Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a complete, natural sentence naming your hobby and add one brief reason or detail. Keep it under five sentences and use a linking word if you add more information.

예시: Yes, I do. My main hobby is reading contemporary novels because they help me relax and improve my vocabulary.

제안: Answer directly in past tense and be specific about the hobby (or lack of one) and time. If you mention a season, explain briefly how it affected your activities and use linking words for clarity.

예시: No, I didn’t have a regular hobby when I was a child. However, during winters I used to build snowmen and read picture books, so I enjoyed simple seasonal activities.

제안: Clearly state whether you have a lifelong hobby. Use complete sentences, correct grammar, and give a short example or detail that shows continuity from childhood to now.

예시: Yes, I do. I have enjoyed drawing since I was a child and I still sketch every week, which helped me improve my technique over the years.

제안: Give a short direct answer then add one or two specific contrasting details about your hobbies and a family member’s hobbies using a linking word to make the response coherent.

예시: No, I don’t. For example, I enjoy photography, whereas my sister prefers hiking, so we usually pursue our interests separately.

× Yes, I have hobby.

✓ Yes, I have a hobby.

The noun 'hobby' is singular and requires an article in this context. Use the indefinite article 'a' with singular countable nouns. Suggestion: say 'a hobby' or plural 'hobbies' if you mean more than one.

× Uh no I don't have hobby when winter I was a child.

✓ Uh no, I didn't have a hobby when I was a child in winter.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' with past context 'was a child'. Use past tense 'didn't have' for past situations. Also add the article 'a' before 'hobby' and reorder time phrase to 'when I was a child in winter' for clarity. Suggestion: use past tense consistently and include articles and proper word order.

× I I have Hobby Lobby.

✓ I have a hobby: lobby.

The original likely intends to name a hobby. 'Hobby Lobby' is a proper noun (a store) and not appropriate here. If the student means 'lobby' as a hobby (e.g., model building in a lobby? unclear), treat 'hobby' as countable and use an article. If they meant a specific hobby name, provide it after 'a hobby:'. Suggestion: clearly state the hobby, for example 'I have a hobby: collecting stamps.'

× No.

✓ No, I don't.

While a one-word 'No' can be acceptable in speech, grammatically it's clearer to respond in full: 'No, I don't' to show the complete idea 'No, I don't have the same hobbies as my family members.' Suggestion: give a full short sentence to match the question context.