Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatical, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), fix verb forms, and end with one specific benefit. Use one or two linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We share ideas and advice, and when I face problems I ask for their opinions, which helps me find solutions. Moreover, talking with friends recharges my energy and improves my mood.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence, be specific about topics, avoid repetition, and use clear linking phrases. Correct unclear expressions (e.g. "two heads are better than one") and finish the answer cleanly.

예시: I usually talk about everyday things like work, study plans and my daily routine. If I have a problem I ask for advice, because two heads are better than one and my friends often suggest helpful solutions.

제안: Open with a clear preference sentence, give two concise reasons with linking words, and avoid unfinished thoughts. Use correct pronouns and complete the final idea.

예시: I prefer chatting with one close friend rather than a group. It feels more comfortable and private, and I can trust them to give honest advice without feeling judged.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and two specific reasons with linking words. Reduce hesitations and finish the final point about non-verbal cues. Use natural phrasing.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it reduces misunderstandings and feels more secure. Also, non-verbal cues like facial expressions and gestures help me understand the speaker's true meaning.

제안: Answer directly and concisely. State whether you argue, then give one or two clear reasons and an example or result. Remove fillers and finish the thought about outcomes of arguments.

예시: Yes, we sometimes argue because everyone has different opinions and personalities. However, these disagreements are usually short-lived and often help us understand each other's viewpoints better.

× Yes, definitely I like to hanging out uh with my friends and also we can uh have a lot of uh conversation with each other.

✓ Yes, definitely I like hanging out with my friends and we can have a lot of conversation with each other.

After 'like' use the gerund form without 'to' (like + -ing). Remove filler 'uh' and extra 'to'. Use 'have a lot of conversation' or better 'have many conversations' for naturalness.

× I can share my ideas uh with them and uh when I have lots of problems, I ask for their opinion, so they can help me uh chatting uh with friends uh recharges my batteries and improves my.

✓ I can share my ideas with them, and when I have many problems I ask for their opinion so they can help me. Chatting with friends recharges my batteries and improves my mood.

Use 'many problems' not 'lots of' in this formal sentence or keep 'lots of' consistently. 'Ask for their opinion' is correct; separate sentences for clarity. Use 'chatting with friends' as subject; 'recharges' agrees with singular gerund subject and add object 'mood' to complete 'improves my...'. Avoid filler words.

× When I hang out with my close friends, I prefer to share lots of things with them and I sometimes chat with them about my daily routines.

✓ When I hang out with my close friends, I prefer to share many things with them, and I sometimes chat with them about my daily routine.

Use 'many' instead of 'lots of' for formal correctness; 'daily routine' is usually singular when speaking of one person's routine. Keep present simple consistent.

× And when I have lots of problems, I ask a question about them to find a solution.

✓ When I have many problems, I ask them questions to find a solution.

'Ask a question about them' is awkward; 'ask them questions' uses correct object pronoun 'them' and plural 'questions' or 'ask a question' + 'about the problems'. Ensure pronoun refers clearly to friends.

× I believe that two ads are better than 1, so it's really better method and I can rely on them and.

✓ I believe that two heads are better than one, so it's a better method and I can rely on them.

Original likely intended proverb 'two heads are better than one'. Use 'heads' not 'ads'; write numbers in words in formal speech. Include article 'a' before 'better method' and remove trailing 'and'.

× When it comes to chat with others, I prefer to chat with my close friend compared to other people or group of people because it's really comfortable for me.

✓ When it comes to chatting with others, I prefer to chat with my close friend rather than with other people or groups because it's much more comfortable for me.

Use 'come to' + gerund 'chatting'. Use 'rather than' for comparisons and pluralize 'groups'. Use 'much more comfortable' for degree.

× We are really we can keep our privacy and also I can rely on her, I can trust her compared to group of people.

✓ We can keep our privacy, and I can rely on and trust her more than a group of people.

Remove duplicate 'we are really'. Combine 'rely on her' and 'trust her'. Use 'more than' for comparison and 'a group of people' with article.

× It prevents me.

✓ It helps prevent me from feeling exposed.

'It prevents me' is incomplete; include what is prevented and use idiomatic expression 'prevent someone from' + gerund. Provide clear object.

× Actually, I prefer to communicate face to face because it prevents, uh, misunderstanding and also is really, uh, secure place, uh, for having, uh, conversation with others and it's, uh, prevents, uh, misinterpretation.

✓ Actually, I prefer to communicate face to face because it prevents misunderstanding and is a much more secure way to have conversations with others and prevents misinterpretation.

Remove filler 'uh'. Use 'face to face' without 'to'. 'Prevents misunderstanding' is correct; use 'is a much more secure way' rather than 'is really secure place'. Use plural 'conversations'. Avoid repeating 'prevents'.

× The other thing that I like to mention is person has a special, uh, body, uh, gestures and also facial expression can, uh.

✓ Another thing I'd like to mention is that a person has specific body gestures and facial expressions that convey meaning.

Add 'that' after 'mention'. Use 'a person has specific body gestures and facial expressions' and complete the clause with 'that convey meaning'. Avoid fillers and ensure noun-agreement.

× Yes, definitely each person has different ideas and also each person is really unique in terms of their behavior and opinion and personalized.

✓ Yes, definitely each person has different ideas and is unique in terms of their behavior and opinions and personal characteristics.

Ensure agreement: 'each person... is' not 'are'. Use 'opinions' plural and 'personal characteristics' instead of 'personalized'.

× So it's inevitable when we have conversation, we sometimes have lots of uh, argument with each other and also it leads to uh, get a disagreement and also.

✓ So it's inevitable that when we have conversations we sometimes have arguments with each other, which can lead to disagreements.

Add 'that' to introduce clause, pluralize 'conversations' and 'arguments', and rephrase 'leads to get a disagreement' to 'lead to disagreements'. Remove fillers and trailing 'and also'.