Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition and improve sentence forms (e.g., use articles and correct word order).

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I usually use social media apps like Instagram and Snapchat because they are convenient and let us exchange photos and voice messages. Moreover, they offer privacy settings, so we can have more personal conversations.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and organize supporting details with linking words. Be specific about examples and correct repeated words. Limit to 2–3 sentences for clarity.

예시: We usually talk about our daily routines to catch up, for example what we did at work or university. In addition, we often plan activities together, such as going to the movies or weekend trips, and sometimes we discuss more serious topics like future plans.

제안: Use a clear topic sentence and correct grammar (articles, pronouns). Use linking words to explain reasons briefly and avoid hesitations or repetition. Keep it to two sentences maximum.

예시: I prefer chatting one-on-one because I am quite introverted and feel more comfortable sharing personal thoughts with a single friend. Therefore, I can speak more openly and the conversation feels less stressful.

제안: Start with a clear conditional sentence and use linking words to contrast options. Fix grammar and reduce redundancy. Provide one specific example for each mode of communication.

예시: It depends on the topic: if the issue is important, I prefer face-to-face meetings because they allow clearer discussion and quicker problem-solving. For everyday matters like arranging plans or sharing photos, I usually use social media because it is convenient.

제안: Answer directly and explain briefly with one or two reasons. Correct phrasing and avoid exaggerated or unclear expressions. Use linking words to connect ideas coherently.

예시: Not usually. My friends and I have similar tastes and often agree on most things, so disagreements rarely happen. If we do disagree, we talk it through calmly to avoid conflict.

× Definitely, I like chatting with my friends and of course it is the best way of communicate with your friends.

✓ Definitely, I like chatting with my friends and of course it is the best way to communicate with your friends.

Missing infinitive marker 'to' before the verb 'communicate' makes the phrase ungrammatical. Use 'the best way to communicate' or 'the best way of communicating'. Suggestion: use infinitive after 'way' or change to a gerund phrase: 'the best way of communicating'.

× I usually prefer to communicate with my friends by chatting in social media like Instagram and Snapchat.

✓ I usually prefer to communicate with my friends by chatting on social media like Instagram and Snapchat.

Use 'on social media' not 'in social media'. Preposition choice with platforms is 'on'. Also 'the' is not required before 'social media' in this general statement.

× It is very useful and privacy in social media so you can talk anything.

✓ It is very useful and private on social media, so you can talk about anything.

'Privacy' is a noun; the adjective 'private' is required to describe 'social media'. Also use 'on social media' (preposition) and include 'about' after 'talk' in this context. Suggestion: 'private on social media' and 'talk about anything'.

× Normally I like to chat with my friend about our daily routine and how we spend the day so we can catch up either the lives.

✓ Normally I like to chat with my friends about our daily routines and how we spent the day so we can catch up on each other's lives.

Pluralization: 'friend' should be 'friends' to match 'our'. 'Daily routine' should be plural 'daily routines' or keep singular with 'our daily routine' but consistency is better with plural. 'Catch up either the lives' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'catch up on each other's lives'. Also verb tense 'spend' to 'spent' fits past-day reference.

× Also we talk about plans to go to the movies and the weekend trips and sometime we discuss discuss important topic also.

✓ Also we talk about plans to go to the movies and weekend trips, and sometimes we discuss important topics.

Use 'sometimes' (adverb) instead of 'sometime' for frequency. Remove duplicate 'discuss'. 'Important topic' should be plural 'important topics' to match general reference. Remove unnecessary 'the' before 'weekend trips'.

× Mainly I prefer to chat with only one friend because I am a introvert person so I do not like to discuss something with group of people and I I not I'm not feeling comfortable with everyone and I cannot share anything with everyone so I prefer only one person to talk like.

✓ Mainly I prefer to chat with only one friend because I am an introvert, so I do not like to discuss things with groups of people. I do not feel comfortable with everyone, and I cannot share everything with everyone, so I prefer to talk to just one person.

Multiple errors: article 'a introvert' should be 'an introvert'. 'Discuss something with group of people' needs plural 'groups of people' or 'a group of people' and 'things' instead of 'something'. Remove duplicate 'I'. Use correct verb forms: 'I do not feel' instead of 'I'm not feeling' for habitual preference. 'Prefer only one person to talk like' is ungrammatical; use 'prefer to talk to just one person'.

× For me it depends on the topic because if the topic is very important so I prefer to communicate face to face because it is very important to solve the problem face to face and if the topic is not necessary in it regarding to daily life so I can talk with, I can communicate via social media.

✓ For me it depends on the topic. If the topic is very important, I prefer to communicate face to face because it is important to solve the problem in person. If the topic is not important and relates to daily life, I can communicate via social media.

Redundancy and incorrect connectors: do not use 'so' after 'if' clauses. 'Solve the problem face to face' is fine but 'in person' is more natural. 'Not necessary in it regarding to daily life' is ungrammatical; use 'not important and relates to daily life'. Streamline into two sentences and maintain present simple for general preferences.

× Of course not, my friend and I usually agree with the same topic and prefer same choices thing and we are very similar and she will know me better than me and I also know her better, so there is no topic of argument.

✓ Of course not. My friend and I usually agree on the same things and prefer the same choices. We are very similar; she knows me well and I know her well, so there is rarely any topic for argument.

Use 'agree on' or 'agree about' not 'agree with the same topic'. 'Prefer same choices thing' is ungrammatical; use 'prefer the same choices' or 'like the same things'. 'She will know me better than me' is wrong; use 'she knows me well and I know her well'. Use present simple for habitual truths and 'rarely' for frequency. 'Topic of argument' is better as 'topic for argument'.