Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Keep answers natural but more concise and grammatically correct. Begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds (uh, umm), and correct tense and agreement. Give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. (English (Japan))

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when we meet at a bar. It helps me relax, and we often share funny stories or recent experiences, which makes the time enjoyable.

제안: Start with a direct topic sentence and organize supporting details using linking words. Be specific about topics and avoid repetition. Use correct noun forms (e.g., travel stories, work). (English (Japan))

예시: I usually talk about recent events, such as travel experiences and work updates. For example, friends often tell stories about their latest trips or challenges at work.

제안: Give a clear preference sentence, then briefly explain the reason with a linking word. Correct grammar: 'prefer to chat with one friend' and 'one person' instead of 'one people'. Avoid fillers. (English (Japan))

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because it feels more comfortable. When it's just one person, conversations are calmer and I can express my ideas more clearly.

제안: Answer directly, use a clear topic sentence, and give balanced reasons. Avoid informal or vague phrases like 'kind of a lie'—explain why you think so. Reduce repetition. (English (Japan))

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more natural and allows me to read facial expressions. In contrast, social media can be misleading since messages lack tone and context.

제안: Give a concise direct answer then explain with a clear reason using linking words. Avoid repetition and finish with a complete idea. For example, say when or how often and how you resolve disagreements. (English (Japan))

예시: Yes, sometimes I argue with friends because we have different opinions. However, we usually resolve conflicts by talking calmly and trying to understand each other's viewpoints.

× Yeah, I enjoyed chatting with my friends when I have a drinking at the bars, uh, because, uh, it feels relax, it make it makes me feel relaxed and uh umm, I can uh, how can I say?

✓ Yeah, I enjoy chatting with my friends when I have a drink at bars, because it feels relaxing and it makes me feel relaxed.

The student mixed past and present tenses. The question asks about a general preference, so present simple should be used (enjoy, have). 'Have a drinking' is incorrect; use 'have a drink'. 'Feels relax' is wrong word form; use adjective or gerund: 'feels relaxing' or 'makes me feel relaxed'. Also redundant phrases were removed to improve clarity. Grammar problem type id: 5

× I usually chat about what I've done or what they've done recently, like a story about the travel, story about work, recent work or other friends, what to say now with others.

✓ I usually chat about what I've done or what my friends have done recently, like travel stories, work stories, or things about other friends.

The sentence used contractions and unclear pronoun reference 'they' for friends; make it explicit: 'my friends have done'. 'A story about the travel' is unidiomatic; use 'travel stories'. Simplify list and maintain present perfect for recent experiences. Grammar problem type id: 6

× Yeah, I prefer chat with, uh, only one friend. I found it difficult to speak to talk with a lot of people. Uh yeah, it's, it's easy for me to speak only one people.

✓ Yeah, I prefer to chat with only one friend. I find it difficult to talk with a lot of people. It's easier for me to speak with just one person.

Use infinitive after 'prefer' (prefer to chat). Verb tense should be present simple for habitual preference (find). 'Only one people' mixes singular/plural; use 'one person'. Also use comparative 'easier' when comparing situations. Grammar problem type id: 2

× Yeah, I prefer communicate face to face because it's more natural for me and, uh, it's easy. I found it easy to communicate face to face. Social media is kind of a lie.

✓ Yeah, I prefer to communicate face to face because it's more natural for me and easier. I find it easy to communicate in person. Social media feels less genuine.

Use infinitive after 'prefer' (prefer to communicate). Maintain present simple for general preference (find). 'Face to face' can be rephrased as 'in person' for naturalness. 'Social media is kind of a lie' is informal and absolute; rephrase to 'feels less genuine' to convey intended meaning. Grammar problem type id: 8

× Yeah, sometimes I argue with friends because we are different people and umm, sometimes happens. We are different, we have different opinions. So it it leads me.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I argue with friends because we are different people and sometimes disagreements happen. We have different opinions, which can lead to arguments.

Original had fragmented sentences and unclear phrase 'sometimes happens' and 'So it it leads me'. Recast into clear sentences: 'disagreements happen' and 'which can lead to arguments'. This fixes sentence structure and clarity. Grammar problem type id: 26