Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details. Reduce repetition and fix tense/pronoun errors. Use linking word like ‘because’ to explain why.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because they are funny and we share stories about our daily lives. For example, last week we laughed for hours about a mishap at work, which made our evening very entertaining.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and use accurate vocabulary. Replace unclear phrase “daily flight” with “daily life” or “work.” Provide a specific example and use linking words like ‘for instance’ correctly.

예시: We usually talk about our daily lives, especially work. For instance, my colleagues often tell stories about tasks at the company and whether they can finish them on time.

제안: Make the preference clear and correct sentence structure. Avoid repetition and use linking expression such as ‘because’ and ‘whereas’ to contrast single and group conversations. Add one specific reason or example.

예시: I prefer talking one-on-one because I feel a stronger connection and it’s easier to express myself. Whereas in a group I often hesitate and miss chances to speak.

제안: State preference clearly and use correct prepositions and grammar. Explain reason with a specific detail and use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘so’. Keep to two to three sentences.

예시: I prefer communicating via social media because it gives me time to think before replying. Face-to-face conversations are more spontaneous, so I sometimes struggle to respond quickly.

제안: Answer directly and use past or present tense correctly. Briefly describe what happened and what you learned, using linking words like ‘because’ and ‘so’. Avoid fillers and repetition.

예시: Yes, once I had an argument with a friend about shared responsibilities because I failed to finish my task on time. As a result, we discussed a new schedule so we could avoid similar problems in the future.

× I really enjoy anytime when I hang out with my friends, they are so funny and they say about they their daily life and that's and they make story, make a funny story so.

✓ I really enjoy hanging out with my friends; they are so funny and they talk about their daily lives and tell funny stories.

Pronoun errors and sentence structure: 'they say about they their daily life' is incorrect pronoun use and word order. Also 'anytime when I hang out' is awkward; use 'enjoy hanging out' (verb + -ing). 'daily life' should be plural 'daily lives' when referring to multiple people. Combine clauses with proper punctuation to avoid run-on sentences. Suggestion: use 'hang out with', 'talk about their daily lives', and 'tell funny stories'.

× I really enjoy anytime when I hang out with my friends, they are so funny and they say about they their daily life and that's and they make story, make a funny story so.

✓ I really enjoy hanging out with my friends; they are so funny and they talk about their daily lives and tell funny stories.

After 'enjoy' use a gerund (verb + -ing), so 'enjoy hanging out' is correct instead of 'enjoy anytime when I hang out'. This correction also resolves awkward phrasing and creates natural English.

× Uh, actually we, uh, usually talk about, uh, daily flight.

✓ Uh, actually we usually talk about daily life.

'Daily flight' is likely a word choice error; 'daily life' is the correct phrase to mean everyday activities. Also remove unnecessary filler words for clarity.

× Uh, for instance, they talk about the, they, they have to do the task, uh, in the company and they can finish on time, so they have to do this.

✓ For instance, they talk about how they have tasks at work and whether they can finish them on time, so they discuss what they need to do.

Pronoun repetition 'they, they' and unclear reference 'do the task in the company' is awkward. Use 'tasks at work' and match plural pronouns with plural nouns: 'tasks' and 'finish them'. Rephrase to clarify meaning.

× To be honest, I prefer to chat with only one friend because I feel uh some connection connection with them.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to chat with just one friend because I feel more connected to them.

Pronoun 'them' is acceptable for singular informal but improve clarity by saying 'just one friend' and correct collocation 'feel connected to'. Also remove repeated word 'connection'.

× Now it make me easily to talk and opposite with a group of people I don't know what I talk and when I can talk.

✓ Now it makes it easier for me to talk, whereas in a group I do not know what to say or when I can speak.

Subject-verb agreement and sentence structure: 'it make me easily' should be 'it makes it easier for me'. 'Opposite with a group of people' is awkward; use 'whereas in a group'. Use infinitive 'what to say' and 'when I can speak' for clarity.

× In my case, I think I prefer chatting with my friend on via social media because I I need the time to think about my answer, but in the communicated face to face I need to reply.

✓ In my case, I prefer chatting with my friend via social media because I need time to think about my answers, but when communicating face-to-face I must reply immediately.

Preposition misuse: use 'via social media' not 'on via social media'. 'Communicated face to face' should be 'when communicating face-to-face'. Also fix article and plural: 'my answer' -> 'my answers', and remove duplicate 'I'.

× Uh, I, I have a deal with my friend, uh, it's about, umm, the, uh, my responsible in our task and but uh, this time I didn't finish the my task on time, so my friends angry with me so.

✓ I had an agreement with my friend about my responsibility in our task, but this time I didn't finish my task on time, so my friend was angry with me.

Tense consistency and grammar: 'have a deal' should be 'had an agreement' to match past context. 'My responsible' is incorrect; use 'my responsibility'. 'My friends angry with me' needs verb 'were/was' — since referring to one friend use 'my friend was angry with me'. Remove extra 'the' and 'so' at end. Use past simple for completed actions.