Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ви дали змістовну відповідь, але є кілька проблем: розмовна неформальна лексика (''cause''), повтори (''in in other countries''), граматичні помилки (''we live in in other countries'', ''have a significant role'') та надто довге перше речення. Рекомендую використовувати чітке вступне речення, прості складні речення без повторів та уникати сленгу. Також замініть 'have a significant role' на більш природні вирази як 'are important to me'.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends and my boyfriend. They are important to me because we support each other and keep in touch despite living in different countries. For example, I live in Ukraine and my boyfriend lives in Poland, so we often message to share how our day went.

제안: Відповідь коротка та містить граматичні помилки: неправильно вжиті форми (''we chatting'', ''how our days going''). Також варто додати трохи конкретики — про що саме ви говорите під час дня (робота, навчання, хобі). Використовуйте зв’язки (for example, such as) щоб дати приклади.

예시: Usually we chat about how our days are going. For example, we talk about work or university, interesting things that happened, and plans for the evening. Sometimes we also share funny photos or news.

제안: Відповідь зрозуміла і логічна, але містить розмовні елементи (''I guess'') та не зовсім коректну фразу ''It's up to situation''. Бажано використовувати чітке вступне речення і зв’язки (however, generally) та невеликі уточнення про причини вашого вибору.

예시: It depends on the situation. Generally, I enjoy group chats with international friends because they are lively and convenient for planning events. However, I prefer private messages for personal conversations with my boyfriend and very close friends because those talks are more intimate.

제안: Добре, що ви пояснили причину, але є помилки в словосполученнях (''This case'', ''such more comfortable'') і невірне множинне число або відсутність артикля (''people's emotion'' → ''people's emotions'' або ''their emotions''). Використовуйте зв’язки (because, therefore) та спрощуйте фрази для природності.

예시: It depends on the situation, but I usually prefer face-to-face communication. I can see people's emotions and body language, which makes conversations clearer and more comfortable. For example, I find it easier to resolve misunderstandings in person.

제안: Відповідь коротка і занадто загальна; звучить трохи різко. Краще відповісти прямо, навести приклад і пояснити, як ви зазвичай вирішуєте суперечки. Уникайте абстрактних висловів типу ''all the individuals'' і використовуйте більш природні фрази (''people do''/''everyone does'').

예시: Sometimes we argue, yes, because people have different opinions. For example, we might disagree about plans or opinions, but we usually talk it through calmly and apologize if needed.

× I can say that chatting with my friends and with my boyfriend also have a significant role in my life.

✓ I can say that chatting with my friends and with my boyfriend also has a significant role in my life.

The subject 'chatting' is a singular gerund phrase, so it requires the singular verb 'has' (subject-verb agreement). Use 'has' to match the singular noun phrase; alternatively rephrase to 'My chats with my friends and my boyfriend also play a significant role in my life.' for clarity.

× Unfortunately, 'cause we live in in other countries and, for example, I live in Ukraine, but my boyfriend lives in Poland.

✓ Unfortunately, because we live in different countries; for example, I live in Ukraine, but my boyfriend lives in Poland.

Avoid informal ' 'cause' and the repeated word 'in'. Use 'because' for formal speech and 'different countries' instead of 'in other countries'. Punctuation: use a semicolon or period to separate clauses. This makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× In common we chatting about how our days going.

✓ In general we chat about how our days are going.

'In common' is incorrect; use 'In general'. The verb should be base form 'chat' after the subject 'we' (present simple), and the clause requires 'are' for present continuous 'how our days are going.' Fixes: subject-verb agreement and proper clause structure.

× It's up to situation I guess, because I have a lot of chats with the international people.

✓ It's up to the situation, I guess, because I have a lot of chats with international people.

Add the definite article 'the' before 'situation' for reference to a specific situation. Do not use 'the' before 'international people' in this context; 'international people' is a general noun phrase so no article is needed. Also add commas for natural pauses.

× But with my boyfriend and very close friends, I prefer to chat only in private messages.

✓ But with my boyfriend and very close friends, I prefer to chat only via private messages.

Original sentence is mostly correct but 'in private messages' is less natural than 'via private messages' or 'through private messages'. Change improves preposition use and naturalness.

× This case also depends on situations, but often I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see people's emotion in this way and it's such more comfortable for me.

✓ This also depends on the situation, but often I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see people's emotions that way and it's much more comfortable for me.

Use 'depends on the situation' (singular) and 'people's emotions' (plural possessive). Replace 'in this way' with 'that way' and 'such more comfortable' is incorrect; use 'much more comfortable.' These changes correct noun number, adjective/adverb usage and natural phrasing.

× Of course, because all the individuals argue with each other.

✓ Of course, because people sometimes argue with each other.

'All the individuals' is unnatural; use 'people' and add 'sometimes' to make the statement less absolute and more natural. Present tense 'argue' is fine, but wording must fit common English usage.