Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix grammar (e.g., "If I'm in a good mood" and "If I'm in a bad mood").

예시: It depends on my mood. If I'm in a good mood, I enjoy chatting and sharing stories with friends; however, if I'm in a bad mood I usually stay quiet so I don't say something I might regret.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence and then specific examples. Use linking words like "for example" or "usually" to organize points. Avoid filler phrases like "it's hard to give you a correct answer."

예시: We usually talk about our daily lives; for example, we discuss work or school, relationships, and recent events while having coffee.

제안: Begin with a clear preference and then explain reasons with linking words. Correct grammar ("sometimes", "privacy matters"). Keep it to two or three sentences maximum.

예시: It depends, but I usually prefer groups for general discussions because they bring different viewpoints. However, for private or personal matters I prefer talking one-on-one with a close friend.

제안: Give a clear comparison and use correct vocabulary. Use linking words ("on the other hand", "however") and provide specific reasons for each mode. Fix unclear phrases like "testing each other."

예시: I prefer face-to-face conversations with close friends because it's easier to discuss details and read emotions; however, for acquaintances I usually communicate via social media because it's more convenient.

제안: Structure your answer: state briefly whether you argue, then give a specific reason and resolution. Correct grammar and phrasing ("sometimes", "she's straightforward and criticizes me"). Keep it concise and coherent using linking words like "but" and "however."

예시: Yes, sometimes we argue, usually because my friend is very straightforward and can sound critical. However, we normally resolve it quickly by apologizing and talking things through.

× Actually it depends. Depends on my mood.

✓ Actually, it depends. It depends on my mood.

The second fragment 'Depends on my mood' is a sentence without a subject and verb; this is a sentence structure error. Add the subject 'It' to form a complete sentence: 'It depends on my mood.' Keep consistent punctuation and contractions as appropriate.

× If I'm on a good mood I will chat more about myself.

✓ If I'm in a good mood, I will chat more about myself.

The phrase requires the preposition 'in' with 'mood' (fixed expression 'in a good mood'), so this is an article/preposition collocation error. Also add a comma after the conditional clause. Use 'in' not 'on'.

× If I'm on a bad mood there I usually just keep quiet.

✓ If I'm in a bad mood, I usually just keep quiet there.

Incorrect word order and missing preposition: use 'in a bad mood' and place adverbial 'there' at the end for clarity. Also add a comma after the conditional clause.

× Actually, it depends. It's hard to give you a correct answer.

✓ Actually, it depends. It's hard to give you a single correct answer.

The original is understandable but more natural to say 'a single correct answer' rather than 'a correct answer.' This fixes sentence clarity and naturalness.

× We usually just like talk talk and also drink some coffee talking about our life, what's going on.

✓ We usually just chat and also drink some coffee while talking about our lives, what's going on.

Redundant 'like talk talk' is incorrect; use 'chat' (verb). Use 'while talking' to link actions and plural 'our lives' to match subjects. This addresses incorrect verb forms and plurality.

× Yeah, actually sometime I like to chat with group of people especially when we are discussing something and also if like more privacy thing, I only like chat with my one friend or my good friend.

✓ Yeah, actually sometimes I like to chat with a group of people, especially when we are discussing something, and if I want more privacy, I prefer to chat with one friend or a close friend.

Multiple issues: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb), 'group' needs the article 'a', 'more privacy thing' is ungrammatical — use 'want more privacy', 'my one friend' is unnatural — use 'one friend' or 'a close friend'. This corrects plurality, articles, word choice, and sentence structure.

× Actually they both are different.

✓ Actually, they are both different.

Word order and emphasis: 'they are both different' is the natural order. Original places 'both' awkwardly. This fixes subject-verb agreement placement and natural word order.

× For example if a good friend then we can like face to face and chat more about details.

✓ For example, if it's a good friend, then we can meet face-to-face and chat more about details.

Missing subject pronoun and verb ('it's'), incorrect phrase 'face to face' should be 'face-to-face' as an adjective or 'meet face-to-face' as verb phrase. This corrects pronoun omission and phrasing.

× If learn not as close friends. So we usually like just spend time on social media testing each other.

✓ If we are not as close, we usually just spend time on social media, interacting with each other.

Incomplete clause 'If learn not as close friends' lacks subject and verb; replace with 'If we are not as close'. 'Testing each other' is unclear—use 'interacting with each other' or 'catching up on social media' to convey meaning.

× Sometime I would argue with my friend, but after a while we back to normal because sometimes my friend she's very straightforward and just tell me that judge me.

✓ Sometimes I would argue with my friend, but after a while we get back to normal because sometimes my friend is very straightforward and just tells me that she judges me.

Multiple verb form and agreement issues: 'Sometime' -> 'Sometimes'; missing auxiliary 'get' in 'get back to normal'; 'she's' should be 'is' in full clause; 'tell me that judge me' is ungrammatical—use 'tells me that she judges me.' Correct present tense and subject-verb agreement.

× So it's make me like unhappy so, but after a while we are back to normal.

✓ So it makes me unhappy, but after a while we are back to normal.

Incorrect verb form 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with 'it' and 'like unhappy' is colloquial filler; remove 'like'. Also remove redundant 'so' and fix punctuation for clarity.