Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. For example, when we meet we often talk about recent events and what’s happening in each other’s lives, and sometimes we stay up late catching up. This makes our time together feel relaxed and close.

제안: Be specific and coherent. Use correct vocabulary and give one clear example. Use linking words (for example, such as, like) to connect ideas.

예시: We talk about many topics, such as national news, daily events, and personal matters. For example, last week we discussed a boyfriend’s cooking experiment and whether his recipe could be improved.

제안: Give a direct preference sentence and one clear reason. Correct grammar (prefer to chat, fewer people, not something to be proud of). Avoid awkward phrases and be concise.

예시: I prefer chatting with just one friend because private topics or gossip are easier to discuss one-on-one. Fewer people involved means the conversation stays confidential and less likely to hurt anyone’s feelings.

제안: Good idea and clear preference; improve fluency and fix small grammar and phrasing issues. Use linking expressions and concise wording.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can use body language to express myself and get immediate reactions. Also, real-time interaction makes conversations more engaging and enjoyable.

제안: Answer directly then explain briefly with a specific reason. Use correct tense and phrasing (used to, follow others' opinions, afraid of arguing). One or two supporting sentences are enough.

예시: Not really. I usually avoid arguments because I try to understand others’ opinions and I worry that arguing could damage our relationship. If a disagreement arises, I prefer to discuss it calmly to find a solution.

× Of course I love chatting with friends.

✓ Of course I love chatting with friends.

No grammatical error; sentence is correct and matches present-tense habit of 'love' + gerund.

× Each time we met together we were chat all of things from the big events recently to the grasp in our friends.

✓ Each time we met together we chatted about everything, from recent big events to what was happening with our friends.

Errors: incorrect past progressive 'were chat' and incorrect noun phrases 'all of things' and 'the grasp in our friends'. Use simple past 'chatted' for repeated past action. Use 'about everything' not 'all of things'. Replace unclear 'the grasp in our friends' with 'what was happening with our friends' for clarity.

× We even stayed up late to. Chat with each other.

✓ We even stayed up late to chat with each other.

Error: sentence broken by period and capitalized 'Chat'. Combine into one sentence and use infinitive 'to chat' after 'stayed up late' to indicate purpose.

× Our love scenes are from the national big events to what happened today.

✓ Our topics range from national events to things that happened today.

Errors: 'love scenes' is incorrect word choice; 'are from' awkward. Use present simple 'range from' to describe general topics and 'things that happened today' to express recent events.

× We discussed all of things and all of our opinions together.

✓ We discussed everything and shared all of our opinions together.

Error: 'all of things' should be 'everything'. Add 'shared' to make collocation natural: 'shared opinions'. Present/past tense should match context; 'discussed' is past and acceptable if referring to past chats; could use 'discuss' for habitual.

× For example, we even discuss about our boyfriend's recipe.

✓ For example, we even discuss our boyfriend's recipes.

Error: 'discuss about' is incorrect; English uses 'discuss' without 'about'. Use plural 'recipes' if multiple, and present simple 'discuss' for habitual action.

× I prefer to charge with only one friends because I love discussing about some friends gossip and the the fewer people know the better because it is not something should be proud of.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I love discussing some friends' gossip, and the fewer people who know, the better, because it is not something to be proud of.

Multiple errors: 'charge' wrong word; use 'chat'. 'Only one friends' has number disagreement—use 'one friend'. 'Discussing about' should be 'discussing' or 'talking about'. Possessive: 'friends gossip' -> 'friends' gossip'. Insert relative 'who' in 'fewer people who know'. Fix clause order and use infinitive 'to be proud of'.

× I enjoy face to face communications because only one hand I can use my body language to express my feelings and on the other hand the real time interaction can be seen from my friends and that makes the conversation more enjoyable and fun.

✓ I enjoy face-to-face communication because on one hand I can use my body language to express my feelings, and on the other hand I can see my friends' real-time reactions, which makes the conversation more enjoyable and fun.

Errors: 'face to face communications' should be 'face-to-face communication' (hyphenated adjective and uncountable noun). Reorder phrase 'on one hand' and 'on the other hand'. Change 'the real time interaction can be seen from my friends' to 'I can see my friends' real-time reactions' for clarity and correct possessive 'friends'.

× Not really to be honest because I was always used to following others opinion and tried to understand them.

✓ Not really, to be honest, because I have always been used to following others' opinions and trying to understand them.

Errors: tense and structure. Use present perfect 'have always been used to' to express a habitual state up to now. 'Others opinion' needs possessive plural 'others' opinions'. Maintain parallel gerund 'following' and 'trying'.

× I'm afraid of argue with friends because I think it would damage our relationship and feel bad.

✓ I'm afraid of arguing with friends because I think it would damage our relationship and make us feel bad.

Errors: 'afraid of argue' needs gerund 'arguing' after 'afraid of'. 'Feel bad' should be 'make us feel bad' to show the cause and subject of feeling.