Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện: Rút gọn câu trả lời và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp, tránh lặp từ. Nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ với liên từ thích hợp. Ví dụ: dùng thì đúng (present simple), sửa cấu trúc 'I consider it' và bỏ các tiếng lặp. Hãy nói tối đa 3-4 câu.

예시: Yes, I do. I often chat with my friends because it helps me relieve stress after a long day at school. We usually talk about daily events or just share funny stories to relax.

제안: Cải thiện: Làm câu mạch lạc hơn bằng cách dùng liên từ phù hợp và sửa lỗi danh từ số nhiều/đếm được (assignments). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ 'about'. Hãy chia thành 2 câu tối đa để giữ tự nhiên.

예시: We usually talk about school activities, especially assignments we need to finish before the deadline. We also arrange to meet at a café to discuss homework or just relax together.

제안: Cải thiện: Sửa ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt (use 'one-to-one' and 'personal'). Giải thích rõ lý do với ví dụ ngắn, không dùng cụm từ mơ hồ như 'defend our board'. Hãy dùng 2-3 câu, dùng liên từ để logic.

예시: I prefer one-to-one conversations because they are more private and personal, and I feel more comfortable sharing my thoughts. One-to-one talks also make it easier to clarify ideas and avoid misunderstandings.

제안: Cải thiện: Sửa cấu trúc câu và collocations ('keep in touch', 'miss face to face' -> 'meet face-to-face'). Trình bày rõ lý do với ví dụ ngắn, dùng linking words như 'because' và 'so' hợp lý. Giữ 2-3 câu.

예시: I prefer communicating via social media because my friends and I attend different schools and rarely have time to meet face-to-face. Social media is convenient, lets us keep in touch quickly, and helps arrange meet-ups when our schedules allow.

제안: Cải thiện: Làm câu rõ ràng và đúng ngữ pháp; dùng từ đúng ('argue', 'sometimes', 'assignments', 'arrangements') và giải thích hậu quả ngắn gọn. Tránh lặp 'lead to' và câu lủng củng. Nên có 1 câu chủ đề và 1 câu giải thích/ví dụ.

예시: Sometimes we argue because we have different opinions about assignments or arrangements for meeting. However, we usually resolve disagreements quickly by discussing the issue calmly.

× I always like chatting with my friends because I I considered that as a good way to relieve my stress, especially after a long day.

✓ I always like chatting with my friends because I consider that a good way to relieve my stress, especially after a long day.

The student used 'considered' (past tense) while describing a habitual present opinion; use simple present 'consider' to match 'always like'. Also remove extra 'I' and replace 'considered that as a good' with 'consider that a good' for natural collocation. Suggestion: use present tense for habitual states and avoid redundant words.

× I I, I go to school.

✓ I go to school.

This sentence contains redundant repeated pronouns causing disfluency. Remove the extra 'I' repetitions to form a correct simple present statement. Suggestion: speak concisely and avoid stuttering in written responses.

× I usually talk with my friends about school activities, especially about assignment we need to finish before the deadline, and we also arrange plans to meet at the cafe to discuss about homework or just relax together.

✓ I usually talk with my friends about school activities, especially about assignments we need to finish before the deadline, and we also make plans to meet at the cafe to discuss homework or just relax together.

Use plural 'assignments' for countable items when referring generally. Replace 'arrange plans' with 'make plans' (more natural). Remove 'about' after 'discuss' because 'discuss' is transitive and does not take 'about'. Suggestions: use plural for general countable nouns and remember verb-object collocations.

× I prefer chatting with only one friend because our conversations are often private and about personal so I wouldn't want to share with the group.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because our conversations are often private and personal, so I wouldn't want to share them with the group.

'About personal' is incorrect; use 'personal' as an adjective modifying 'conversations'. Also include the pronoun 'them' to refer back to 'conversations'. Suggestion: ensure adjectives directly modify nouns and use appropriate pronouns for reference.

× 1 to one talk also help me defend our board and make it easier to understand each other.

✓ One-to-one talks also help me defend my point of view and make it easier to understand each other.

'1 to one' should be written 'One-to-one' and 'talk' should be plural to match the general statement. 'Help' should be 'help' (plural subject 'talks' takes plural verb 'help'); original had agreement issues. 'Defend our board' is incorrect phrase; likely intended 'defend my point of view'. Suggestion: use proper phrase 'one-to-one talks' and clear expressions like 'defend my point of view'.

× I prefer communicating via social media because being my friends we go to different schools so we don't have much time to miss face to face.

✓ I prefer communicating via social media because my friends and I go to different schools, so we don't often have the chance to meet face-to-face.

'Being my friends' is ungrammatical here; use 'my friends and I' as the subject. 'Miss face to face' is incorrect; use 'meet face-to-face' or 'see each other face-to-face'. Suggestion: place subjects correctly and use correct verb collocations for meetings.

× Also social media is convenient and we can keep in charge quickly or arrange meet up when our schedule allow.

✓ Also social media is convenient and we can keep in touch quickly or arrange meet-ups when our schedules allow.

'Keep in charge' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'keep in touch'. 'Arrange meet up' should be 'arrange meet-ups' or 'arrange meetups'. Use plural 'schedules' to match plural subject 'we' and 'allow' should be 'allow' with plural subject (schedules allow). Suggestion: learn common prepositional phrases like 'keep in touch' and match plurality in nouns and verbs.

× Acting sometime because we don't have the same opinion about assignment or a range of meet up so I think this can lead to lead to an argue with my friends that we sold it quickly.

✓ Sometimes we argue because we don't have the same opinion about assignments or about meeting arrangements, so I think this can lead to an argument with my friends that we can resolve quickly.

'Acting sometime' is incorrect; use 'Sometimes we argue'. Use plural 'assignments'. 'A range of meet up' is ungrammatical; 'meeting arrangements' or 'meet-up plans' is better. 'Lead to lead to an argue' has repetition and wrong noun form; use 'lead to an argument'. 'We sold it quickly' makes no sense; likely intended 'we can resolve it quickly'. Suggestion: use correct adverb position ('sometimes' at start), proper nouns for events, and correct collocations for 'lead to an argument' and 'resolve'.