Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Start with a concise topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add a specific example or brief reason. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and use linking words for fluency.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I talk with them every day because regular conversations help us stay close, for example we often discuss small events from our day which keeps our bond strong.

제안: Give a clearer topic sentence and then provide 1–2 specific examples of topics using a linking word to connect ideas. Avoid awkward phrasing.

예시: We usually talk about our daily lives. For instance, we discuss work or school experiences and share tips on handling problems, which helps each of us learn from the other.

제안: Answer directly, then contrast reasons briefly using linking words (e.g., because, whereas). Correct singular/plural forms and reduce repetition.

예시: I prefer chatting one-on-one because it allows me to focus on the other person’s ideas and have a deeper conversation, whereas group chats often become noisy and less personal.

제안: Keep the answer concise, use a clearer linking word and a specific brief reason (e.g., facial expressions, tone). Avoid awkward phrases like 'fast beating technology era.'

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can read facial expressions and tone of voice, which makes it easier to understand someone’s emotions compared with social media.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence, then explain how you resolve disagreements with a specific strategy. Fix pronoun errors and choose appropriate words (e.g., 'exchange ideas').

예시: I rarely argue with my friends because I believe arguments damage relationships. Instead, I try to discuss differences calmly and listen to their point of view so we can find a compromise.

× Yes, I do like chatting with my friend and I always chat with my friends every day because during the conversation I can strengthen our relationship.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends and I chat with them every day because during the conversation I can strengthen our relationships.

The sentence mixes singular and plural: 'my friend' vs 'my friends' and uses redundant 'do like' and 'always ... every day'. Use plural 'friends' and consistent pronouns 'them'; 'relationships' is more natural when referring to multiple friendships. Also simplify auxiliary verbs for natural speech. Grammar problem type ID:1

× My friends and I usually chat about our daily lives and so that we can share experience with each other.

✓ My friends and I usually chat about our daily lives so that we can share experiences with each other.

Remove unnecessary 'and' before 'so that' and use plural 'experiences' to match 'share' with countable occurrences. 'So that' expresses purpose and should not be preceded by 'and'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because when we are chatting with a group of people, we can't really concentrate on what one is talking about.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because when we chat in a group, we can't really concentrate on what one person is talking about.

Use 'person' instead of 'one' for clarity; simplify tense to present simple 'chat' for habitual actions. 'When we are chatting with a group of people' is wordy; 'when we chat in a group' is more natural. Grammar problem type ID:12

× But if we are only chatting with individual, we can focus on what they are talking about.

✓ But if we are chatting with an individual, we can focus on what they are saying.

Use the article 'an' before 'individual'. 'Chatting with individual' is ungrammatical. Also 'they are talking about' is less precise than 'they are saying' in this context. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I prefer to communicate face to face in this fast beating technology era because while we are talking face to face, we can easily recognize how others feel and how they talk.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face in this fast-becoming technology era because when we talk face to face, we can easily recognize how others feel and how they speak.

Use hyphenated adjective 'fast-becoming' (or use 'rapidly advancing') to describe the era; 'while we are talking' is wordy—'when we talk' is better for habitual actions. 'How they speak' is more natural than 'how they talk.' Grammar problem type ID:11

× I rarely argue with my friends because I don't think argument will enhance our relationship. Instead, I will talk to my friends and exchange her idea.

✓ I rarely argue with my friends because I don't think arguments will enhance our relationships. Instead, I talk to my friends and exchange ideas with them.

Use plural 'arguments' and 'relationships' to match general meaning. 'I will talk' implies future; use present simple 'I talk' for habitual behavior. 'Exchange her idea' is incorrect pronoun and singular noun; use 'ideas' and 'with them' to refer back to friends. Grammar problem type ID:6