Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 文章の文法（時制、動詞の形、冠詞）と語順を改善し、具体的な理由を一つか二つで簡潔に述べるようにしてください。具体例や感情を加えるとより説得力が増します。話し方は自然で、冗長な表現は避け、最大5文に収めてください。

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and learn more about their lives. For example, I like hearing about their hobbies and daily routines, which often gives me new ideas for my own free time.

제안: 内容が混乱しているため、話題と理由をはっきり区別して述べてください。誰について話しているか（my boyfriend / her ex）を明確にし、冗長な繰り返しや非形式的な“gossip”の表現は控えめに。つながりを示す接続語を使って文を整理しましょう。

예시: We usually talk about relationships and family. For instance, we often share funny stories about our partners or relatives, which makes us laugh and brings us closer as friends.

제안: 主張（1対1の会話を好む）を明確にし、その理由を簡潔に一つか二つで説明してください。文法（冠詞、主語の一致、句読点）と不自然な表現を修正し、最後の疑問文は不要です。

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than in a group. I'm quite introverted, so one-on-one conversations feel more comfortable and allow me to share personal details more openly.

제안: 理由を明確にし、語彙（scared → uneasy/uncomfortable）や冗長な音（MMM）を避けて自然な表現にしてください。接続語を使って説明を論理的に構築しましょう。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because online interactions can feel impersonal and sometimes unsafe. In person, it's easier to read body language and build trust, so I feel the friendship is more genuine.

제안: 文法（現在完了や現在形の使い分け、語順、冗長な語句）を直し、理由を具体的に述べてください。また“difference opinion”は“different opinions”に修正してください。接続詞で対比を明確にし、簡潔にまとめてください。

예시: I don't usually argue with my friends, but I often disagree with my boyfriend because we have different opinions on certain issues. For example, we argue about household responsibilities, but we try to resolve it by talking calmly.

× Yes, I really like chatting because we usually talking about myself and I want to know my friends details.

✓ Yes, I really like chatting because we usually talk about ourselves and I want to know my friends' details.

The verb form after 'usually' should be the base form 'talk' not 'talking'; this is a repeated present habitual action (use present simple). 'Myself' is incorrect as the reflexive pronoun here; use 'ourselves' to refer to the speaker and friends. Possession for 'friends' requires an apostrophe: 'friends\' details'. Improve by using present simple for habits and correct pronouns and possessive apostrophe.

× We usually talking about my boyfriend or about family because it is very funny and makes me laugh when I know about her ex. I really we really like gossip that way.

✓ We usually talk about my boyfriend or about family because it is very funny and makes me laugh when I learn about his ex. We really like to gossip that way.

Replace 'talking' with base form 'talk' for habitual action. 'Know about' is awkward here; use 'learn about' to express discovering details. Pronoun 'her' conflicts with 'my boyfriend' (male) so use 'his'. The repeated phrase 'I really we really' is redundant; restructure to 'We really like to gossip'. Use 'to gossip' or 'gossip' as noun phrase properly.

× We are usually talking with only one friend. She is my best friend because my personality is not sociable so I cannot talk with group I want to. I. Want to know only best friend details?

✓ We usually talk with only one friend. She is my best friend because my personality is not sociable so I cannot talk with groups I want to. I want to know only my best friend's details.

Use present simple 'talk' for habitual actions instead of 'are usually talking'. 'Group' should be plural 'groups' when referring generally. Remove the stray period and join sentence 'I want...' Also add possessive 'my best friend's details' to show ownership. Ensure sentence order and punctuation are corrected.

× I prefer to face to face communication because if I choose social media's friend, it was little bit scared and I think it is not comfortable. I think MMM real friendship is face to face.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because if I choose friends on social media, it is a little bit scary and I think it is not comfortable. I think real friendship is face to face.

Use 'face-to-face' as a compound adjective before 'communication' and omit extra 'to'. 'Social media's friend' is incorrect; use 'friends on social media'. 'It was little bit scared' has wrong tense and word choice—use 'it is a little bit scary'. Remove extraneous fillers 'MMM'. Keep present tense for general opinion.

× No I never argue with my friend, however I usually argue with my boyfriend because my boyfriend has difference opinion and I can say any anything that's why.

✓ No, I never argue with my friends; however, I usually argue with my boyfriend because my boyfriend has different opinions and I can say anything because of that.

Add comma after 'No'. Use plural 'friends' if referring generally. Use semicolon or period to separate clauses. 'Difference opinion' should be 'different opinions' or 'a different opinion'. 'I can say any anything' is redundant; use 'I can say anything'. 'That's why' is informal and unclear here; 'because of that' clarifies the reason. Maintain present simple for habitual actions.