Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, correct grammar (subject-verb agreement), and avoid fillers. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Aim for natural phrasing and no more than 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay in touch and learn how they are doing. For example, we often share how our days went and any problems we are facing, which helps us support each other.

제안: Be specific and organize ideas with linking words. Avoid hesitation and unclear phrases. Give 1–2 clear categories of topics and a brief example to support them.

예시: I usually talk about my daily routine and recent news. For instance, I might tell a friend about my work schedule, and we also discuss personal problems so we can give each other advice.

제안: Answer directly, reduce repetition and hesitations, and use a linking phrase to explain why. Provide a concise reason and a brief example of a situation when you prefer one-on-one conversations.

예시: I prefer chatting one-on-one with a close friend because I feel more comfortable sharing personal matters. For example, I would discuss my problems with a best friend rather than in a group so I can speak openly.

제안: Give a clear preference and support it with 1–2 specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar and use natural vocabulary (e.g., "in person" instead of "face to face is good away"). Avoid repeating words and fillers.

예시: Although in-person meetings are nicer for deeper conversations, I prefer communicating via social media because I am often busy. For example, messaging lets me stay in touch quickly and check in with friends at any time.

제안: Answer clearly and correct unclear phrases. Use a linking word to contrast (e.g., "however") and give a brief example of when an argument might happen. Keep it concise and avoid vague wording like "very less."

예시: I rarely argue with my best friends because we usually share similar opinions. However, occasionally we disagree about how to solve practical problems, such as planning group tasks, and we then discuss until we reach a compromise.

× Yes, chatting with friends help me to keep in touch with them and also, uh, know about their days and their problems.

✓ Yes, chatting with friends helps me to keep in touch with them and also to know about their days and their problems.

The subject 'chatting' is a singular gerund; it requires the singular verb 'helps'. Also add 'to' before 'know' to form the infinitive 'to know' for parallel structure. Grammar problem type ID:27

× So I like chatting with friends because we uh, don't want a lot of, uh, time to chat.

✓ So I like chatting with friends because we don't need a lot of time to chat.

The phrase 'don't want a lot of time to chat' is awkward and unclear. Use 'don't need' to express lack of necessity. This improves clarity and sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I usually chat about my routine day or uh, some news about uh, people with uh, no uh, we are common, uh, and also talk about problems and helping.

✓ I usually chat about my daily routine or about news of people we know in common, and also about problems and how to help.

Use 'about' consistently for topics; 'routine day' should be 'daily routine'. 'People we know in common' replaces unclear wording. Add 'how to' before 'help' to clarify intent. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Actually I like to chat with one friend actually, and in fact, uh, close friend, not such a group because I want to chat about my uh, daily routine and my problem.

✓ Actually, I prefer to chat with one close friend, not a group, because I want to talk about my daily routine and my problems.

Include 'a' before 'close friend' and 'group'. Use 'prefer' for clarity and replace 'chat about' with 'talk about'. 'Problem' should be plural if referring to personal issues generally. This fixes article use and noun number. Grammar problem type ID:22

× So I don't want anyone else know about that.

✓ So I don't want anyone else to know about that.

The verb 'want' requires the infinitive 'to know' for the following verb. Adding 'to' fixes the pronoun clause structure. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Face to face is good, uh, away for, uh, touching with your friend, but I prefer chatting with my friend because I'm busy person.

✓ Face to face is good, a way of interacting with your friend, but I prefer chatting with my friends because I'm a busy person.

'Away' should be 'a way'; 'touching with' is incorrect—use 'interacting with' or 'meeting'. 'Friend' should be plural if general; add article 'a' before 'busy person'. This corrects prepositions and articles. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I don't, I don't have enough time and I actually sometimes and uh, with uh, social media, we can access our friends every time.

✓ I don't have enough time, and with social media we can access our friends at any time.

Remove redundant words; 'every time' is unnatural here—use 'at any time'. Fixes plural/context and streamlines sentence. Grammar problem type ID:1

× How with my best friends know because we are the same and common idea.

✓ I don't argue with my best friends because we have the same opinions and ideas.

Original sentence is ungrammatical. Rephrase to subject-verb structure: 'I don't argue... because we have the same opinions'. 'Common idea' becomes 'same opinions and ideas' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:26

× But yes sometimes I argue with my friends about how to do when we face 2 problems but it's very less.

✓ But yes, sometimes I argue with my friends about how to handle problems when we face them, but it happens very infrequently.

Place 'sometimes' correctly and rephrase 'about how to do when we face 2 problems' to 'about how to handle problems when we face them'. 'Very less' is incorrect; use 'very infrequently' or 'rarely'. This corrects adverb placement and word choice. Grammar problem type ID:20