Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Постройте предложение ясно: начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных подробности. Избегайте лишних фраз и неправильных предлогов. Работайте над лексикой (названия хобби и глаголы). Попробуйте связующие слова для плавности (for example, also). Практикуйте правильные предлоги (play the ukulele, play in Utah — непонятно).

예시: I enjoy singing, drawing and playing the ukulele. For example, I sing in a local choir and I draw portraits in my free time. I also practice the ukulele for about an hour each day to improve my skills.

제안: Начинайте с прямого утверждения в правильном времени (Past Simple). Используйте корректные формы глаголов и артикли. Дайте одну-две конкретные детали и причину, избегая длинных запутанных фраз. Используйте связку 'but' корректно и местоимения грамотно.

예시: Yes, I had several hobbies as a child. I used to play the guitar and the ukulele, and I really enjoyed practicing every day. However, my first guitar teacher was quite harsh, and he often told me I couldn't improve, which made me feel discouraged.

제안: Отвечайте прямо: используйте Present Perfect или Present Perfect Continuous для описания хобби, которые продолжаются. Уточняйте факт (which hobby) и добавляйте конкретику (how often you practice). Избегайте неправильных слов (pet teacher?) и неправильных предлогов/форм.

예시: Yes, I have played the guitar since I was a child. I have taken lessons regularly and I still practice a few times a week to keep improving, although I'm not an expert yet.

제안: Давайте чёткий ответ и приведите одно конкретное сравнение. Используйте правильные формы и артикли (my sister plays, an instrument called). Уточните, чем ваши хобби отличаются, и используйте связку 'for example' или 'for instance'.

예시: No, my hobbies are different from my family's. For example, my sister plays a traditional instrument called the dombra, while I prefer classical instruments like the guitar, which is more common worldwide.

× Based like a singing, drawing, playing in Utah, playing ukulele.

✓ I enjoy singing, drawing, playing the ukulele, and playing the guitar.

The student used incorrect verb forms and prepositions. Use 'enjoy' + verb-ing to list hobbies and include articles for instruments: 'singing, drawing, playing the ukulele, and playing the guitar.' Ensure parallel structure when listing activities. Suggestion: Use 'enjoy' followed by gerunds and keep items parallel.

× I'm so well, I don't know how to say it.

✓ I'm not very good at expressing it; I don't know how to say it.

The phrase 'I'm so well' is incorrect in this context. Use 'not very good at' to indicate difficulty with expression. Also combine related clauses properly. Suggestion: Say 'I'm not very good at expressing myself' or 'I don't know how to say it.'

× My vocabulary is really bad.

✓ My vocabulary is quite limited.

'Really bad' is informal and somewhat awkward; 'limited vocabulary' is a more appropriate expression. Use 'is' with adjective phrase 'limited.' Suggestion: Use 'I have a limited vocabulary' for clarity.

× I need to get it high so.

✓ I need to improve it.

'Get it high' is not idiomatic for improving vocabulary. Use 'need to improve it' or 'need to expand my vocabulary.' Suggestion: Use 'need to improve my vocabulary'.

× Yes, I have been a lot of hobbies when I have it.

✓ Yes, I had a lot of hobbies when I was a child.

Incorrect tense and auxiliary use. Use simple past 'had' for past states; 'have been' is incorrect here. 'When I was a child' is the correct time clause. Suggestion: Use 'I had a lot of hobbies when I was a child.'

× When I've been a child, I'm playing in the guitar and I played in the ukulele.

✓ When I was a child, I played the guitar and the ukulele.

Use simple past 'was' and 'played' to describe childhood activities. Do not use 'in' with instruments; say 'play the guitar.' Suggestion: Use 'I played the guitar and the ukulele.'

× First of all, I really like it playing in the guitar, but I have a the bad teacher who always say to me like you never play the guitar, you can't to.

✓ First of all, I really liked playing the guitar, but I had a bad teacher who always said to me, 'You will never play the guitar.'

Multiple errors: tense (use past 'liked,' 'had,' 'said'), incorrect article 'a the,' incorrect preposition 'playing in the guitar' should be 'playing the guitar,' and reported speech requires past tense and correct word order. Remove extraneous 'to' and use correct quotation. Suggestion: Use past tense consistently and correct article use: 'I had a bad teacher who always said, "You will never play the guitar."' (Here presented without literal quotes per JSON rules.)

× Here's I have the only hobbies when I got it from a childhood.

✓ I only had hobbies that I took up in childhood.

The sentence has incorrect word order and pronoun usage. 'Here's I have' is ungrammatical. Use 'I only had hobbies that I took up in childhood' to express origin of hobbies. Suggestion: Use clear subject-verb order and correct expressions like 'took up in childhood.'

× It's a plan on the guitar and I will repeat it.

✓ It's playing the guitar and I still practice it.

'Plan on the guitar' is incorrect; 'playing the guitar' or 'learning the guitar' is appropriate. 'I will repeat it' is awkward; use 'I still practice it' to indicate ongoing activity. Suggestion: Use 'playing the guitar' and 'I still practice it.'

× I have the pet teacher, I have a the pet lessons and now I played in Utah not so well.

✓ I had a private teacher, I took private lessons, and now I play the guitar but not very well.

'Pet teacher' likely means 'private teacher'; articles are wrong ('the pet lessons'). Use correct verbs: 'had', 'took', and present 'play' for current ability. 'Played in Utah' is incorrect—probably 'play the guitar.' Suggestion: Use correct nouns and verbs: 'private teacher', 'took private lessons', 'I play the guitar but not very well.'

× No, I don't have the same hobbies like my family members.

✓ No, I don't have the same hobbies as my family members.

Use 'as' or 'the same as' rather than 'like' after 'same.' Suggestion: Say 'the same hobbies as my family members.'

× For example my sister playing in a nettle now instrument, it's called Dambra.

✓ For example, my sister plays a traditional instrument called the dombra.

Use present simple 'plays' for habitual action and correct article 'the dombra.' 'Playing in a nettle now instrument' is nonsensical; likely meant 'plays a traditional instrument called dombra.' Suggestion: Use 'plays' and 'called the dombra.'

× I played in a classic instrument like everyone in the whole world can play in this instrument.

✓ I play a classical instrument that many people around the world can play.

Use present simple 'play' for current hobby, 'classical' adjective, and avoid 'play in this instrument'—use 'play this instrument.' Simplify comparison: 'many people around the world can play it.' Suggestion: Say 'I play a classical instrument that many people around the world can play.'