Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid grammar mistakes (e.g., "refreshes" not "refresh") and redundancy (don't repeat similar ideas). Vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., "vocabulary" and "comprehension" are fine but present them smoothly).

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading a lot. It refreshes my mind after a long day, and I often learn new words and improve my comprehension by reading fiction and non-fiction regularly.

제안: Use a clear main sentence and give one specific reason with a linking word. Fix grammar (e.g., "enhances", "helps me to concentrate") and avoid unfinished sentences. Be specific about the benefits and give an example to support the opinion.

예시: I prefer reading on paper, although I use screens sometimes. For example, paper books help me concentrate better and retain information longer, so I read textbooks and novels in print whenever possible.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence and two contrasting specific reasons connected by linking words (e.g., "because", "whereas"). Correct grammar ("my mind stays fresh and relaxed", "in the evening I am busy"). Avoid vague phrases like "I guess" and finish the second clause clearly.

예시: I usually read carefully in the morning because my mind is fresh and I can focus better. In contrast, I rarely read carefully in the evening because I'm often tired or busy with chores, so I skim instead.

× Of course, I'm very passionate about reading because it refresh my mind as well as also provides lots of vocabulary and builds my comprehension skill efficiently.

✓ Of course, I'm very passionate about reading because it refreshes my mind, provides a lot of vocabulary, and builds my comprehension skills efficiently.

Subject-verb agreement and noun form errors: 'refresh' should be 'refreshes' to agree with singular subject 'it' (present tense third-person). 'also' is redundant with 'as well as'; simplify to avoid awkwardness. 'lots of vocabulary' is informal and vague; use 'a lot of vocabulary' or better 'a large vocabulary'. 'skill' should be plural 'skills' because 'comprehension' is a general ability formed by multiple skills. Suggestion: ensure third-person singular verbs add -s and match plural nouns when speaking about general abilities.

× Actually pretty much both, but mostly I guess enjoy.

✓ Actually, I enjoy both pretty much, but I mostly prefer paper.

Fragment and word order problem: original is a sentence fragment and unclear. It lacks a clear subject-verb-object structure. Reordering provides a clear subject 'I' and verb 'enjoy' and adds a contrast 'but I mostly prefer paper' to answer the question. Suggestion: always include a subject and a verb and place adverbs (like 'mostly' and 'pretty much') near the verb they modify for clarity.

× For example it enhance my vocabulary as well as helps to stay concentrate on the paper and.

✓ For example, it enhances my vocabulary and helps me stay concentrated on the paper.

Third-person singular verb form: 'enhance' must be 'enhances' to agree with 'it'. Pronoun and verb use: add 'me' after 'helps' and use 'stay concentrated' or better 'concentrate' as 'helps me concentrate on the paper'. Remove the trailing conjunction 'and.' Suggestion: check verbs for -s in third-person singular and ensure transitive verbs have appropriate objects (helps me).

× Actually in the morning time, I guess I read carefully because the mind at that time stay fresh and relax and when the in the evening time I stay quite busy with my hectic routines, so I don't.

✓ Actually, in the morning I read carefully because my mind is fresh and relaxed, but in the evening I am quite busy with hectic routines, so I don't.

Subject-verb agreement and verb form issues: 'mind ... stay' should be 'my mind is' (present tense third-person singular). 'relax' should be past participle/adjective 'relaxed' to describe state. Remove redundant 'time' after morning/evening and add 'my' to specify the subject. Also change 'I stay quite busy' to 'I am quite busy' for natural present-state expression. The clause 'so I don't' is acceptable but clearer as 'so I don't read carefully.' Suggestion: ensure correct linking verbs (is/am) and adjective forms when describing a state, and complete clauses when omitting actions.