Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 문장 구조와 문법을 교정하고 응답을 더 자연스럽고 간결하게 만드세요. 주제를 직접적으로 진술한 뒤 하나의 구체적 예시로 뒷받침하세요. 예: ‘I enjoy chatting with friends’로 시작하고 ‘I especially like sharing funny videos’를 자연스러운 현재 진행/단순 현재 형태로 표현하세요. 또한 불필요한 반복을 줄이세요.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I especially like sharing funny videos with them, which always lightens the mood.

제안: 응답을 더 간결하게 구성하고 연결어를 사용해 이유를 명확히 제시하세요. 첫 문장에 주제를 말하고, 이어서 ‘because’나 ‘so’ 같은 연결어로 구체적 이유를 덧붙이세요. 문법(예: 'occurred at school')과 단수/복수 일치에 주의하세요.

예시: I usually talk about stressful things that happened at school because discussing them helps me forget about the pressure and feel supported.

제안: 문법(주어-동사 일치, 관사, 단수/복수)과 어휘 선택을 수정하세요.‘I prefer chatting with a group of people’처럼 동명사 사용과 ‘because I’m extroverted’로 간단히 표현하세요. 또한 이유를 한 문장으로 명확히 하고 불필요한 반복을 피하세요.

예시: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I'm extroverted and enjoy the energy of multiple friends.

제안: 명확한 비교 표현을 사용하고 이유를 보다 자연스럽게 연결하세요. 문법과 단어 형태('messages', 'lead to misunderstandings')를 고치고 ‘because’나 ‘as’로 이유를 연결하세요. 추가로 간단한 예를 넣으면 더 설득력 있습니다.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because social media messages often lead to misunderstandings, as they lack voice tone and body language.

제안: 응답을 더 자연스럽게 만들기 위해 표현을 다듬으세요. 예: ‘I try to avoid arguments’로 시작하고 이유를 한두 개의 구체적 예로 뒷받침하세요. 문법(예: 'make me angry', 'situations')과 문장 연결을 교정하세요.

예시: I usually avoid arguing with my friends because I prefer a peaceful atmosphere; if someone upsets me, I try to step away and calm down before talking.

× Especially I like share the funny video with my friends.

✓ Especially I like sharing funny videos with my friends.

Use of verb + -ing is required after 'like' when referring to general preferences; also pluralize 'video' to 'videos' to match general activity. Suggestion: use 'like sharing' and plural 'videos' for natural English.

× I usually chat about stressful things that occurred in the schools with my friends.

✓ I usually chat about stressful things that occurred at school with my friends.

Use 'at school' for events happening in school in general; 'the schools' is unnatural unless referring to specific multiple schools. Also keep sentence concise: 'occurred at school' is correct.

× When I chat this topic with my friends, I can forget stressful things.

✓ When I talk about this topic with my friends, I can forget my stress.

Use 'talk about this topic' rather than 'chat this topic'. Also 'forget stressful things' is awkward; 'forget my stress' or 'forget about stressful things' is clearer. Suggestion: 'When I talk about this topic with my friends, I can forget my stress.'

× I prefer chat with group of people rather than only one friends because I am a extroverted persons so I like many people rather than one.

✓ I prefer chatting with a group of people rather than with only one friend because I am an extroverted person and I like being with many people rather than just one.

After 'prefer' use gerund 'chatting'. Use 'a group of people' and singular 'friend'. 'A extroverted persons' has article and number errors: use 'an extroverted person'. Also 'like many people' is better as 'like being with many people'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media.

This sentence is correct; no article error. No change needed. (Note: kept original as it is grammatical.)

× I think social media message often lead to misunderstand because it cannot provide the information about voice tone.

✓ I think social media messages often lead to misunderstandings because they cannot convey information about voice tone.

Use plural 'messages' to match 'often', and plural noun 'misunderstandings'. 'Lead to misunderstand' is incorrect; use 'lead to misunderstandings'. Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'messages' and 'convey' is better than 'provide' for meaning. 'Information about voice tone' is fine but 'convey information about tone of voice' is more natural.

× I don't argue with my friends because I like peaceful situation, so when my friends makes me angry I just avoid that situation rather than argue.

✓ I don't argue with my friends because I like peaceful situations, so when my friends make me angry I just avoid the situation rather than argue.

Use plural 'situations' for generality and 'my friends make' (no -s) because 'friends' is plural. 'Peaceful situation' should be 'peaceful situations' or 'a peaceful situation'. Also 'avoid that situation' changed to 'avoid the situation' for clarity.