Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서
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Part 1
시험관
Do you have any hobbies?
수험생
Well, for me, uh, I have many hobbies, especially sports hobbies. While I'm a big sports fan, especially I'm a big soccer fan, so I uh, usually play soccer and I see it as my own hobby.
시험관
Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?
수험생
Uh, yes, uh, when I was a child at school, I will play basketball and soccer with my classmates. Uh, 'cause we have a, we have many P classes for, uh, to, to take part in. So, umm, I think schools gives me A.
시험관
Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?
수험생
Yes, I my, uh, I would say cow is my largest, largest hobby. Uh, when I was a child, I usually play toy car and when I grow up, uh, I would like to study cars for extend academic, uh, more nearly to physics.
시험관
Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?
수험생
Well, honestly now, 'cause my daddy isn't bus, uh, is a businessman, uh, which uh, and I have a bad mess, umm, schools and my mom, uh, is a fashion designer, which, umm, I would, uh, I don't like for fashion.
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총점
Part 1
Do you have any hobbies?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答要更直接和简洁，避免重复与犹豫词（如 uh, um）。先用一句话明确主题，然后用1–2句具体支持理由或例子，并使用连接词（for example, because, so）。注意语法（e.g. "I see it as my own hobby"不自然）。
예시: I enjoy several hobbies, especially sports. For example, I'm a big soccer fan, so I usually play soccer twice a week because it keeps me fit and helps me make friends.
Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?
점수: 40.0제안: 时态和句子结构有错误，要用过去时描述童年（played, used to）。去掉多余填充词，回答要具体说明什么时候、和谁、为什么喜欢。连接词可用 because 或 so that 来解释原因。
예시: Yes. When I was at primary school, I used to play basketball and soccer with my classmates after lessons because the school organised many PE classes and activities, which helped me stay active.
Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?
점수: 35.0제안: 回答含糊且词汇错误（如 cow vs car），表达不清楚。先给出明确主题句（Yes, I have liked cars since childhood），然后用具体例子说明如何持续（played with toy cars, studied mechanics）并用连词（when, so, because）连接。注意语法时态一致。
예시: Yes, I have loved cars since I was a child. For example, I used to play with toy cars and now I study car mechanics and physics to learn how they work because I want to understand engineering.
Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?
점수: 30.0제안: 内容混乱且表达不连贯，需先直接回答（No or Yes），然后具体说明差异和原因。去掉口头语并用完整句子描述父母职业与自己的兴趣不同。可用 because 或 while 表示对比。
예시: No, my hobbies are different from my family. My father is a businessman and my mother is a fashion designer, while I prefer sports and cars, so I'm not interested in fashion.
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