Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap kısa ve anlaşılır olmakla birlikte düzensiz ve tekrarlı kelime kullanımı ve fazla dolgu sözcüğü (umm) içeriyor. Daha doğal ve etkili bir cevap için: 1) Konu cümlesiyle doğrudan cevap verin; 2) Hobileri mantıklı bir sıra ile, virgül ve bağlaçlarla ayırın; 3) Gereksiz tekrar ve dolgu sözcüklerinden kaçının; 4) Gerekiyorsa kısa bir neden veya favori hobinizi ekleyin. Örneğin bağlaçlarla tutarlı bir yapı kurun ve maksimum 5 cümleyi geçmeyin.

예시: Yes, I have several hobbies. I enjoy water sports such as surfing and scuba diving, and I also like reading and running in my free time. Among these, scuba diving is my favorite because it feels peaceful underwater and I get to explore marine life.

제안: Cevap karışık, mantıksal tutarsızlıklar ve dilbilgisi yanlışlıkları içeriyor (ör. "very young age" ve "very old age" çakışıyor). Net bir konu cümlesi verin, geçmiş zaman kullanın ve kısa bir gerekçe veya örnek ekleyin. Gereksiz tekrar ve çelişkili ifadelerden kaçının.

예시: No, I didn’t have many hobbies as a child except playing video games. I mostly spent time at home with friends, so gaming was the main activity I enjoyed back then.

제안: İyi içerik: spesifik yaş ve sebep verilmiş. Ancak dilbilgisi hataları ve biraz tekrarlılık var ("I have hobby I have had"). Daha doğal ifade için doğru zaman ve artikelleri kullanın, kısa ve akıcı cümlelerle bağlayın. Ayrıca "Cuba instructor" yerine doğru terimi (scuba instructor) kullanın.

예시: Yes, I have practiced scuba diving since childhood because my father is a scuba instructor. I started diving at the age of eight, and I still love it because it allows me to explore underwater life.

제안: Cevap başlangıçta anlaşılır fakat dilbilgisi hataları (özne-fiil uyumsuzluğu) ve tekrarlar var ("we love diving so much" iki kez ifade edilmiş). Daha doğal bir yapı için net bir konu cümlesi kurun, kısa açıklama ekleyin ve tekrarları kaldırın.

예시: Yes, my father and I share the hobby of scuba diving. He runs a dive school, so I often dive with him and we both enjoy exploring the ocean together.

× Yes, I have a lot of hobbies like surfing, skydiving and scuba diving and kite, surf, umm, read books, running. So basically yes I have a lot of hobbies.

✓ Yes, I have a lot of hobbies like surfing, skydiving, scuba diving, kite surfing, reading books, and running.

The sentence lists activities and should use consistent gerund (verb+ing) forms for hobbies. 'Kite surf' should be 'kite surfing' and 'read books' should be 'reading books'. Also include commas and 'and' before the last item for clarity. Suggestion: use parallel gerunds for all listed hobbies. Grammar problem type ID: 10

× I think no because I'm a very young age and my only hobby is playing games because I can't do anything because I'm very old age and I'm very youthful when I was a child.

✓ I don't think so, because I was very young and my only hobby was playing games since I couldn't do much when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense and incorrect age expressions. Use past tense 'was' and 'couldn't' to describe childhood. Phrases like 'very young age' and 'very old age' are incorrect here; use 'I was very young' and avoid 'very old age' which contradicts context. Suggestion: use simple past to describe past states and actions and clear age expressions. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Yes, I have hobby I have had since childhood like scuba diving and swimming because my dad is Cuba instructor and I started scuba diving when I was 8 years old.

✓ Yes, I have a hobby I have had since childhood, like scuba diving and swimming, because my dad is a scuba instructor and I started scuba diving when I was eight years old.

Missing articles and spelling errors: 'I have hobby' needs 'a hobby'. 'Cuba instructor' is incorrect; should be 'scuba instructor'. Numbers under ten are often written as words in formal writing: 'eight'. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: include necessary articles and correct noun forms. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× Yes, with my dad he is a scuba instructor and he have dive school and I like scuba diving so much so we both can dial and we love diving so much.

✓ Yes, my dad is a scuba instructor and he has a dive school. I like scuba diving so much, so we both dive and we love diving.

Subject-verb agreement: 'he have' should be 'he has'. Unclear verbs: 'can dial' is a misspelling and should be 'dive'. Remove redundant pronoun 'with my dad he is' and split into clearer sentences. Suggestion: ensure verb forms agree with subjects and correct verb spelling. Grammar problem type ID: 27