Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and fluent: give a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and self-correction, and limit length to 3–4 sentences. Use linking words to contrast general dislike with the exception. Pronounce contractions smoothly and avoid filler phrases.

예시: I don't usually enjoy chatting with friends because I'm an introvert and don't have many friends. However, I do enjoy long conversations with my girlfriend because we share similar interests and understand each other well.

제안: Give a clearer structure and more specific examples. Start with a topic sentence, then use linking words (for example, such as) and provide two specific topics rather than vague phrases. Avoid repeating words like "some" multiple times.

예시: We mostly talk about everyday life. For example, we update each other on work or school, share funny incidents that happened recently, and discuss local news or rumours that affect our community.

제안: Make the response more natural and provide a brief reason with a linking phrase. Avoid contradicting yourself (introvert preferring groups seems odd) — clarify why groups feel easier. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer chatting in a group because the conversation is less intense and I can join in casually. When it's just one-on-one, I sometimes feel more pressure to keep the conversation going.

제안: State your preference clearly and give a concise reason with linking words. Correct small grammar issues (e.g., "contact with others" -> "contact others", subject-verb agreement). Use 2–3 sentences maximum.

예시: I prefer communicating via social media because it lets me contact others without meeting face-to-face. This feels safer and more comfortable for me as an introvert.

제안: Provide a clearer stance and more polished reasoning. Start with a direct answer, then give one or two brief reasons using linking words (for example, because, so). Avoid filler words like "yeah" and vague phrases.

예시: I rarely argue with friends because I prefer to understand the facts before reacting. Also, I respect different viewpoints, so I usually listen and discuss calmly rather than getting into a fight.

× To be honest I don't like chatting with my friends since I'm an introvert and I don't have a lot of friends but I do enjoy chatting with my girlfriend and she she's my soul mate so I love to chat with her.

✓ To be honest, I don't like chatting with my friends since I'm an introvert and I don't have a lot of friends, but I do enjoy chatting with my girlfriend; she is my soulmate, so I love to chat with her.

Pronoun error: 'she she's' is a repetition and incorrect. Also 'soul mate' is usually written as one word 'soulmate'. Suggestions: remove the duplicated pronoun and use 'she is' or the contraction 'she's' (not both). Add commas or conjunctions to separate clauses for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:12

× We usually just chat about our daily life, just catching up some recent rumor or some things, some funny things, some interesting things that happened in our life.

✓ We usually just chat about our daily lives, catching up on recent rumors or funny and interesting things that happened to us.

Incorrect verb form and preposition: 'catching up some recent rumor' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'catching up on' and 'rumor' should be plural 'rumors' to match 'recent'. Also 'daily life' is better as 'daily lives' when referring to both speakers, and 'things that happened in our life' should be 'things that happened to us'. Suggestions: use 'catch up on', pluralize where appropriate, and use concise coordination of adjectives. Grammar_problem_type_id:8

× I prefer to chat with a group of people. Just like I mentioned, I am an introvert, so if I chat with a single individual, I will feel a lot of pressure and awkwardness.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people. As I mentioned, I am an introvert, so if I chat with a single person, I feel a lot of pressure and awkwardness.

Word choice and tense: 'single individual' is wordy; 'single person' is more natural. 'I will feel' is future but context is habitual preference, so present simple 'I feel' is better. Suggestions: use present simple for habitual feelings and prefer concise noun phrases. Grammar_problem_type_id:1

× Since I'm an introvert, I will prefer to communicate via social media so that I can contact with others without physically see each other and makes me feel quite safer and more comfortable.

✓ Since I'm an introvert, I prefer to communicate via social media so that I can contact others without seeing each other in person, and it makes me feel safer and more comfortable.

Preposition and verb form errors: 'contact with others' should be 'contact others'. 'without physically see each other' needs the gerund 'without seeing each other in person'. 'makes me feel quite safer' is ungrammatical; use 'it makes me feel safer' or 'quite safe'. Suggestions: remove unnecessary 'with', use gerund after 'without', add subject for 'makes', and use correct comparative or adjective form. Grammar_problem_type_id:11

× I don't tend to fight or argue with a friend. I think it's more important to let yourself know whether it is a fact or not. And everyone has their opinion towards different things, so I think yeah, just listen to them.

✓ I don't tend to fight or argue with friends. I think it's more important to know whether something is a fact or not. Everyone has their own opinions about different things, so I think it's best to listen to them.

Pronoun and noun number issues and register: 'a friend' is better as 'friends' in general statements. 'let yourself know whether it is a fact' is awkward; use 'know whether something is a fact'. 'their opinion' is fine but 'their own opinions' is clearer. 'towards' is better as 'about'. Also 'yeah' is informal filler; replace with a cohesive phrase. Suggestions: use plural for general statements, prefer neutral phrasing 'something', and use 'about' for opinions. Grammar_problem_type_id:6