Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp, từ không phù hợp. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, giải thích lý do cụ thể với 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ, và tránh lặp từ. Chú ý phát âm một số từ (clear my eyes → strain my eyes; appealing → appealing? better: enjoyable).

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I find it enjoyable because it helps me relax after a long day and escape from daily stress. For example, when I talk to my best friend we usually share funny stories and support each other, which makes me feel better.

제안: Cần cải thiện tính chính xác ngữ pháp (Me and my pants tea → My friend and I), câu trả lời nên gọn và có các chi tiết cụ thể, dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Tránh tiếng lắp và từ sai. Nên đưa ví dụ cụ thể về chủ đề trò chuyện (ví dụ tên idol, loại tin tức).

예시: My friend and I usually talk about our daily lives and things at school. Sometimes we also discuss topics we find online, like our favourite singers or trending news. For example, last week we chatted about a new song by my favourite idol.

제안: Câu trả lời cần ngắn gọn, rõ ràng: nêu sở thích rồi nêu lý do cụ thể. Tránh từ sai (pesky → a particular friend / my best friend) và nói lặp. Sử dụng linking words như 'because' hoặc 'so' để kết nối ý, maximal 3–4 câu.

예시: I prefer chatting with one close friend. This is because we share similar experiences and understand each other's feelings, so conversations feel more meaningful. For instance, my best friend and I can talk for hours about school and personal problems without feeling judged.

제안: Cần trả lời rõ ràng (nói bạn thích gặp mặt hay qua mạng) và đưa lý do cụ thể. Tránh từ sai và lặp. Sử dụng linking phrases như 'because' và 'for example' để làm rõ. Nếu nói thích gặp mặt, nêu lợi ích cụ thể (ngôn ngữ cơ thể, cảm xúc).

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication. Meeting in person lets us read expressions and body language, which makes conversations more natural and emotional. For example, when we meet I can tell if my friend is upset and comfort them immediately.

제안: Câu trả lời khá tốt về nội dung nhưng cần rõ ràng hơn, trật tự câu tốt hơn (nêu tần suất, lý do, kết quả). Tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi phát âm (team war projects → team projects). Thêm linking words như 'when', 'however', 'usually' để mạch lạc.

예시: Yes, we do argue sometimes, especially when working on group projects or homework because people have different ideas. However, we usually resolve the disagreements quickly by discussing each idea and compromising, so our relationship remains strong.

× Oh definitely yes, I can clear my eyes to the for the screen every day just only to chat with my best friend because it's really like appealing and I can I escape from reality when I chat with them about anything in life.

✓ Oh definitely yes, I can stare at the screen every day just to chat with my best friend because it's really appealing and I can escape from reality when I chat with him or her about anything in life.

Pronoun 'them' is plural while 'my best friend' is singular; use 'him or her' or 'them' only if singular 'they' is intended. Phrase 'clear my eyes to the for the screen' is ungrammatical; use 'stare at the screen'. Remove duplicated words 'I can I'. Suggestions: use singular pronoun consistent with the antecedent or reword to plural, simplify verb phrase to 'stare at the screen', and avoid repeated words.

× Me and my pants tea always talk about our daily life or just some school stories of uh me and her.

✓ My friend and I always talk about our daily lives or just some school stories about me and her.

Subject pronoun 'Me and my pants tea' is incorrect order and case; use 'My friend and I'. 'Pants tea' seems to be a mispronunciation replaced by 'friend'. 'Our daily life' should be plural 'our daily lives'. Maintain consistent pronoun case and word order.

× Well sometime we will chat about anything on the Internet such as my idols or some hot news and sometime which is like just umm talk about I was.

✓ Well sometimes we chat about things on the Internet such as my idols or some hot news, and sometimes we just talk about what I was doing.

Unnecessary future 'will' is inappropriate for habitual action; use present simple 'chat'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. Phrase 'which is like just umm talk about I was' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'we just talk about what I was doing' or similar. Use consistent tense and clear structure.

× Well, I'm keen on chatting with my pesky more because, you know, I have, we have a lot of, uh, the same story, the same mindset and the same like emotions, so we can understand each other a lot.

✓ Well, I'm keen on chatting with my pals more because, you know, we have a lot of the same experiences, the same mindset and similar emotions, so we can understand each other well.

'Pesky' is incorrect word choice; likely 'pals' or 'peers'. 'I have, we have a lot of,' is redundant; use 'we have a lot of the same experiences'. 'The same like emotions' is awkward; use 'similar emotions'. 'Understand each other a lot' should be 'understand each other well'. Use appropriate vocabulary and adverb placement.

× And yes. And I can't pay attention only, only her.

✓ And yes. And I can't pay attention to only her.

Missing preposition 'to' after 'pay attention'. Repetition 'only, only' is redundant. Use correct verb pattern 'pay attention to someone'.

× Well, for my pesky, I cannot, uh, face to face more because, you know, we have a lot of things to talk and we can see each other, see the emotions or they like interacts with with me.

✓ Well, for my pals, I prefer not to meet face to face often because, you know, we have a lot to talk about and we can see each other's emotions when we interact.

'For my pesky' wrong word; use 'for my pals'. 'I cannot face to face more' is ungrammatical; use 'I prefer not to meet face to face often' or 'I don't meet face to face often'. 'We have a lot of things to talk' needs 'to talk about'. 'See the emotions or they like interacts with with me' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'see each other's emotions when we interact'. Correct word order and use of prepositions.

× Oh, definitely, definitely, yes. When we have team war projects or just some homework, do homework together, we have a lot of arguments about the content of that homework Well, but after that, it's really OK to understand each other.

✓ Oh, definitely, yes. When we have group projects or homework and do the work together, we often argue about the content of that work, but afterward it's usually okay and we understand each other.

'Team war projects' likely incorrect phrase; use 'group projects'. Repetition and word order issues: 'or just some homework, do homework together' should be 'or homework and do it together'. Use adverbs 'often' for frequency rather than raw repetition. 'After that, it's really OK to understand each other' rephrased to 'afterward it's usually okay and we understand each other' for clarity and idiomatic usage.