Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap doğrudan ve anlaşılır ancak daha doğal ve akıcı ifade gerek. Cümle yapısını düzene sok, gereksiz tekrarları kaldır ve kısa destekleyici nedenler ekle. Örneğin: neden okumanın rahatlatıcı olduğunu belirt (hikâyeye dalmak, dikkat dağıtmak), ve bağlaç kullan (because, so). Ayrıca cevap 1–3 kısa cümlede sınırlandırılmalı.

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially when I feel stressed or bored, because it helps me relax and forget my worries. For example, losing myself in a good novel calms my mind and improves my mood.

제안: Cümleler doğal ama tekrarlar ve belirsiz ifadeler (maybe, more happiness) var. Daha net karşılaştırma yap ve nedenleri açıkla; bağlaçlarla mantıklı akış oluştur (because, while). 2–3 kısa cümle kullan; "I don't like screens" yerine sebeplerini söyle.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because it feels more comfortable and less tiring for my eyes, while screens can cause eye strain. For instance, holding a physical book helps me focus and enjoy the story.

제안: Cevap belirsiz, kopuk ve dili hatalı; net örnek ve mantıklı yapı eksik. Önce doğrudan konu cümlesi ver (e.g. I need to read carefully when...), sonra kısa neden ve bir örnek ekle. Gereksiz ifadeleri (sorry, I don't know) çıkar. Bağlaçlar kullan (for example, because) ve dilbilgisi düzeltmeleri yap.

예시: I need to read carefully when I study for exams or read important documents because I must understand details. For example, I find a quiet place at home and take notes to make sure I don't miss anything.

× Yes, I like reading, especially when I feel stress or bored.

✓ Yes, I like reading, especially when I feel stressed or bored.

Use the adjective or past-participial form 'stressed' to describe a person's feeling; 'stress' is a noun. 'Bored' is correct. Suggestion: use 'stressed' and 'bored' to describe emotions.

× I feel more relaxed and happy than before.

✓ I feel more relaxed and happier than before.

When comparing two states, use the comparative form 'happier' not the base adjective 'happy'. Keep 'more relaxed' or 'relaxed' with comparative consistency. Suggestion: use comparative adjectives for comparisons.

× I prefer to read on paper because when I read on the paper I feel more relaxed and more happiness, but I don't like on the screen maybe.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because when I read on paper I feel more relaxed and happier, but I don't like reading on a screen.

Avoid the definite article before 'paper' in this context: use 'on paper' not 'on the paper'. Use the comparative 'happier' instead of 'more happiness'. Use the gerund 'reading on a screen' and include the article 'a' before 'screen'. Suggestion: say 'on paper' and 'on a screen', and use adjectives correctly.

× I need to read carefully. Sorry. When I need to read carefully I generally go to love places cause I don't know, but I'm really read carefully.

✓ I need to read carefully. Sorry. When I need to read carefully I generally go to quiet places because I don't know why, but I really read carefully.

'Love places' is incorrect — likely intended 'quiet places' or 'a quiet place'. 'Cause' is informal and missing a conjunction; use 'because'. 'I don't know why' completes the thought. 'I'm really read carefully' mixes verb forms; use 'I really read carefully' (present simple) to match the habit. Suggestion: use correct nouns ('quiet places'), full conjunctions ('because'), and consistent verb forms ('I read carefully').