Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar (use present simple, plural forms), and limit to up to 3–4 sentences. Add one specific supporting detail or example to make your answer more informative.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I usually message them in my free time to catch up and share funny stories, which helps me relax. For example, last weekend we spent an hour planning a small get-together via chat.

제안: Provide a direct topic sentence and then give 1–2 specific examples instead of vague phrases. Use linking words (for example, also) and correct awkward phrasing.

예시: We usually chat about plans for hangouts and our college experiences. For example, we often discuss which cafés to visit and share memories from tuition classes, and sometimes we also talk about movies or exams.

제안: Answer directly and fluently: state your preference clearly, give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (because, so), and avoid hesitations and repetition. Use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary (privacy, personal matters).

예시: I prefer chatting one-on-one because it feels more private and comfortable. For example, I can discuss personal problems or study plans with a close friend without worrying about other people reading the messages.

제안: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and an example. Use smoother phrasing and linking words (because, therefore), avoid repetition and grammatical errors.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's easier to avoid misunderstandings and read body language. For instance, when discussing group project roles in person, we can clarify tasks immediately and avoid confusion later.

제안: Be precise: correct the verb choice and structure ("argue with friends"), state frequency and reason, and give a brief example to show the context. Keep it to 2–3 short sentences and avoid repetitive words.

예시: Yes, sometimes I argue with friends, usually over small misunderstandings. For example, we once disagreed about who would pay for a meal, but we quickly sorted it out and it didn't affect our friendship.

× whenever I got free time, I like to send message to my friend and they reply me and we spend a good time by chatting.

✓ whenever I get free time, I like to send messages to my friends and they reply to me and we spend a good time chatting.

Mixed past and present tense: 'got' is past but context is habitual so use present 'get' (present tense issue - ID 6 applies but primary is past tense misuse, ID 5). Also plural/singular issues: 'message' should be plural 'messages' and 'friend' should be 'friends'. Missing preposition: 'reply me' should be 'reply to me'. Remove redundant 'by' before 'chatting'. Suggestion: keep consistent present tense for habitual actions, use correct plural forms and include the preposition 'to' after 'reply'.

× So yeah, that's why chatting, I like chatting with my friends.

✓ So yeah, that's why I like chatting with my friends.

Redundant word order and unnecessary comma. The clause should be 'I like chatting' with subject before verb. Present participle 'chatting' is fine but placement was incorrect (ID 10). Suggestion: place subject before verb and remove repetition for clarity.

× Most of the time we talk about like a different kind of places for our hangout and we talk about our college time, our tuition time and and others included.

✓ Most of the time we talk about different places to hang out, our college experiences, tuition time, and other things.

Incorrect and wordy preposition use: 'places for our hangout' is awkward; better 'places to hang out'. Redundant 'like' and duplicate 'and and'. Use parallel noun phrases 'college experiences' and 'tuition time'. Suggestion: use concise prepositional phrases and parallel structure (ID 11).

× So basically we are talking about we talk and chat about different things.

✓ So basically we talk and chat about different things.

Redundant and ungrammatical repetition 'we are talking about we talk'. Simplify to a single present tense clause for habitual action. Maintain consistent tense (ID 26).

× There is no specific topic.

✓ There is no specific topic.

This sentence is correct; no change needed. It uses 'there is' appropriately to indicate absence of a specific topic (ID 3).

× I prefer, uh, chat only with one, one friend, uh, not, not in a group because if you chat in a group, uh, many people, uh, don't like that, uh, there is some privacy and we can, we don't talk about, uh, we don't talk that in a group.

✓ I prefer to chat only with one friend, not in a group, because if you chat in a group, many people may not like it since there is less privacy and we avoid some topics in a group.

Incorrect verb form: 'prefer, uh, chat' should be 'prefer to chat' (use infinitive after 'prefer' — ID 8). Use 'many people may not like it' for clarity and correct pronoun 'it'. 'There is some privacy' should be 'there is less privacy' to match intended meaning (preposition/word choice issue ID 11). Suggestion: use infinitive after 'prefer', remove fillers, and clarify reason with correct comparative expression.

× I prefer face to face communicate because by online chatting we go through some misunderstanding difficulties and other things.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because online chatting can lead to misunderstandings and other problems.

Incorrect form: 'face to face communicate' should be noun 'face-to-face communication' or 'to communicate face to face' (ID 8). 'misunderstanding difficulties' is awkward; use 'misunderstandings'. 'by online chatting we go through' is unnatural; use 'online chatting can lead to'. Suggestion: use correct noun form for the choice and clearer phrasing for consequences.

× So I think by face to face communicate, we don't even get hesitate and we feel good to communicate.

✓ So I think when we communicate face to face, we don't hesitate and we feel comfortable communicating.

Incorrect pronoun/verb forms and word order: 'by face to face communicate' is ungrammatical; use 'when we communicate face to face' or 'by communicating face to face' (ID 12). 'get hesitate' is incorrect; use 'hesitate'. 'feel good to communicate' should be 'feel comfortable communicating'. Suggestion: use proper verb forms and idiomatic collocations.

× Yes. So I think face face to face is very good.

✓ Yes. So I think face-to-face communication is very good.

Repetition 'face face' and missing hyphens/article. Use 'face-to-face communication' for clarity (ID 22 and 17). Suggestion: avoid repetition and use standard compound adjective/noun forms.

× Yes, sometimes I work with friends because of our misunderstandings, but not only all time we are good friends, but for some silly issue, silly issues we get in argues not a big, it's not a big issue for us.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with friends because of misunderstandings, but not all the time; we are good friends. For some silly issues we get into arguments, but it's not a big problem for us.

Wrong verb 'work with friends' instead of 'argue with friends'. Tense and word choice errors: 'not only all time' should be 'not all the time'. 'get in argues' is incorrect; use 'get into arguments' (preposition and noun form - IDs 11 and 14). Clarify 'not a big' to 'not a big problem'. Suggestion: use correct verbs ('argue'), idiomatic prepositions ('argue with', 'get into arguments'), and clear quantifiers/phrasing.