Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần cải thiện tính tự nhiên, ngữ pháp và tính mạch lạc. Trả lời nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh câu quá dài và sai ngữ pháp. Sử dụng liên từ hợp lý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: hoạt động khi trò chuyện, tần suất). Ví dụ: sửa các lỗi như 'catching up' đúng, 'it is mean to' -> 'it means', 'keeping earth connected' -> 'keeping us connected'.

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy catching up with friends because talking about our days helps me relax and reduces stress. For example, we often share funny stories or discuss plans for the weekend, which strengthens our bond and support for each other.

제안: Cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh mâu thuẫn trong câu. Tránh các cụm từ không phù hợp ('shoot the breeze' tốt nhưng dùng đúng ngữ cảnh) và loại bỏ lặp từ. Bắt đầu với câu chủ đề, rồi dùng liên từ để phân biệt hai nhóm bạn và đưa ví dụ cụ thể về chủ đề trò chuyện.

예시: It depends on the friend. With close friends, we often talk casually and share personal stories or feelings. With acquaintances, I usually discuss daily events or recent activities, for example, what happened at work or plans for the weekend.

제안: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và mạch lạc, giảm lặp và sửa ngữ pháp ('I prefer' thay vì 'I refer'). Tránh thông tin không liên quan ('older people') nếu không giải thích rõ. Bổ sung một hoặc hai lý do cụ thể và ví dụ ngắn.

예시: I prefer talking one-on-one because I can have deeper, more meaningful conversations. For example, when I discuss personal problems with a close friend, I feel more comfortable and able to focus without distractions.

제안: Cần sửa rất nhiều lỗi từ vựng và phát âm ý nghĩa (ví dụ 'rape the emotions' sai nghiêm trọng; có lẽ ý là 'read the emotions'). Dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng: "For important conversations, I prefer...; for casual chats..." Thêm ví dụ cụ thể (video call for interviews, messaging for quick plans).

예시: For important or emotional topics I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read facial expressions and tone of voice. However, for quick or casual chats, I use social media or messaging apps since they are more convenient when I'm busy.

제안: Trả lời thiếu rõ ràng, nhiều lỗi từ vựng ('disgracement', 'acting' sai từ) và cấu trúc lủng củng. Nên nói trực tiếp về tần suất, nguyên nhân và cách giải quyết mâu thuẫn với ví dụ cụ thể. Sử dụng từ thích hợp như 'disagreement' và 'talking' hoặc 'discussing problems'.

예시: Yes, we sometimes have disagreements, usually about misunderstandings or different expectations. When this happens, we give each other a day to cool off and then talk calmly to resolve the issue. For example, once my friend and I disagreed about plans, but after discussing calmly we found a compromise.

× With friends, yes definitely I enjoy talking with friends because I find it catching up and it is mean to and sharing story not only helps me unwind and relieve my stress but also strengthen my friendship by keeping earth connected and support.

✓ With friends, yes, definitely. I enjoy talking with friends because I find it helps me catch up and share stories. Not only does it help me unwind and relieve stress, but it also strengthens my friendships by keeping us connected and supportive.

The sentence uses incorrect adjective/adverb forms and awkward phrasing. 'Catching up' should be used as a verb phrase 'helps me catch up'; 'sharing story' should be plural 'share stories'; 'strengthen my friendship' should be 'strengthens my friendships' for subject-verb agreement and pluralization; 'keeping earth connected' is incorrect word choice—use 'keeping us connected'. Suggestion: break long run-on sentence into shorter sentences, use correct verb forms and plural nouns, and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Well, it depends on what kind of friends. For close friends, I would love to shoot the breeze because we don't have any personal lives or personal lives to talk about this. And but for the normal friends I will talk about, I talk about what happened during our day and week or share share some stories.

✓ Well, it depends on what kind of friends. With close friends, I like to shoot the breeze because we are comfortable talking about personal things. But with casual friends, I talk about what happened during our day or week and share some stories.

The original has redundant and incorrect phrasing ('we don't have any personal lives' is wrong), repetition ('share share') and poor sentence flow. Suggestion: clarify contrast between close and casual friends, remove redundancy, use correct collocations like 'shoot the breeze' and 'casual friends', and correct verb forms.

× I I refer deeper, more meaningful conversation with one friend, umm, I feel comfortable. I feel more comfortable sharing my personal thoughts with one friend rather than uh yeah rather than with the older people. And I think that it's easier to focus and connect.

✓ I prefer deeper, more meaningful conversations with one friend. I feel more comfortable sharing my personal thoughts with one person rather than with a group, and it's easier to focus and connect.

Multiple issues: 'I I refer' is a typo; 'refer' should be 'prefer'; 'conversation' should be plural 'conversations' or rephrase; 'older people' is inappropriate and unclear—likely meant 'a group' or 'many people'. Suggestion: correct typos, use 'prefer', use plural where appropriate, and replace unclear references with precise terms.

× Umm 4 important and emotional conversation. I refer face to face face to face because I can rape the emotions and and build there is me to read between the lines. But for the casual chess or when I'm busy, social media is more convenient because I can test or, uh, chat with the distance.

✓ For important and emotional conversations, I prefer face-to-face because I can read emotions and subtle cues. But for casual chats or when I'm busy, social media is more convenient because I can text or chat at a distance.

Errors include misuse of '4' instead of 'for', 'refer' instead of 'prefer', 'rape the emotions' is a severe and incorrect word choice (probably 'read' or 'grasp'), 'chess' should be 'chats', 'test' should be 'text', and awkward phrases like 'build there is me to read between the lines'. Suggestion: use correct words, avoid typos, and prefer clear collocations like 'face-to-face', 'read emotions', 'casual chats', and 'text'.

× Yes, sometimes when I have some disgracement with my friends, uh, honestly, we often stop, uh, some days to think clearly and I think that's what, uh, everything is turns out to bury the hardship. So, and based on my experience, acting is a good way to share and express.

✓ Yes, sometimes when I have disagreements with my friends, we often take a few days to think clearly, and I think that's how things get resolved. Based on my experience, talking is a good way to share and express feelings.

Problems: 'disgracement' is incorrect—use 'disagreement'; 'stop some days' should be 'take a few days'; 'everything is turns out to bury the hardship' is ungrammatical and unclear—replaced with 'that's how things get resolved'; 'acting' is wrong word—use 'talking'. Suggestion: choose precise vocabulary, use common collocations ('take a few days', 'disagreement'), and simplify sentence structure for clarity.