer' use either 'to' + infinitive or gerund ('prefer communicating'), so use 'prefer to communicate' for clarity. Removed redundant 'we can'. Suggestion: use a consistent verb pattern after 'prefer' and avoid repetition.

× And uh, the contact between two people is, I think it's real stronger.

✓ And uh, the contact between two people is, I think, really stronger.

Original uses 'real' incorrectly; adverb 'really' should modify 'stronger'. Also sentence is stylistically better as 'is stronger' with optional 'really' for emphasis. Suggestion: use adverb 'really' to modify comparative adjectives or simply say 'is stronger.'

× Definitely no, because umm, I can say that we are really understand each other so we always try try our best to to stay out.

✓ Definitely not, because I can say that we really understand each other so we always try our best to avoid arguments.

Use 'definitely not' instead of 'definitely no' for negative response. 'We are really understand' is incorrect — use 'we really understand' (no 'are'). Repeated words removed. 'Stay out' is unclear; 'avoid arguments' is a natural phrase. Suggestion: use correct negative short answers, correct verb forms after adverb, and choose idiomatic expressions.