Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and correct relative clause and tense errors.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially those who are studying abroad. We usually talk about our daily lives and share experiences, which helps me relax after a hard day.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and then two specific examples with linking words. Reduce vague absolute statements and correct word order and vocabulary choice.

예시: We talk about a wide range of topics. For example, we discuss daily routines and study plans, and sometimes we debate current issues like politics and religion, which can be quite lively.

제안: Provide a direct preference sentence, then one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and avoid repetition.

예시: It depends, but I usually prefer chatting in a group because I can hear everyone's opinions. This helps me gather different perspectives and form a better-informed conclusion.

제안: Soften strong words like 'hate' and structure the answer with one clear preference and two specific reasons using linking phrases. Fix grammar and phrasing for clarity.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because physical interaction allows you to see people's reactions and build trust. In contrast, online conversations often lack nonverbal cues, which can make them feel less genuine.

제안: Avoid exaggeration and repetition; give a balanced response with frequency and typical topics, and briefly explain why arguments happen. Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, we sometimes argue, though not literally every day. We mainly disagree about topics like classes and sports, such as football and boxing, usually because we have strong but different opinions.

× Yes, yes, I really like chatting with my friends, especially who away from me who's studying abroad.

✓ Yes, yes, I really like chatting with my friends, especially those who are away from me and studying abroad.

The original sentence uses 'who' with singular implication and misplaces relative clause; 'those' correctly refers to plural 'friends', and 'are' is needed for present continuous 'are studying'. Use 'and' to connect clauses. Suggestion: Use 'those who are...' for plural people and include auxiliary verbs for progressive tenses.

× We're talking about life, so about everything.

✓ We talk about life, about everything.

Present simple is more natural for habits ('we talk'); 'we're talking' implies ongoing action. The repetition 'so about everything' is redundant. Suggest: use present simple to describe typical conversations.

× It's really helped me to relax after a hard day.

✓ It really helps me relax after a hard day.

Present perfect 'has helped' or simple present 'helps' are appropriate for habitual effects; 'it's really helped' is awkward. Use 'helps' for a regular result. Also omit 'to' after 'helps' when followed by a verb.

× About everything, everything we have starting to our daily, uh, starts to do, ending with the religion, the politics, everything, you know, chatting with friends include everything in entire life.

✓ About everything: from the things we start our day with to our daily activities, ending with religion and politics. Chatting with friends includes everything in life.

Original has incorrect prepositions and word order. Use 'from... to...' to show range, 'daily activities' instead of 'our daily, starts to do', and 'includes' must agree with singular 'chatting'. Remove redundancies like 'entire'. Suggestions: structure long ideas into clearer phrases and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Well depend depend mostly.

✓ Well, it depends, mostly.

Missing subject 'it' and third-person singular verb 'depends' needed. Repeating 'depend' is unnecessary. Suggest: include proper subject and verb for clarity.

× I prefer chat with group to listen everyone opinion, everyone shares ideas and make a conclusion.

✓ I prefer chatting with a group to listen to everyone's opinions; everyone shares ideas and draws a conclusion.

After 'prefer' when comparing actions, use gerund 'chatting' or infinitive 'to chat'; 'listen to' requires preposition 'to'; use possessive 'everyone's opinions'; subject-verb agreement 'everyone shares' and 'draws' (or 'reach a conclusion'). Suggestions: use gerund and include necessary prepositions and possessives.

× So it's it's also help me to get information from different perspectives, different points to different sites.

✓ So it also helps me get information from different perspectives and points of view.

Need third-person singular 'helps'; remove redundant 'it's it's'; 'points to different sites' is incorrect—use 'points of view'. Also omit 'to' after 'help' when followed by a bare infinitive. Suggest simplifying and using correct idioms.

× I hate social media, so I prefer face to face communication.

✓ I hate social media, so I prefer face-to-face communication.

Hyphenate 'face-to-face' as a compound adjective before 'communication'. Otherwise sentence is grammatically fine. Suggest using hyphenation for clarity.

× It's uh, you can trust, you can see how they react, how can they answer to your question and how you can answer the question.

✓ With face-to-face interaction, you can trust them; you can see how they react, how they answer your questions, and how you can respond.

Original has incorrect word order 'how can they answer' (question form in statement) and incorrect 'answer to your question'—use 'answer your question'. Use parallel verb forms and natural connectors. Suggest use statements not question order.

× So I think social media and online, it's really fake.

✓ So I think social media and online communication are really fake.

Use noun 'online communication' and plural verb agreement 'are' for compound subject 'social media and online communication'. Avoid 'it's' which is singular. Suggest make subject clear and ensure verb agreement.

× Of course, of course. I argue with them on a daily basis.

✓ Of course, of course. I argue with them on a daily basis.

This sentence is correct; no grammatical change required. Provided for completeness.

× Every day, Every single day.

✓ Every day; every single day.

Original capitalizes 'Every' unnecessarily and fragments repetition. Use punctuation to connect emphasis. Suggest keeping consistent capitalization and punctuation.

× We argue about everything about classes, football, especially sports, boxing and yeah, everything.

✓ We argue about everything: classes, football—especially sports like boxing—and so on.

Avoid repeating 'about' and improve list structure. 'Especially sports, boxing' is awkward—specify 'sports like boxing'. Suggest clearer list punctuation and phrasing.