Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more natural and coherent by giving a clear topic sentence, removing redundancies, and adding one or two specific examples. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us stay updated and support each other. For example, we often discuss recent news or share tips on dealing with work stress. This kind of conversation makes me feel closer to them and helps me solve problems.

제안: Start with a direct topic sentence, then add specific details and one linking phrase. Avoid fillers like 'uh' and repeat words. Keep it concise and give a concrete example of the kind of advice you receive.

예시: I usually chat about personal updates, my daily routine and any problems I have. For instance, when I was stressed about exams, my friends suggested a study schedule and relaxation techniques, which helped a lot.

제안: Answer directly, explain the reason clearly and add a short supporting detail to make it more natural. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' correctly and avoid repetition.

예시: I prefer talking to one close friend because I feel more comfortable sharing personal problems and secrets. For example, when I need advice about relationships I only tell one trusted friend so it stays private.

제안: Give a concise topic sentence stating your preference, then contrast briefly with the alternative using linking words (although, but) and provide a specific reason or example. Avoid repeating phrases like 'I prefer'.

예시: I prefer communicating via social media because my schedule is very busy and it's easier to contact friends quickly. Although face-to-face meetings are more personal, messaging allows me to stay in touch anytime between work and classes.

제안: Clarify your main point with a direct topic sentence and avoid unclear phrases. Explain how often and why arguments happen, and give a short example of a typical disagreement. Remove fillers and vague expressions.

예시: We rarely argue because we usually share the same opinions and understand each other. When we do disagree, it is often about small things like choosing a restaurant, and we resolve it quickly by compromising.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends because we can't talk about some new news or opera daily route routine daily and share or opinion about how to face the problem and chatting is the best way.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because we can talk about recent news, our daily routines, and share opinions about how to face problems; chatting is the best way.

The original sentence uses incorrect conjunctions and awkward word order ('can't' should be 'can', 'some new news or opera daily route routine daily' is ungrammatical and redundant). Combine ideas with commas and use parallel structure for a list (news, routines, opinions). Replace 'can't' with 'can' because context indicates ability. Use 'problems' plural and a semicolon or conjunction to connect the final clause. Suggestion: list items in parallel form and use correct conjunctions.

× I usually chat with my friends and talk about my latest news or about my daily routines and also if I have a problems, uh, I uh, they give me advice to uh, face the problem.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about my latest news and my daily routines. If I have a problem, they give me advice on how to face it.

Errors: 'a problems' is incorrect quantifier/number (should be 'a problem' or 'problems'); sentence is also run-on and repetitive. Use 'about' once, split into two sentences for clarity, and use 'advice on how to face it' rather than 'advice to face the problem.' Suggestion: use correct singular/plural and preposition 'on' with 'advice' and replace vague fillers.

× I prefer one close friend because I want chat about my problems and my secrets, so I don't like other people know about me and spread my secrets to other.

✓ I prefer one close friend because I want to talk about my problems and secrets, so I don't want other people to know about me and spread my secrets to others.

Errors: Missing infinitive marker 'to' before 'talk' and incorrect verb forms ('know' needs 'to' before it), and 'other' should be 'others' for plural. Also 'my secrets to other' missing 's'. Use 'don't want other people to know' and 'spread my secrets to others.' Suggestion: include 'to' for infinitives and use plural nouns when referring to people in general.

× Although face to face conversation is a good way to connect with our friends but I'm a busy person and I don't have enough time.

✓ Although face-to-face conversation is a good way to connect with friends, I'm a busy person and don't have enough time.

Errors: 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective; the sentence uses both 'Although' and 'but' which is redundant; 'our friends' can be 'friends' for neutrality. Suggestion: use one subordinating conjunction (either 'Although' or start with 'Face-to-face conversation is... but'), hyphenate compound adjective, and remove redundant words.

× So for me personally I prefer a social media because I can reach to my friend every time anytime so I prefer that.

✓ So personally, I prefer social media because I can reach my friends anytime, so I prefer it.

Errors: 'a social media' is incorrect article usage (social media is uncountable/plural), 'reach to my friend' should be 'reach my friends', 'every time anytime' is redundant. Suggestion: use 'social media' without 'a', use 'reach someone' (no 'to'), plural 'friends' if general, and 'anytime' once.

× My friends and I really have a same opinion. Uh, or inside the legs. So, uh, we, yes, we argue with each other, but really not often because we know each other.

✓ My friends and I generally have the same opinions, so we do argue sometimes, but not often because we understand each other.

Errors: 'a same opinion' incorrect article and number; 'inside the legs' is nonsensical; sentence contains fillers and fragmented structure. Rewrite for clarity: use 'have the same opinions' (plural) or 'have a similar opinion', remove meaningless phrase, and express frequency correctly. Suggestion: avoid fillers and unclear phrases; use concise expressions for frequency and reason.