Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Keep your answer brief and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect grammar (e.g. "I am is to play" and "at the when"). Also use more precise vocabulary ("video games on my computer" → "computer games" or "PC games").

예시: I enjoy playing computer games in my free time. For example, I often play strategy games on my PC because they challenge my thinking, and I usually play for about an hour each evening instead of going out.

제안: Give a clear past-tense topic sentence and add specific details about what you did and why. Use linking words to connect sentences and correct tense (e.g. "I had" not "I have"). Mention a brief example or memory to make it vivid.

예시: Yes, I enjoyed growing plants when I was a child. I learned how to plant small trees from my grandfather, and because of him I remember watering them every morning and watching them grow over the years.

제안: Answer in past-to-present continuity and fix grammar and word choice. Start with a direct topic sentence in present perfect ("I've had") and give specific details about when you started and how it continues now. Keep sentences concise and avoid phrases like "love it too much."

예시: I've had a hobby of making tea since I was a child. I learned the recipe from my mother when I was eight, and now I usually make tea for my family every morning because I enjoy preparing it for them.

제안: Give a clear direct answer and explain with one or two concise reasons using linking words. Use correct grammar ("I don't have the same hobbies as my family") and avoid long confusing clauses. Be specific about what you do and how they differ.

예시: No, I don't share the same hobbies as my family. For instance, I like waking up early to help with kitchen tasks and make tea, whereas my family members prefer to sleep later and follow a more relaxed morning routine.

× Yes, I am is to play the video games on my computer at the when I am free, I spend a lot of time in playing the video game in my home as compared to go outside for anyone.

✓ Yes, I like to play video games on my computer when I am free. I spend a lot of time playing video games at home rather than going outside.

Multiple sentence structure problems: extraneous verbs ('am is'), wrong word order ('at the when'), unnecessary prepositions ('in playing', 'in my home'), and incorrect comparative phrase ('as compared to go outside for anyone'). Suggestion: simplify into two clear sentences, use 'like to play' or 'enjoy playing', use gerund 'playing' after 'spend time', and use 'rather than going outside' for comparison.

× Yes, I have a hobby like to growing the plants in my childhood.

✓ Yes, I had a hobby of growing plants in my childhood.

The sentence mixes present perfect 'have' with 'in my childhood' which requires past tense. Also 'like to growing' is incorrect verb form. Suggestion: use past tense 'had' and the noun phrase 'a hobby of growing plants' or 'growing plants' directly.

× I learn from planting the trees from my grandfather.

✓ I learned to plant trees from my grandfather.

Use past tense 'learned' for a past action and correct verb pattern 'learned to plant' rather than 'learn from planting'. Also remove the article before 'trees' unless specific trees are meant. Use single 'from' to indicate source: 'from my grandfather'.

× He used to love planting the trees.

✓ He used to love planting trees.

Minor article error: 'the trees' implies specific trees; in general statement use 'planting trees'. The past habit 'used to' is correct. Suggestion: remove 'the' for general activity.

× Yes, I have a hobby since childhood making tea in the morning for everybody.

✓ Yes, I have had a hobby since childhood of making tea in the morning for everyone.

When indicating a continuous state from the past to present, use present perfect 'have had'. Also use 'of making tea' or 'making tea' as a noun phrase, and use 'everyone' rather than 'everybody' for slight formality; both are acceptable. Suggestion: use 'have had' + 'since childhood' for continuity.

× When I was 8 years I learned to make the tea from my mom and I love it too much.

✓ When I was 8 years old, I learned to make tea from my mom, and I love it very much.

Add 'old' after an age, use past tense 'learned' correctly, omit the article 'the' before 'tea' for general reference, and use 'very much' instead of 'too much' to express strong liking. Suggestion: punctuate with a comma and use natural adverb 'very much'.

× So I will prefer to make tea every morning for everybody from the child.

✓ So I prefer to make tea every morning for everyone, even when I was a child.

Original mixes future 'will prefer' with intended habitual preference; use simple present 'prefer'. 'From the child' is ungrammatical—likely meaning 'since I was a child' or 'even when I was a child'. Also use 'everyone' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'prefer' for habitual actions and express childhood timing as 'since I was a child' or 'even when I was a child'.

× No, I have not same hobby as my family members because my family members are not too prefer wake up early in the morning.

✓ No, I do not have the same hobby as my family members because they do not prefer to wake up early in the morning.

Use auxiliary 'do not' for negative present ('I do not have'), include definite article 'the same hobby', and replace 'my family members are not too prefer' with 'they do not prefer to' for correct verb and pronoun use. Suggestion: use 'they' to refer to family members and 'prefer to wake up' for correct infinitive.

× But I prefer to wake up early in the morning and make do our kitchen work and my family members usually to do go to the washroom and take bath and everything.

✓ But I prefer to wake up early in the morning and do our kitchen work, while my family members usually go to the bathroom to take a bath and do other things.

Incorrect verb phrases: 'make do our kitchen work' should be 'do our kitchen work'; 'usually to do go to the washroom' should be 'usually go to the bathroom'. Use 'take a bath' for idiomatic phrasing and 'while' to contrast two routines. Suggestion: use simple verbs 'do' and 'go', and natural collocations 'go to the bathroom' and 'take a bath'.