Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần tự nhiên hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Nên mở đầu trực tiếp rồi thêm 1-2 câu cụ thể không quá dài (tối đa 5 câu). Chú ý dùng mạo từ và chia động từ đúng (a movie / watching movies; watching a movie gives). Thêm liên từ phù hợp để mạch lạc (for example, so, which helps...).

예시: Yes, I enjoy watching movies because they help me unwind after work. For example, I often watch light comedies or short dramas on weekends, which allows me to forget my daily stresses. This habit usually helps me relax and sleep better.

제안: Câu trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng số ít/nhìu đúng (activities), đồng thời thêm liên kết nhẹ để mạch lạc hơn. Nên nêu một hoạt động tiêu biểu và mô tả ngắn gọn kết quả/ý nghĩa.

예시: Yes, I often played games and rode my bike around town with my friends. Those activities were fun and kept me active, and I especially remember racing my neighbors on sunny afternoons, which built my confidence and friendships.

제안: Cần sửa lỗi nội dung và ngữ pháp—câu ví dụ mâu thuẫn (haven't spent time → have spent). Nên mở rõ chủ đề, nói tiếp lý do và 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh câu gây hiểu nhầm, dùng thì phù hợp (present perfect: have watched/have spent).

예시: Yes, I have loved watching movies since I was a child. In fact, my family and I often spend weekends watching comedies or adventure films together, which has always been a way for us to bond and relax.

제안: Cần nhất quán thì (enjoy vs enjoyed) và mạo từ số nhiều (movies, weekends, films). Tránh lặp ý (helps me unwind / recharge) — có thể nói 1 câu chủ đề và 1 chi tiết. Dùng liên từ để mạch lạc.

예시: Yes, my family and I enjoy watching movies together on weekends, especially comedies and adventure films. Watching films with them helps me relax and recharge, and we often discuss our favourite scenes afterwards.

× I enjoy watching movie because it helps me unwind and by watching movie give me the chance to escape from reality and I also get the opportunity to temporarily forget all the pressures from my work.

✓ I enjoy watching movies because they help me unwind, and watching movies gives me the chance to escape from reality; I also get the opportunity to temporarily forget all the pressures from my work.

Sai la m9t: danh teb Fay nhaf phal daat sag (movies) hoac dang sag ch chuart 'a/ the' khi cant. Ngoai ra, chac ai phal sag 'they' v9i 'movies' v9i Aes-v. Suggestion: use plural 'movies' and match verb forms ('help' with plural subject; 'gives' with singular gerund phrase 'watching movies'). Additionally, add commas or conjunctions to separate clauses for clarity.

× Yes, when I was a child I often played handshake with my neighbors and rode my bike around the town with my friends. I love those activity because they were fun and helped me stay active.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I often played handshakes with my neighbors and rode my bike around the town with my friends. I loved those activities because they were fun and helped me stay active.

Sai lah: 'handshake' n1 phal ach hoac 'play handshakes' hoac better 'play games of tag/handshake' tuung cach; 'activity' phal sag sau 'activities'. Cac thang al ay used past tense 'loved' to match 'when I was a child' (past time). Suggestion: use plural nouns for repeated actions and keep past tense consistent.

× Yes, I have liked watching movies since I was a child. For example, I haven't spent time watching films with my family on weekends, and we usually choose comedies or adventure movies to enjoy together.

✓ Yes, I have liked watching movies since I was a child. For example, I often spend time watching films with my family on weekends, and we usually choose comedies or adventure movies to enjoy together.

Sai lan: mot cuc ong 'haven't spent time' khal nghia v1n sai voi cang. Cac tong dang thao 'often spend' phal phit hap voi 'since I was a child' trong hiAan tuc hay dang ai. Nang al sag gial: keep present perfect or present simple consistently; here present simple 'often spend' matches habitual action.

× Yes, my family and I enjoyed watching movie on weekend together, especially comedies and adventure film. It helps me unwind and by watching a movie it's a good way to recharge my batteries.

✓ Yes, my family and I enjoyed watching movies on weekends together, especially comedies and adventure films. It helped me unwind, and watching a movie is a good way to recharge my batteries.

Sai lan: 'movie' va 'film' phal dang sag 'movies' va 'films' khi nieu ac. 'on weekend' phal 'on weekends'. That ai thang thang thuc: verb tenses cần nhất quán; câu bắt đầu bằng 'enjoyed' (past) nên phần sau phải dùng 'helped' thay vì 'helps', và 'watching a movie is' (general statement) can be 'is' if present general, but to match past experience use 'was' or reframe; suggested correction uses past 'helped' and 'watching a movie is' changed to 'watching a movie is a good way' kept present for general fact or 'was' if referring to past.