Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise, accurate, and avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases. Begin with a clear topic sentence addressing the question, then add one specific reason and a brief example. Also correct grammar and avoid self-labeling without context. Use linking words for coherence.

예시: Not really. I usually get bored quickly and lose focus when conversations drag on because I have trouble maintaining attention. For instance, in long group chats I often stop following the topic after a few minutes.

제안: Answer directly with a topic sentence, then give a specific detail or example. Avoid repeating the same reason and improve grammar and word choice. Use a linking word to connect ideas.

예시: I don't chat with friends very often. Because I get distracted easily, I prefer short, practical conversations about plans or sharing interesting links rather than long personal discussions.

제안: State a clear preference (group or one-on-one) and give a focused reason with one supporting detail. Fix grammar and avoid repetition. Keep it under five sentences and use a linking word to connect preference and reason.

예시: I prefer talking one-on-one rather than in a group because I find group conversations chaotic and hard to follow. For example, in groups there are many topics at once, and I quickly lose concentration.

제안: Good clear answer and example. Improve vocabulary and specificity: mention particular platforms or situations and replace casual words like "funny" with precise descriptors. Use one linking word to expand.

예시: I prefer communicating via social media because it’s quick and convenient, especially for scheduling or sharing photos. For instance, I use messaging apps to coordinate meetups and send voice notes when typing is too slow.

제안: Strong, natural response. To improve further, give a brief specific example of a recent disagreement and the outcome. Use one linking word to expand and keep it concise.

예시: Sometimes. For example, my friend and I recently disagreed about the best way to organize a group project; we debated our ideas calmly and then agreed on a plan that combined both approaches.

× No I don't like chatting as an ADHD I really hate Chinese because I can fast get bored and easily distracted when people start chatting so I'm not just interested in these things.

✓ No, I don't like chatting because I have ADHD; I get bored quickly and become easily distracted when people start chatting, so I'm not interested in those conversations.

The student used 'as an ADHD' incorrectly; ADHD is a condition, so use 'I have ADHD' (pronoun/word choice). 'I can fast get bored' is incorrect adverb placement and form; use 'get bored quickly'. 'I'm not just interested in these things' is awkward and unclear; 'I'm not interested in those conversations' is clearer. Also punctuation improved for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Well actually I'm not often chat with my friends because I have an ADHD.

✓ Well, actually I don't often chat with my friends because I have ADHD.

The student wrote 'I'm not often chat' which mixes auxiliary contraction 'I'm' with base verb 'chat'. Use 'I don't often chat' to form the negative present simple. Also 'a ADHD' is wrong article use with initialism starting with a vowel sound; say 'I have ADHD' without article. Grammar problem type ID:10

× I not interested in chatting because I can get fast, bored and easily distracted when people start chatting things.

✓ I'm not interested in chatting because I get bored quickly and become easily distracted when people start chatting.

Missing auxiliary 'am' for the negative ('I'm not interested'). 'Can get fast, bored' is wrong: use 'get bored quickly' and avoid unnecessary 'can'. 'Start chatting things' is ungrammatical; 'start chatting' or 'start a conversation' is correct. Pronoun/auxiliary usage corrected. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Actually I'm not really into chatting with people, I are just not interested in that.

✓ Actually, I'm not really into chatting with people; I'm just not interested in it.

The student used 'I are' which is incorrect verb form for the pronoun 'I'; correct form is 'I am' or contraction 'I'm'. Also 'that' is vague; 'it' refers to 'chatting' more naturally. Fixed punctuation and contraction. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I think it's a waste of time and I haven't.

✓ I think it's a waste of time, and I haven't done it.

The sentence 'I haven't' is incomplete and lacks the past participle or object; it should be 'I haven't done it' or 'I haven't engaged in it'. This fixes the sentence structure by providing the missing verb phrase. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I have ADHD, I can get fastly bored and distracted easily when people guess when people start chatting.

✓ I have ADHD; I get bored quickly and become easily distracted when people start chatting.

'Fastly' is not a word; use the adverb 'quickly'. The phrase 'people guess when people start chatting' is redundant and ungrammatical; remove 'guess'. 'I can get' is acceptable but simpler 'I get' fits the context. Corrected pronoun/redundancy and adverb use. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I often communicate on social media because I think it's a convenient way to exchange messages effectively.

✓ I often communicate via social media because I think it's a convenient way to exchange messages effectively.

'On social media' is acceptable, but 'via social media' is more natural when talking about a communication channel. No article error in sentence, but preposition choice improved. However the original wasn't strictly wrong; change is stylistic. Since only allowed to correct from list, this counts as preposition improvement. Grammar problem type ID:11

× For example, not only you can send text by typing word, but also send emojis, which is funny.

✓ For example, not only can you send text by typing words, but you can also send emojis, which is fun.

Word order in 'not only you can' is incorrect; invert auxiliary and subject: 'not only can you'. 'Typing word' should be plural 'typing words' or 'typing a message'. 'Which is funny' is better as 'which is fun' to describe emojis. Fixed word order (inversion), agreement, and adjective choice. Grammar problem type ID:12

× It really depends on situations.

✓ It really depends on the situation.

Use singular 'the situation' or plural with 'on the situations' if referring to multiple contexts. The idiomatic phrase is 'depends on the situation'. This corrects present tense agreement and noun usage. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I sometimes argue with friends when we disagree, but I see arguing as a way to debate ideas constructively and eventually reach an agreement.

✓ I sometimes argue with friends when we disagree, but I see arguing as a way to debate ideas constructively and to eventually reach an agreement.

Original sentence is mostly correct. Added 'to' before 'eventually' to parallel 'to debate' and improve infinitive structure. This addresses present-tense verb phrase parallelism. Grammar problem type ID:6