Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid awkward phrases (e.g. "I'm very patient about reading") and grammar errors ("enhances my comprehension skill" -> "improves my reading comprehension"). Use correct collocations ("learn new grammar" or "improve my grammar") and singular/plural forms ("vocabulary" not "vocabularies").

예시: Yes, I do. Reading improves my reading comprehension and exposes me to new vocabulary. For example, reading short stories helped me learn idioms and different sentence structures, which I now use when I speak and write.

제안: Give a direct answer first, then provide specific reasons with linking words. Avoid fillers ("uh, I guess") and incomplete sentences. Use correct vocabulary ("vocabulary", "grammar") and be concise (max 3–4 sentences).

예시: I prefer reading on paper. It feels easier on my eyes and helps me concentrate better, so I remember vocabulary and grammar more easily. However, I also read on screens for news and long articles because it is more convenient.

제안: Answer directly with clear contrast using linking words (e.g. "in the morning... whereas in the evening..."). Correct tense and word choices ("I do my homework" not "I filled my homework"). Complete your final clause and avoid vague statements like "I can't." Provide a short specific example of when careful reading is necessary.

예시: I need to read carefully in the morning because I usually do my homework then and must understand instructions precisely. In contrast, in the evening I read casually, like browsing social media or light fiction, because I am often tired and short on time.

× Of course, I'm very patient about reading because it enhances my comprehension skill along with exposes me to new words and also helps me to learn new grammar style.

✓ Of course, I'm very patient about reading because it enhances my comprehension skills, exposes me to new words, and also helps me learn new grammar styles.

The nouns 'comprehension skill', 'new words', and 'new grammar style' need correct pluralization and parallel structure. 'Comprehension skills' is the common collocation (plural). 'Exposes me to new words' should be parallel with other verbs and not use 'along with' which disrupted the structure; use commas and 'and'. 'New grammar styles' is plural because 'styles' refers to various patterns. Also remove the redundant 'to' after 'helps me'. Improve by ensuring noun number matches meaning and keeping verbs parallel. Suggested practice: review countable vs uncountable nouns and use parallel verb phrases.

× Actually, pretty much both, but mostly I guess enjoy reading on paper as it offers numerous aspects that I find quite appealing, including, uh, it helps me to learn new vocabularies along with grammatical structure.

✓ Actually, pretty much both, but mostly I guess I enjoy reading on paper as it offers many aspects that I find quite appealing, including that it helps me learn new vocabulary and grammatical structures.

'Numerous aspects' is acceptable but 'many aspects' is more natural; main issues are 'vocabularies' (incorrect plural; 'vocabulary' is uncountable) and 'grammatical structure' should be plural if referring to different structures. Also the clause should be 'including that it helps me learn...' or restructure to keep grammar smooth. Remove filler 'uh' and ensure subject 'I' appears ('I enjoy'). Practice: study countable vs uncountable nouns and noun phrase parallelism.

× Apart from that, it also builds my comprehension skill and.

✓ Apart from that, it also builds my comprehension skills.

The original sentence ends with an incomplete conjunction 'and.' Remove the trailing 'and' and correct 'comprehension skill' to 'comprehension skills.' Ensure sentences are complete and avoid dangling conjunctions. Practice: read sentences aloud to detect incomplete thoughts.

× Actually, in the morning time I need to read carefully because at that time I filled my homework before going to school.

✓ Actually, in the morning I need to read carefully because at that time I finish my homework before going to school.

The verb 'filled' is incorrect in this context; likely intended 'finished' (past) or present habitual 'finish.' Because the question asks about when they need to read (habitual), use present simple 'finish.' Also 'in the morning time' is better as 'in the morning.' Use consistent tense for habitual actions. Practice: use present simple for routines and choose correct verbs ('finish' not 'fill').

× On the other hand, in the evening time I stay quite busy with my hectic routines. At that time I can't.

✓ On the other hand, in the evening I am quite busy with my hectic routine, so at that time I can't.

Use 'I am' rather than 'I stay' for states; 'routine' is usually singular when referring to one's schedule. The sentence 'At that time I can't.' is incomplete—can't what? Assume meaning 'I can't read carefully then.' Complete the idea. Maintain present simple or present continuous consistently for routines. Practice: always finish clauses—'I can't' must be followed by the verb or complete idea.'