Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler (uh), correct verb forms, and limit to 3–4 sentences. Add one specific detail about what you listen to and when to make it more personal.

예시: Yes, I enjoy listening to music. I usually listen to indie and acoustic songs in the evening because they help me relax after work. For example, I often play a quiet playlist while reading or cooking.

제안: Answer directly and clearly with correct grammar and simpler structure. Use past tense consistently and give one brief reason or example if unsure. Avoid wordy, confused explanations.

예시: I don't think I had a specific hobby as a child. I enjoyed doing many small activities like drawing or playing outdoors, but nothing that I kept doing regularly.

제안: Be concise and maintain correct tense and word order. Directly answer and expand slightly with a timeframe or reason. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast past and present.

예시: No, I didn't have a long-term hobby from childhood; however, now I enjoy listening to music regularly. I started this habit a few years ago and I often listen to playlists during my commute.

제안: If you do not understand a question, ask for clarification briefly, but try to answer. Here, attempt a simple response about family hobbies or ask politely for the examiner to repeat before leaving it blank.

예시: Could you please repeat the question? / Yes, some of my family members like music too, so we sometimes share playlists and go to concerts together.

× Well, who doesn't have hobbies as my favorite hobby is listening, uh listening music because as it uplifts my mood and gave me relaxation from all the distractions.

✓ Well, who doesn't have hobbies? My favorite hobby is listening to music because it uplifts my mood and gives me relaxation from all the distractions.

Errors: missing preposition 'to' after 'listening' (Verb + -ing form with correct collocation), incorrect tense and subject-verb agreement with 'gave' (should be present 'gives'), run-on sentence and unclear connectors. Suggestions: break into two sentences for clarity, use 'listening to music', use present simple 'gives' to match 'is' and general truth, and remove unnecessary filler words.

× I don't think so I had any hobbies as in childhood the child number of things in which she or he likes.

✓ I don't think I had any hobbies as a child because children like many different things.

Errors: awkward and ungrammatical structure, redundant phrases 'the child number of things', incorrect pronoun use. Suggestions: use 'as a child' to indicate time, simplify to 'children like many different things', and keep sentence concise.

× So I don't think that I have any specific hobby when I was in the childhood.

✓ So I don't think that I had any specific hobby when I was a child.

Errors: tense mismatch ('have' with 'was' is inconsistent) and incorrect article 'the childhood'. Suggestions: use past tense 'had' to match 'was', and say 'when I was a child' or 'in childhood' without 'the'.

× As I already mentioned, I do not have any kind of hobby in my childhood, but yes, now I had one hobby that is listening music.

✓ As I already mentioned, I did not have any hobbies in my childhood, but now I have one hobby: listening to music.

Errors: tense inconsistency ('do not have' with 'in my childhood'), incorrect preposition 'in my childhood', wrong tense 'had' for current state, and missing 'to' after 'listening'. Suggestions: use past tense 'did not have' for childhood, present 'have' for current hobby, and 'listening to music'.

× Repeat the next question please.

✓ Could you please repeat the previous question?

Errors: 'next' is wrong in context; sentence is direct and slightly rude. Suggestions: use polite request 'Could you please repeat the previous question?' and use 'previous' because the examiner already asked a question.