Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and avoid fillers (umm, actually). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one short supporting detail. Use varied vocabulary and correct grammar (e.g., 'we have a group' -> 'we have a group chat' or 'a group of friends').

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We have a group chat where we share news and jokes, and it helps me stay connected with them.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence and then specific examples. Correct grammar (use present simple: 'we chat' not 'we chatting'). Avoid vague phrases like 'everything' without examples; include 2–3 specific topics linked with linking words (e.g., 'for example', 'such as').

예시: We usually chat about many topics. For example, we talk about our studies, weekend plans and sometimes gossip about celebrities.

제안: State your preference clearly and give a brief reason. Avoid contradictions and filler words. Correct word choice ('either' not 'ether') and grammar ('I prefer chatting with a group' / 'I prefer one-on-one with my best friend').

예시: I prefer chatting in a group because it's lively and fun, but I also enjoy one-on-one conversations with my best friend Dennis when we need to talk about personal matters.

제안: Give a clear, structured answer with a topic sentence and one reason using linking words. Improve grammar ('it depends on the person' not 'it's various from person to person') and punctuation. Keep it concise (max 3 sentences).

예시: It depends on how close I am to the person. If they are close friends, I prefer face-to-face meetings because they feel more personal; otherwise I use social media for convenience.

제안: Provide a coherent topic sentence and a brief example in correct tense. Avoid double negatives and awkward phrasing ('we don't argue... a lot, but rarely' is confusing). Use past simple for the example: 'I argued'.

예시: Not often — we rarely argue. For example, I had an argument with my best friend last week about plans for the weekend, but we resolved it quickly.

× Actually we chatting about everything so umm, I don't say a one thing, but for example actually we chatting about gossip so.

✓ Actually we chat about everything, so I can't name one thing, but for example we often chat about gossip.

The original uses 'we chatting' which is incorrect because after the subject 'we' the base verb or present continuous with auxiliary is needed. Use simple present 'we chat' for habitual actions. Also 'I don't say a one thing' is ungrammatical; use 'I can't name one thing' to express inability to single out a topic. Use 'often' to convey frequency instead of repeating 'actually.' Suggestions: use subject + base verb for habits (we chat), use 'I can't name one thing' for 'cannot single out', and use adverbs like 'often' for frequency.

× Absolutely, I prefer to chat with a group, but umm, if you ask with a group or the best friend, of course I prefer with my best friend Dennis, but I love ether.

✓ Absolutely, I prefer to chat with a group, but if you ask whether I prefer a group or my best friend, of course I prefer my best friend Dennis, but I love either.

Errors: 'if you ask with a group or the best friend' is incorrect phrasing; use 'if you ask whether I prefer a group or my best friend'. 'Prefer with my best friend' should be 'prefer my best friend' or 'prefer to chat with my best friend'. 'ether' is a misspelling of 'either'. The correction clarifies meaning and fixes pronoun and verb phrasing. Suggestions: use 'whether' to present two alternatives, use 'prefer X' or 'prefer to chat with X', and spell 'either' correctly.

× Actually, it's various from person to person, but umm, they're my close friends. If they're my close friends, I prefer face to face, but they are not my close friends. I prefer social media.

✓ Actually, it varies from person to person. If they are my close friends, I prefer face to face contact; if they are not close friends, I prefer social media.

'It's various' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'it varies'. 'They're my close friends' standalone is confusing and redundant. Use conditional structure: 'If they are my close friends...' Also 'face to face' should be 'face to face contact' or 'face-to-face' as an adjective. The correction uses present simple 'varies' for general truth and clarifies the contrasting conditions. Suggestions: use 'it varies' for differences among people, structure contrasts with 'if...; if...' and use 'face to face contact' for clarity.

× No, actually we don't argue with my friends a lot, but rarely. For example last week I argue with my best friend.

✓ No, actually we don't argue with my friends much; it's rare. For example, last week I argued with my best friend.

The sentence mixes present negative 'we don't argue' with 'rarely' awkwardly; use 'much' or 'it's rare'. The example refers to a past event, so the verb must be in past tense: 'I argued' not 'I argue'. The correction fixes adverb placement and uses past tense for the specific past event. Suggestions: use past simple for completed actions in the past ('argued'), use 'much' with negative statements ('don't... much') or rephrase as 'it's rare' for frequency.