Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Habla con más naturalidad y concisión. Mantén una oración temática seguida de uno o dos detalles específicos, evitando redundancias (por ejemplo, “I really like chatting” y “I like chatting” se repiten). Corrige errores gramaticales pequeños (por ejemplo, "one of the most important person" → "one of the most important people"). Añade un ejemplo concreto o una breve anécdota para enriquecer la respuesta.

예시: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy chatting with my best friend Marcus because he is very supportive and always listens when I need advice. For example, last week he helped me decide whether to accept a new job by talking through the pros and cons with me.

제안: Mejora la corrección gramatical y añade palabras de enlace para mayor fluidez. Evita frases vagas como "just about everything" sin ejemplos concretos. Cambia "We just about everything" por "We talk about almost everything" y usa conectores como "especially" o "for example" para elaborar.

예시: We talk about almost everything, but especially sports and politics. For example, during the weekend we often debate recent football matches and sometimes discuss dating experiences and relationship advice.

제안: Corrige la gramática y usa vocabulario más natural. Reemplaza expresiones incorrectas como "I feel more comfort" por "I feel more comfortable" y "one people" por "one person". Haz la respuesta más breve y directa, con una razón clara y un ejemplo breve si es necesario.

예시: I prefer talking one-on-one because I feel more comfortable and can concentrate better. For instance, in a group I often miss details, but in a private conversation I can respond thoughtfully.

제안: Evita muletillas ("uh") y mejora la precisión léxica: usa "social media" (sin plural) y "I don't have social media accounts". Explica brevemente por qué prefieres el contacto directo y da un ejemplo concreto para mostrar preferencia auténtica.

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it's more personal and clearer. I don't use social media much; I usually text to arrange meetings and then meet in person to talk things through.

제안: Mejora la gramática y la naturalidad: usa contracciones correctas y frases completas, por ejemplo "I don't like to confront others" y "to keep the peace" en lugar de "to have peaceful". Añade una breve explicación o ejemplo de cómo manejas los desacuerdos para mostrar madurez comunicativa.

예시: No, I don't usually argue with friends. I prefer to avoid confrontation and try to resolve disagreements calmly; for example, if we disagree I suggest taking a break and talking later when we're both calmer.

× who is one of the most important person in my life

✓ who is one of the most important people in my life

The noun 'person' must be plural 'people' because the phrase 'one of the' refers to a member of a group; the noun after 'of the' should be plural. To improve, remember that 'one of the' + plural noun indicates a single item from a larger group: 'one of the people'.

× I really like chatting with him because he's very supportive and he always stands by my side

✓ I really like chatting with him because he is very supportive and always stands by my side

This sentence has redundant contractions and pronouns which are not grammatical errors per se but smoothing the verb forms improves clarity. Use consistent forms: 'he is' or 'he's' and avoid repeating the subject when unnecessary. Suggestion: '...because he is very supportive and always stands by my side.'

× We just about everything really, but especially we chat about sports and politics and sometimes we like chatting about relationships

✓ We chat about just about everything really, but especially about sports and politics, and sometimes we talk about relationships

The original word order 'We just about everything really' is incorrect. Place the verb 'chat' before the objects and include necessary prepositions. Also use 'talk about' or 'chat about' consistently. Improve by using clear subject-verb-object order and adding commas for clarity.

× I feel more comfort when I can chat with only one person because I can be focused on that chatting and not in a lot of chat at the same moment

✓ I feel more comfortable when I can chat with only one person because I can focus on that conversation and not be in a lot of chats at the same time

Use the adjective 'comfortable' rather than the noun 'comfort' after 'feel'. Use 'focus on' instead of 'be focused on' for a more natural active structure. 'At the same moment' should be 'at the same time'. Also 'a lot of chat' should be 'a lot of chats' or 'many conversations'.

× So I prefer chatting with one people instead of a group of bunch people

✓ So I prefer chatting with one person instead of a bunch of people

'One people' is wrong; use singular 'person'. 'Group of bunch people' is ungrammatical—use 'a bunch of people' or 'a group of people'. Keep number agreement: 'one person' vs 'people'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face

When used as an adverbial phrase modifying 'communicate', 'face-to-face' is commonly hyphenated to show the compound expression. Keep consistent formatting: 'face-to-face' is standard in written English.

× In fact, I don't have social medias like Instagram and Twitter

✓ In fact, I don't have social media accounts like Instagram and Twitter

'Social media' is an uncountable noun phrase, not 'social medias'. Use 'social media accounts' or simply 'social media' to refer to the platforms. Also add 'accounts' to clarify individual profiles.

× I like, uh, texting and then, uh, meet face to face

✓ I like texting and then meeting face to face

Maintain parallel structure: after 'I like' use the gerund form for activities: 'texting' and 'meeting'. Using the base verb 'meet' breaks parallelism. Also remove filler 'uh' in written corrections.

× No I don't. I am the kind of person that don't like confront others so I tend to avoid confrontation and arguing in order to have peaceful

✓ No, I don't. I am the kind of person who doesn't like to confront others, so I tend to avoid confrontation and arguing in order to have peace

Use 'who' for people rather than 'that'. Subject-verb agreement: 'person ... doesn't like' (not 'don't'). Use infinitive 'to confront' after 'like' when referring to an action. Replace 'have peaceful' with the noun 'have peace' or 'maintain peace'. Also add commas for clarity.