Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答案直接且自然，但可以更具体并加入连接词以丰富内容。可以说明喜欢阅读的类型、阅读频率或举例，以展示更多词汇和细节。注意将两句合并为更流畅的回应并避免过于简短。

예시: Yes, I do. I love reading because it helps me relax and unwind after a busy day; I usually read mystery novels or short essays about science, which keep me entertained and informed.

제안: 回答有主题句但语法和连贯性稍弱（时态和动词形式）。应使用连接词并具体说明活动类型与频率，例如“we used to hike”或“we often played games”。增加细节能使回答更自然。

예시: When I was a child, I often went to a mountain park with my friends, where we used to hike and play games on weekends; those outdoor activities kept us active and close as a group.

제안: 回答清晰且包含频率，但句子可以更自然连接并具体说明读书目的或类型。使用连接词如“so”或“because”能增强逻辑，并用更地道的表达替换“get some information and new knowledge”。

예시: Yes, I do — reading has stayed with me since childhood; I usually read twice a week because I enjoy learning new things, especially non-fiction books about history and science.

제안: 回答直接且对比清晰，但可用更自然的连接词代替“Well”，并稍微扩展原因或感受以显得更完整。例如说明为什么更喜欢独处阅读或与父母爱好不同的感受。

예시: No, not really. My parents enjoy hiking and other outdoor activities, whereas I prefer staying at home and reading because I find it more relaxing and it fits my introverted personality.

× I love reading which makes me feel relaxed.

✓ I love reading, which makes me feel relaxed.

句子本身语法正确，但缺少逗号以引导非限制性定语从句，使句子更清晰自然。建议在“reading”和“which”之间加逗号。

× When I was a child, I loved to go to a mountain park with my friends and did some exercise.

✓ When I was a child, I loved going to a mountain park with my friends and doing some exercise.

原句中动词短语搭配不一致：前半用不定式‘loved to go’，后半直接用过去式‘did’，导致平行结构被破坏。应该使用动名词保持平行（loved doing ... and doing ...）。建议统一使用动名词形式以保持结构一致。

× I often read twice a week to get some information and new knowledge.

✓ I often read twice a week to get information and new knowledge.

原句中“get some information and new knowledge”在英语中更常见和简洁的表达是“get information and new knowledge”。去掉“some”可以使表达更自然。如果要保留“some”，应为“get some information and some new knowledge”以保持并列一致性。

× No, we don't have the same hobbies. My parents love hiking and outdoor activities. Well, I prefer staying at home and reading.

✓ No, we don't have the same hobbies. My parents love hiking and outdoor activities. I prefer to stay at home and read.

原句“I prefer staying at home and reading.”并非错误，但在正式口语或书面语中更自然的结构是“prefer to do”而非“prefer doing”，并且将两个并列动词形式保持一致（to stay ... and read）。建议使用不定式短语以提高表达的自然度和一致性。