Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Говорите более естественно и избегайте повторов. Начинайте с чёткого топик‑предложения, затем используйте связки (for example, also, and) и конкретизируйте детали (когда, где, с кем, как часто). Следите за полнотой фраз и завершённостью мыслей; не оставляйте предложения незаконченными.

예시: Yes, I have several hobbies. For example, I enjoy dancing and attend weekly dance classes with my friends. I also play tennis about twice a week with relatives and friends, which helps me stay fit. In my free time I often watch dance performances online to learn new moves.

제안: Более точно формулируйте фразы и используйте правильные слова. Заменяйте разговорные или неверные формы (например, «tourniques», «tennisists») на корректные (tournaments, tennis players). Добавляйте конкретику: возраст, частота, эмоции или воспоминания. Используйте связки (for example, also) экономно.

예시: Yes, I often played tennis as a child and really loved it. For example, I attended junior tournaments and sometimes watched professional players competing at local courts, which inspired me to practise more.

제안: Используйте правильные грамматические конструкции времени («started playing when I was four» вместо «started playing since I was about four»). Добавьте небольшое объяснение или пример, почему хобби важно для вас, и используйте связующие слова для логики ответа.

예시: Yes, I started playing tennis when I was about four years old and I still play now. I find it exciting and physically challenging, so I usually play with relatives or friends at weekends to relax and stay healthy.

제안: Улучшите согласование глаголов и словообразование (например, «my father also really likes», «helps us»). Дайте конкретный пример совместного занятия и опишите, как это влияет на ваши отношения или распорядок (когда вы играете, что вы чувствуете).

예시: Yes, my father also really likes playing tennis, and we often play together on weekends. Playing tennis helps us keep fit and is a great way to relax and catch up after a busy week.

× Yes, of course I yes of course.

✓ Yes, of course.

The original contains a repeated fragment and lacks proper sentence structure. Remove the duplicate 'yes of course' to form a concise, grammatically correct response. Use a single affirmative phrase to avoid redundancy. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× I really like dancing and usually do it with my friends on our dance classes.

✓ I really like dancing and usually do it with my friends in our dance classes.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect with 'classes'; use 'in' for participation. Also this concerns verb + -ing used correctly, but the preposition was wrong (ID 8 and 11). Primary issue: incorrect preposition. Grammar Problem Type ID: 8 and 11

× Also, I'm really keen on playing tennis and I do it about twice a week with my relatives and friends.

✓ Also, I'm really keen on playing tennis and I play it about twice a week with my relatives and friends.

Use 'play' rather than 'do' when referring to the activity of a sport in present simple. 'Do' is non-specific; 'play' is the correct verb for tennis. Grammar Problem Type ID: 6

× Also, I want to say that I really often watch.

✓ Also, I want to say that I often watch tennis matches.

The original sentence ends abruptly and lacks an object; 'watch' needs an object. Added 'tennis matches' to make a complete thought and moved adverb 'often' to natural position. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× Yes, when I was a child I often played tennis.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I often played tennis.

This sentence is correct in tense and structure for past habits. No change required. Grammar Problem Type ID: 5

× It was the most interesting game for me.

✓ It was the most interesting game to me.

Both 'for me' and 'to me' can be used, but 'to me' is more natural in this context expressing personal opinion about interest. Adjusted for natural phrasing. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× Also, I usually went to different tennis tourniques where I watch famous tennisists in courts.

✓ Also, I usually went to different tennis tournaments where I watched famous tennis players on the courts.

Multiple issues: 'tourniques' is incorrect; use 'tournaments'. 'Tennisists' is nonstandard; use 'tennis players'. Tense mismatch: 'watch' should be past 'watched'. Preposition 'in courts' should be 'on the courts'. Corrected preposition and word choice. Grammar Problem Type ID: 11

× Yes, I started playing tennis since I was about four years old and I do it now.

✓ Yes, I started playing tennis when I was about four years old and I still play it now.

Use 'started... when' rather than 'since' with a past simple start. Also add 'still' for clarity and use 'play' instead of 'do'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 11

× In my opinion, it is the most interesting and spectacular game for me, so I usually play it with my relatives and friends in my free time.

✓ In my opinion, it is the most interesting and spectacular game for me, so I usually play it with my relatives and friends in my free time.

Sentence is grammatical and natural; no article changes needed. It correctly uses 'the' with superlative and definite reference. Grammar Problem Type ID: 22

× Yes, my father also really like playing tennis and I usually do it with him.

✓ Yes, my father also really likes playing tennis and I usually play it with him.

Subject 'my father' is singular, so verb needs third person singular 'likes'. Also use 'play' instead of 'do' when referring to a sport. Grammar Problem Type ID: 27 and 6

× It is really interesting activity for us and it help us to keep fit and relax after difficult walk.

✓ It is a really interesting activity for us and it helps us to keep fit and relax after a difficult walk.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'really interesting activity'. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular 'it'. Also 'difficult walk' needs article 'a'. Corrected articles and subject-verb agreement. Grammar Problem Type ID: 22 and 27