Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 总体回答清楚，但存在语法和表达不够地道的问题。建议： 1) 使用完整且自然的句子，例如将动名词和时态统一； 2) 用连接词使句子更连贯； 3) 提供一两句具体细节，说明为什么喜欢某个爱好或举一个例子。举例改进点：将“playing computer game”改为“playing computer games”，把“Especially enjoying audio editing”改为“I especially enjoy audio editing, because…”；将“taking orders through applications”改为“taking freelance jobs through apps”更自然。

예시: I have several hobbies, such as playing computer games, editing audio and jogging. I especially enjoy audio editing, because I can take freelance jobs through apps and improve my skills by working on different projects.

제안: 回答内容相关，但语法错误和用词不准确影响表达。建议： 1) 注意动词形式（enjoy → enjoyed）； 2) 用更自然的词汇（short video games → casual games）； 3) 使用连接词使例子与主题句衔接更好； 4) 可以补充一两处具体细节，如最喜欢的游戏类型或与朋友的活动内容。

예시: When I was a child, I really enjoyed playing computer games. For example, after school I often invited my classmates to my house to play casual games, especially racing games, which helped us relax and bond.

제안: 回答直接且连贯，但语言可以更自然且更丰富。建议： 1) 将重复表达合并，避免冗余； 2) 用更自然的词语和连接短语（e.g. I have loved… since childhood / It helps me unwind and improves my mood）； 3) 如可能，加入具体例子或说明频率来丰富内容。

예시: Yes, I have. I have loved playing computer games since childhood, and I still play them regularly because they help me unwind and put me in a good mood.

제안: 回答表达了意思但有明显语法和用词错误。建议： 1) 注意名词复数和主谓一致（family member → family members / we both like reading）； 2) 修正不自然的短语（we always sure some books → we always share/recommend books）并使用适当的动词； 3) 使用连接词并补充具体细节（如讨论频率或最近讨论过的书）。

예시: Yes, my family members and I both enjoy reading. We often recommend books to each other if they are interesting or educational, and we discuss the main ideas after finishing them.

× Yes, I have many hobbies such as playing computer game, audio editing and jogging.

✓ Yes, I have many hobbies such as playing computer games, audio editing and jogging.

名词复数与动词-ing短语：computer game 在此处应作可数名词的复数形式，因为表示多种或多次玩“电脑游戏”。建议把 computer game 改为 computer games。简洁建议：可数名词表示泛指时用复数。

× Especially enjoying audio editing because I can earn some money by taking orders through applications.

✓ I especially enjoy audio editing because I can earn some money by taking orders through applications.

现在时态与不定式/动名词的使用：原句缺主语和正确的动词形式，使用現在簡單時描述習慣或常態時應為主語 + 動詞原形第三人稱形式（I enjoy）。把 Especially 放在句首需要完整句子。建议改为“I especially enjoy...”。

× When I was a kid, I really enjoying playing computer games.

✓ When I was a kid, I really enjoyed playing computer games.

过去时错误：句子描述过去的经历，应使用一般过去时。原句用了现在分词 enjoying，需改为过去式 enjoyed。建议在描述过去习惯或经历时使用过去时，如 used to 或一般过去时。

× For example, after school I usually invited my classmates and friends to my home to play short video games, especially racing.

✓ For example, after school I usually invited my classmates and friends to my home to play short video games, especially racing games.

名词搭配与复数问题：short video games 后的 especially racing 表达不完整，racing 应改为 racing games 以明确为一种游戏类型；另外保持複數形式 games 與前文一致。建议明确名词搭配，避免单词残缺。

× Yes, I have. In my childhood I really liked playing computer games and now I still really like them.

✓ Yes, I have. In my childhood I really liked playing computer games and now I still really like them.

（此句已正确）描述过去与现在的对比使用过去时和现在时，符合语法，无需修改。说明：过去时 liked 描述童年，now... like 描述现在，正确。

× I think it can help me relax and put me in a good mood.

✓ I think it can help me relax and put me in a good mood.

（此句已正确）结构和时态恰当：can + 动词原形 help 表达能力或可能性，help 后接不带 to 的动词原形 relax 也是可以的。无需修改。

× Yes, my family member and I both like reading.

✓ Yes, my family members and I both like reading.

主谓与名词数一致：family member 为单数，但句意为家庭成员中的多个人与 I 一起喜欢阅读，應使用複數 family members 或者使用單數 my family。建议根据想表达的意思改为“my family members and I”或“my family and I”。

× We always sure some books if we think they are good and educational and we also discuss the main ideas of the book.

✓ We always share some books if we think they are good and educational, and we also discuss the main ideas of the books.

动词用法与冠词/数的错误：原句用 sure 是拼写或用词错误，应为 share（分享）；book 的数与前文一致应使用复数 books，因为讨论的是多本书；另外在并列句中加入逗号更清晰。建议牢记常用动词和名词单复数一致性。