Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and fluency: use correct verb forms and pluralization, and be more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Avoid articles and agreement errors (e.g., “chatting” -> “chat,” “my friend” -> “my friends,” “to sharing” -> “sharing” or “share”).

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We often share opinions about music and TV shows, especially new series we’re watching.

제안: Use correct tense and add a linking word for coherence. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then give a specific example. Replace vague phrases like “our own opinion” with “our opinions” and correct verb forms (“talking” -> “talk”).

예시: We usually talk about music and new TV shows. For example, we recently discussed the soundtrack of a popular series and whether the plot was believable.

제안: Remove fillers (“uh”), correct verb form, and avoid repetition. Use a clear reason with a linking phrase (e.g., “because” or “as”) and provide a brief specific example of ‘deep talk’.

예시: I prefer chatting one-on-one because we can have deeper conversations and really understand each other. For instance, my close friend and I often discuss personal goals and give each other honest advice.

제안: This answer is clear but could be improved with a linking word and a specific reason or example. Correct minor phrasing (“face to face” -> “face-to-face,” “others expressions” -> “others’ expressions”).

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see others’ facial expressions and body language, which helps avoid misunderstandings.

제안: Fix grammar and clarity: use correct tense and structure for contrast (e.g., “Although I don’t always agree with them, I respect their opinions”). Remove filler words and give a brief example of how you handle disagreements.

예시: No, I don’t usually argue with friends. Although I don’t always agree with their opinions, I try to listen and express my views respectfully, for example by suggesting we talk about it calmly later.

× Yes, I like to chatting with my friend.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friend.

After 'like' we use the base verb or gerund. 'Like to chat' or 'like chatting' are correct; 'like to chatting' mixes forms. Use 'like chatting' for natural conversational English.

× We like to sharing about our own opinion about music or TV show.

✓ We like sharing our opinions about music or TV shows.

After 'like' use gerund 'sharing' or infinitive 'to share', not 'to sharing'. Also 'opinion' should be plural when referring to multiple views, and 'TV show' should be plural if referring generally.

× We always talking about our own opinion about music or the new TV show.

✓ We are always talking about our opinions about music or the new TV shows.

The progressive present requires auxiliary: 'are always talking'. Also pluralize 'opinion' and 'TV show' for generality. Alternatively use simple present: 'We always talk about our opinions about music or new TV shows.'

× Uh, I prefer to chatting with only one friend because uh, we can have more deep deep talk and understand others more.

✓ Uh, I prefer chatting with only one friend because we can have deeper conversations and understand each other better.

After 'prefer' use gerund ('prefer chatting') or infinitive without -ing ('prefer to chat'), not 'prefer to chatting'. 'Deep deep talk' is unnatural; use 'deeper conversations'. Use 'understand each other' rather than 'understand others' for mutual comprehension and 'better' as correct adverb.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see others expressions.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see others' expressions.

Possessive form needed: 'others' expressions' should be possessive 'others\' expressions' (or better 'other people's expressions'). Also 'face to face' is acceptable; ensure apostrophe for possession.

× No, I never argue with friends because I think uh, although I'm didn't agree their opinion but I need to respect.

✓ No, I never argue with friends because I think, although I don't agree with their opinions, I need to respect them.

Incorrect past tense 'didn't agree' should be present 'don't agree' to match 'never' (habit). Use 'agree with' (preposition) and pluralize 'opinions'. Add object 'them' after 'respect' or say 'respect their opinions'. Also punctuation and conjunction: replace 'but' with a comma and restructure for clarity.