Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve coherence and relevance: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid irrelevant or exaggerated claims, and limit length to 2–3 concise sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a specific reason or example. Also correct simple grammar (e.g., 'any time' -> 'at any time'; 'I have been using it' unclear — specify what 'it' is).

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends online because it's convenient and lets me stay in touch throughout the day. For example, I message my classmates when we arrange study sessions or share quick updates, which saves time compared with meeting in person.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence, use correct verb forms, and provide one or two specific examples rather than vague phrases. Use linking words (for example, such as) to make details coherent and avoid redundancy like 'communication themes'.

예시: We usually talk about Formula One and other motorsports, especially recent races and drivers. For example, last week we discussed the new circuit layout and how it might affect our favorite driver's strategy.

제안: Answer directly with a clear reason and correct grammar. Avoid repetition (e.g., 'big group of large group') and tighten sentences. Use linking words (because, so) to explain preferences and give a brief example of when one-to-one is better.

예시: I prefer chatting one-on-one because it's easier to have a meaningful conversation and both people can focus. For instance, when I'm explaining something complicated, a single friend can ask questions and I can respond without interruptions.

제안: Be concise and precise: state preference, give 1–2 clear reasons with correct phrasing (e.g., 'read facial expressions' not 'see the emotions'). Avoid filler words and vague phrases like 'share with you values.'

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can read facial expressions and body language, which helps avoid misunderstandings. For example, when discussing important issues I can gauge my friend's reaction and respond more appropriately.

제안: Use correct vocabulary and grammar: 'Argan' -> 'arguing'. Give a concise response with one clear reason and a brief example of how you resolve disagreements. Avoid repetition and filler words.

예시: No, I try to avoid arguing with friends because I prefer finding compromises. For example, when a disagreement arises about plans, I suggest alternatives until we find one that suits everyone.

× So usually we communicating about the Formula One to the motorsport and I think it is very interesting to introduce something new about it, to share emotions about it, maybe about the new race.

✓ So usually we communicate about Formula One and motorsport, and I think it is very interesting to talk about something new related to it, to share feelings about it, maybe about a new race.

The student used 'we communicating' which is incorrect verb form; after subject 'we' use the base verb 'communicate' (present simple) for habitual actions. Also 'introduce something new about it' is awkward; 'talk about' or 'discuss' is more natural. Use 'feelings' rather than 'emotions' for conversational context and 'a new race' for correct article use.

× Yes. So personally I really like to chat with friends because it's very convenient to have a talk with them during the day in any time and you don't need to go to them.

✓ Yes. Personally I really like chatting with friends because it's very convenient to talk with them at any time during the day and you don't need to go to them.

The original mixes forms and uses 'have a talk with them during the day in any time' which is ungrammatical. Use gerund 'chatting' after 'like'. Use 'talk with them at any time during the day' for correct preposition and word order.

× And I have been using it for like two or three years and I think to the most and the greatest innovation in the world.

✓ I have been using it for about two or three years, and I think it is one of the greatest innovations in the world.

The present perfect continuous 'have been using' is fine, but 'for like' should be 'for about' and 'I think to the most and the greatest innovation' is ungrammatical. Use 'one of the greatest innovations' to express ranking, and include 'it is' for a complete clause.

× So usually we communicating about the Formula One to the motorsport

✓ So usually we communicate about Formula One and motorsport

'The Formula One' and 'the motorsport' are incorrect here; 'Formula One' and 'motorsport' are general nouns and do not require the definite article. Also 'communicating' should be corrected to 'communicate' (see related verb form error).

× Yeah, so I mostly prefer to communicate face to face to see the emotions of the person.

✓ Yeah, I mostly prefer to communicate face-to-face to see a person's emotions.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated when used as a compound modifier 'face-to-face'. 'The person' is too specific; 'a person's emotions' is more natural. Also keep consistent article use.

× And yeah, we always have many communication themes to speak about.

✓ And yeah, we always have many topics to talk about.

'Communication themes' is unnatural; 'topics' is idiomatic. Use 'to talk about' rather than 'to speak about' for natural conversational English. No '-ing' issue here beyond prior corrections but categorized as phrase improvement.

× So I mostly preferred to chat with only one friend because I don't really like a big group of large group of the of people.

✓ I mostly prefer to chat with just one friend because I don't really like large groups of people.

Use present simple 'prefer' for general preference, not past 'preferred'. Also 'a big group of large group of the of people' is redundant and ungrammatical; simplify to 'large groups of people'.

× Mostly when you are chatting because you need to have a lot of attention for each one and it is not it is inconvenient.

✓ Mostly when you're chatting, you need to pay a lot of attention to each person and that's inconvenient.

'A lot of attention for each one' is incorrect collocation; use 'pay attention to each person'. Remove redundant 'it is not it is' and use 'that's inconvenient'.

× You know, it is mostly, uh, convenient to see the emotions, to understand the whole sentence of the person and, uh, maybe he wants to share with you values.

✓ You know, it's mostly convenient to see someone's emotions, to understand what the person means, and maybe they want to share their values with you.

Use 'someone's' or 'a person's' instead of 'the emotions'. 'Understand the whole sentence of the person' is unnatural; 'understand what the person means' is clearer. Use gender-neutral 'they/their' instead of 'he' when referent is general.

× Yeah, I don't really like Argan and I don't really argue with my friends because I always trying to find a compromise and uh, it is very good when you have those kind of skill to find a way of relationship with any person and mostly with your friends, you know, and mostly besties.

✓ Yeah, I don't really like arguing and I don't usually argue with my friends because I always try to find a compromise, and it's good when you have that kind of skill to build a relationship with someone, especially your friends.

'Argan' is a misspelling; should be 'arguing'. After 'I always' use base verb 'try' not 'trying'. 'Those kind of skill' should be 'that kind of skill' or 'those kinds of skills'. 'Find a way of relationship' is awkward; 'build a relationship' is natural. Use 'someone' or 'your friends' rather than 'any person' in this context.