Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更自然、句子更简洁，并注意语法和用词。可用一两句概括是否喜欢，再举1-2个具体情境作为支持，避免重复（如“like chat”“talk talking”）。注意主谓一致与时态，例如“I like to chat”而不是“I like chat”。

예시: Yes, I do. I’m not very outgoing, but I often talk to friends when I’m happy or upset to share feelings and get advice.

제안: 回答应直接用现在时描述习惯，并提供具体细节。避免冗长重复（如“workplace”与“work”重复）。可以把过去和现在分成两句，并用连接词使逻辑清晰。注意语法：'I like to chat about…'

예시: When I was at school, I used to talk about exams and part-time jobs. Now I usually discuss work tasks, deadlines and how to cope with stress.

제안: 回答要更流利和自信，避免口语中犹豫词（uh）。用一两句给出偏好并解释原因，使用连词（because, so）使表达连贯。数字用单词one更自然。

예시: I prefer chatting with one close friend because I feel more comfortable and can have a deeper, personal conversation rather than small talk in a group.

제안: 注意代词和短语的正确使用（'ask them to go out'，'go for a walk'），并用更自然的搭配。把原因和例子紧凑表达，避免不必要重复。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal. If I have news, I usually invite a friend to go for a walk or go shopping so we can talk and relax together.

제안: 回答要更简洁并提供具体例子或处理方式，使用更自然的表达（'we usually have different opinions'→'we sometimes disagree'）。可以说明如何解决分歧来显示成熟的交流能力。

예시: I rarely argue with friends. We sometimes disagree, but I try to stay calm and talk it through, and usually we reconcile after a short time.

× Yes, though I'm not an outgoing girl, I like chat with my friends when I have something happy, or when I feel sad, or when I feel angry, etc. I like talk talking these things with my friends.

✓ Yes, though I'm not an outgoing girl, I like chatting with my friends when I'm happy, or when I feel sad, or when I feel angry, etc. I like talking about these things with my friends.

句子中应使用動名詞 (verb + -ing) 作為 like 的賓語，例如 like chatting / like talking。原句的 'like chat' 和 'like talk talking' 是錯誤的形式。此外，習慣用法是 'talk about something' 表示談論某事，因此需改為 'talking about these things'。建議練習 when 後時態一致（用 I'm happy）和 talk about 的固定搭配。

× When I was in school I like chat with my friends about my study and my part time jobs, and when I work in the work workplace I like talk with my friends about my job, the stressful life.

✓ When I was in school I liked chatting with my friends about my studies and my part-time jobs, and when I worked in the workplace I liked talking with my colleagues about my job and the stressful life.

句子涉及過去時間 'When I was in school'，因此主要動詞需用過去式 (liked、worked)。另外 'chat' 應改為動名詞 'chatting'；'study' 作可數名詞時用複數 'studies'；'part time jobs' 應為 'part-time jobs'（連字符）；'workplace' 用單詞，且在工作時跟同事(chat with colleagues) 比較自然。建議注意時間狀語與動詞時態一致，及動名詞用法。

× I prefer to chat with the only one friend because I'm not an outgoing girl, so when I go out with many friends I don't know what to say and I think 1 friend can talk only to me, that's what I want and uh.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I'm not an outgoing girl, so when I go out with many friends I don't know what to say and I think one friend can talk only to me; that's what I want.

原句 'the only one friend' 用法不自然，應為 'only one friend' 或 'the only friend' 根據語意選擇。數字 '1' 在正式寫作中應寫成 'one'。此外把句子拆成更清晰的分句，並刪去多餘語氣詞 'uh'。建議學習限定詞 (only, the) 的用法及一致寫法。

× I prefer to communicate face to face. When I have something to share with my friends, I would like to ask she or he to go out. We can chat at the same time, go shopping or go for a work that's relaxing.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face. When I have something to share with my friends, I would like to ask them to go out. We can chat at the same time, go shopping, or go somewhere to relax from work.

原句 'ask she or he to go out' 代詞用法錯誤且不自然，應用複數代詞 'them' 或 'ask him or her'（但口語常用 'them'）。'go for a work that's relaxing' 的介詞和名詞搭配不正確，應改為 'go somewhere to relax from work' 或 'do something relaxing'。建議學習代詞的正確形式和常見介詞搭配（go shopping, go somewhere to relax）。

× I don't argue with friends, I think as a person we usually have different opinions but there is no need to argue. Sometimes I will be unhappy but some days later I'm OK and I will also chat with my friends.

✓ I don't argue with friends. I think as individuals we usually have different opinions, but there is no need to argue. Sometimes I will be unhappy, but a few days later I'm OK and I will chat with my friends again.

原句 'as a person we usually' 的代詞與單複數不一致且表達不自然，應用複數或複體 'as individuals'。'some days later' 更自然的表達是 'a few days later' 或 'some days later' 可用但需加冠詞或量詞。最後 'I will also chat' 改為 'I will chat ... again' 更符合語境。建議注意代詞與名詞的一致性以及時間短語的常用表達。