Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (umm, uh), and correct grammar (use plural/singular correctly). Add one specific reason or example using a linking word. Keep answer within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends. I mainly use WhatsApp and Instagram because they are convenient and most of my friends use them, so it is easy to stay in touch. For example, I use WhatsApp for quick messages and Instagram for sharing photos.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence and specific details; use linking words (for example, for instance). Avoid repetition and fillers. Organize into 2–3 concise sentences describing topics and giving one concrete example.

예시: I usually talk about my daily activities and share photos or short videos. For instance, if I go somewhere interesting, I send pictures and reels so my friends can see what I did that day.

제안: Start with a clear preference statement, then give a concise reason and an example. Reduce hesitations and repetitive words. Use linking words such as because or although for coherence.

예시: I prefer chatting one-on-one because group chats often lead to overlapping messages and misunderstandings. For example, when several people reply at once it is hard to follow the conversation, so private chats feel clearer and more personal.

제안: Make a direct comparison and give specific reasons with fewer fillers. Use linking words such as because or therefore. Mention one distinct advantage of social media and one limitation of face-to-face to show balance.

예시: I prefer communicating via social media because it is quick and allows me to stay in touch with many people even when meeting in person is difficult. However, face-to-face meetings are better for important conversations, so I use both depending on the situation.

제안: Give a clear opening sentence, then explain circumstances when arguments happen with a specific example. Avoid trailing off and finish sentences completely. Use linking words like sometimes or for example to structure your answer.

예시: Not often, but sometimes we argue because people have different opinions, especially about current events. For example, we once disagreed about a recent news story and had a short argument before we agreed to respect each other's views.

× I usually use the WhatsApp and Instagram because it's very convenient to use and umm, everybody using the same pathway for communicating.

✓ I usually use WhatsApp and Instagram because they are very convenient to use and everyone uses the same platforms for communicating.

Incorrect use of definite article 'the' before app names: proper nouns for apps generally do not need 'the' (Article errors). Also 'everybody using' lacks verb agreement and 'pathway' is awkward; use 'everyone uses' (subject-verb agreement) and 'platforms' for channels.

× UH-1 and another.

✓ Also others.

Fragment and unclear pronoun use. Replace with 'Also others' or 'Other apps too' to complete the idea and match context (Incorrect use of pronouns/Sentence structure).

× So I'm also like to use the same umm, social medias.

✓ So I also like to use the same social media platforms.

'I'm also like to' is incorrect verb form; should be 'I also like to'. 'Social medias' is uncountable/pluralization issue; use 'social media platforms' (Incorrect use of pronouns/article/word form).

× I usually chat with my daily routines, like what are the things happened in my life and especially, umm, I uh, share some pictures and uh, videos.

✓ I usually chat about my daily routine, such as things that happened in my life, and I especially share pictures and videos.

Use 'chat about' not 'chat with' when indicating a topic. 'Daily routines' should be singular 'daily routine' for general activities. 'What are the things happened' is ungrammatical; use 'things that happened'. Place verbs correctly and simplify for clarity (Sentence structure errors and Past tense issue).

× Umm, I took uh, to my umm, if I'm going somewhere, I took pictures and sent it to them and uh, some reels.

✓ If I'm going somewhere, I take pictures and send them to my friends, and sometimes I post reels.

Mixing past tense 'took' with present context 'if I'm going' is wrong; use present tense 'take' and 'send' for habitual actions (Past tense issue). 'Sent it' wrong object number; use 'them'. Clarify 'some reels' to 'sometimes I post reels'.

× I usually prefer to chat with, uh, one person at a time because it's group of people, uh, everybody's thoughts are different, different, uh, umm, when I send one message, uh, somebody, uh, send another message.

✓ I usually prefer to chat with one person at a time because in a group of people, everyone's thoughts are different; when I send one message, someone else sends another message.

Missing article 'a' before 'group of people' and possessive contraction misuse. 'Everybody's thoughts' should be 'everyone's thoughts'. Verb agreement: 'somebody send' should be 'someone else sends' (Article errors and Subject-verb agreement).

× So there is no, lots of miscommunications there that time.

✓ So there are a lot of miscommunications at that time.

'There is no, lots of' mixes singular 'is' with plural 'lots'. Use 'there are a lot of miscommunications' or 'there is no communication' depending on meaning. Also 'there that time' should be 'at that time' (Incorrect use of quantifiers and Preposition).

× So I usually prefer only one friend and uh, it's private.

✓ So I usually prefer chatting with only one friend because it's private.

Awkward pronoun reference: 'it's private' is okay but sentence flows better when linked to 'chatting'. Clarify subject to avoid ambiguity (Sentence structure/Pronoun clarity).

× I usually prefer, uh, to communicate via social media because, uh, we cannot get a chance to face to face communication every time.

✓ I usually prefer to communicate via social media because we cannot have face-to-face communication all the time.

'Get a chance to face to face communication' is non-idiomatic. Use modal/phrasing 'cannot have' and hyphenate 'face-to-face' (Modal verb usage/idiomatic phrasing).

× So nowadays also people always are using social media.

✓ Nowadays, people always use social media.

Word order is awkward 'people always are using' should be 'people always use' or 'people are always using'. Simplify to present simple for habitual action (Incorrect use of pronouns/Word order).

× So it's very convenient and keep in touch with everybody in, in a single second.

✓ So it's very convenient and lets you keep in touch with everybody instantly.

'Keep in touch' needs a subject; use 'lets you keep in touch'. 'In a single second' is unnatural; use 'instantly' (Incorrect adverb placement and sentence structure).

× Not really, but sometimes I argue with friends because everybody's thoughts are different.

✓ Not really, but sometimes I argue with friends because everyone's opinions are different.

'Everybody's thoughts are different' is understandable but 'opinions' is more natural. Maintain present simple for habitual action (Present tense/Word choice).

× So once, for example, once I took a topic, especially on some everybody activities or some recent news.

✓ For example, once I brought up a topic about people's activities or recent news.

Repetition 'once, for example, once' and 'I took a topic' is incorrect; use 'I brought up a topic'. 'Some everybody activities' is ungrammatical; use 'people's activities' (Sentence structure errors and Incorrect use of pronouns).