Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and clear: state your hobbies in one sentence, then give one specific reason or detail. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., if you mean ‘traveling’ or ‘table tennis’, choose the right word) and use a linking phrase to add the reason.

예시: My favourite hobbies are cricket and travelling. I enjoy cricket because it keeps me fit and I like travelling because it lets me experience new places and cultures.

제안: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence about your childhood hobby, then give one or two specific details (when you started, who encouraged you, or a memory). Reduce hesitations and filler sounds. Use past tense consistently when talking about the past.

예시: Yes, when I was a child I loved playing cricket. I started playing at age eight with my friends in the park, and I remember practicing after school every day to improve my bowling.

제안: Give a clear yes/no plus a concise explanation: say which hobby continued from childhood, then give a specific example of how you still do it now (frequency, activity). Keep sentences short and coherent, and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: Yes, I have continued playing cricket since childhood. I still play for a local amateur team every weekend because it helps me stay healthy and I enjoy the team spirit.

제안: Answer clearly: state whether you share hobbies, then give one or two specific examples of a shared activity and why you enjoy it together. Avoid vague phrases and repetition; use linking phrases like 'for example' or 'so'.

예시: Yes, my family and I enjoy travelling together. For example, last year we took a road trip to the coast, which was a great chance to relax and explore new places as a family.

× Yeah, my favorite hobby is tabling and cricket.

✓ Yeah, my favorite hobbies are table tennis and cricket.

The original sentence has a singular noun 'hobby' while listing two activities; this is a pluralization and sentence structure issue. Use plural 'hobbies' and match the verb 'are'. Also 'tabling' is incorrect for the sport name; likely intended 'table tennis'.

× I like it.

✓ I enjoy them.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but the speaker referred to two hobbies; use 'them' for plural. 'Like' is acceptable but 'enjoy' is more natural for hobbies.

× This is tabling is a basically basically national view and especially movement.

✓ Table tennis is basically a national pastime and a popular sport.

The original has repeated copula and filler words and incorrect nouns ('view' and 'movement'). Correct the sentence structure: use a single subject-verb 'Table tennis is', remove fillers, and choose suitable nouns 'pastime' and 'sport'.

× I like it.

✓ I like it.

If the speaker refers specifically to one of the hobbies, 'I like it' is grammatically fine. No change needed unless referring to multiple hobbies (see earlier suggestion).

× MMM, basically I, I was a child, uh, child is cricketer.

✓ When I was a child, I used to play cricket.

Original mixes present tense 'is' with past context and has poor structure. Use 'When I was a child' and 'used to' to indicate a habitual past action. Also replace 'cricketer' (a person) with 'play cricket' to indicate activity.

× Ho ho ho ho.

✓ (laughs)

Laughter should be indicated in parentheses or removed in formal responses. 'Ho ho ho ho' is nonstandard in transcript corrections.

× I want, I want, uh, I want uh, cricket lab uh, uh, I have, I have no idea about it.

✓ I wanted to join a cricket club, but I didn't know how to do it.

Original is fragmented and mixes tenses. Use past tense 'wanted' to match childhood context and clarify 'cricket club'. Use 'didn't know how to' to express lack of knowledge.

× Basically, I was sad.

✓ Basically, I was sad.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable, but it is vague. To improve, specify why you were sad: 'I was sad because I couldn't join the team.'

× They enjoy movement basically different.

✓ They enjoyed different activities.

Original uses 'they' unclear and awkward noun 'movement'. Use past tense 'enjoyed' to match context and 'activities' for clarity.

× No enjoy basically.

✓ I didn't enjoy that period much.

Original is ungrammatical. Use a full clause with subject and auxiliary verb for negative past: 'I didn't enjoy that period.'

× Yes, basically I was I was traveling, traveling and cricket is my team dream and I I my hobbies I want, I want I want to basically avoid everything is enjoy in free time any.

✓ Yes. Since childhood I have enjoyed traveling, and playing cricket has been my dream; in my free time I like to do things that I enjoy.

Original repeats words and mixes tenses. Use present perfect 'have enjoyed' to indicate continuing habit from childhood. Clarify 'cricket has been my dream' and replace fragmented clause with a clear statement about free time. Avoid repetition and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?

✓ Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?

This question is already correct; no change needed.

× Maybe yes, my mother is traveling is like it and my father.

✓ Maybe yes. My mother likes traveling, and my father does too.

Original is disfluent and uses 'is traveling is like it'. Use 'likes traveling' and add 'does too' for the father to complete the parallel structure.

× I like it to bring in my whole family.

✓ I like to include my whole family when I travel.

Original pronoun use and verb forms are awkward. Use infinitive 'to include' and clarify 'when I travel' rather than 'bring in my whole family'.

× He's a traveling like it basically is not a hobby, but table is enjoy moment and basically use where this is releases enjoy and you finish new journeys.

✓ He likes traveling; it's not just a hobby. Traveling is an enjoyable experience that helps you relax and discover new places.

Original has many incorrect structures and word choices: 'He's a traveling like it' and 'table is enjoy moment'. Replace with clear subject-verb phrases: 'He likes traveling' and use nouns 'experience', 'places'. Use 'helps you relax' instead of 'releases enjoy'.

× We still enjoy like.

✓ We still enjoy it.

Replace the incomplete clause 'enjoy like' with a complete object 'it' referring to traveling or the activity mentioned. Ensure pronoun clearly refers to the activity.